A friend you can trust

BlackSnake

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What do you think about this one?

Tim goes over to his friends house who has been away for about three weeks. Tim knew his friend, Gary wife Linda was at home, but didn't want to disrespect his friend by going to his house while he was away. Linda answers the door and welcomes him. She is already dressed for bed, and so is Gary who is lying on the sofa. Gary tells Tim about his trip. Linda interrupts, asking Tim why he hadn't stopped by. Tim only replies that he knew that Tim wasn't at home. Linda goes to get Tim a beer. When she returns with the beer Tim notices her nipples are poking out under her PJ top. He tries to ignore what he saw, but it is on his mind as he lisens to Gary's story. Tim glaces over at Linda who is sitting directly in front of him. His eyes go imidately to her tits. He looks up and Linda is making eye contact with him, so he turns his attention back to Gary, but he keep stealing glances at Linda who is relaxing. Gary's story begins to sound like background noise as Tim notice that he can see under the leg of Linda's PJ shorts. It was a clear view to her pussy. He glances back at Gary who gets up for the bath room. Linda begins to tell Tim about things happening on her job. Tim continues to try and steal glances at her exposed cunt. Linda opens her legs wider and Tim's eyes are fixed on her pussy. When he realizes what he's doing, he looks up at Linda who is smiling at him. She look over her shoulder towards the bathroom as she pulls the leg of her shorts over to expose more of her pussy to Tim. Tim is totally captured. Linda rubs her pussy with her finger and inserts it. She moves her finger in and out of her wet cunt soaking her finger with her juices. She gets up and goes over to Tim taking the empty beer bottle from his hand. She takes her pussy laced finger and holds it up to Tim's nose and then to his lips. Tim opens his mouth and sucks her finger. As Gary returns from the bathroom Linda asks Tim if he want another beer. Gary asks her to bring him on too as he lays back on the sofa. Linda stands at the kitchen door out of sight of Gary, but where Tim had clear vision and opens her top showing Tim her tits. Gray is totally unaware. Linda returns with the beers and the three of them drink serval more beers. Gray get up from the sofa, and says he is heading off to bed. Tim announces that he is heading home, but Gray insists that he stay, to keep him from having an accident. Linda says she is not sleeply and kisses her husband good night. Linda and Tim talk about their jobs, and a little while later they hear Gary's loud snoring. Linda looks back at the closed bedroom door as she reaches for Tim's crotch which is now next to her on the sofa. She pulls out his cock and begins to give him an incredible blowjob. Tim cums in her mouth, but she continues to suck on his cock. She raises her head serval times to lisen of her husband's snoring and then goes back to servicing Tim's cock. She finally gets it hard again. She straddles Tim lap as she moves her shorts leg to one side to expose her eager pussy and guides Tim's cock deep inside. They try to be as quiet as possible as they lisen to Gary's loud snoring as they fuck. After Tim unleases another load of his cum, this time in her cunt she gets up. She leans over him and whispers "The next time he goes out of town come by and see me. It will be a lot better than this." She takes his hands moving them to her tits and then to her ass before heading off to bed.

Does this sound like a good story idea?
 
Blacksnake, if it's more to the story I think it would be a great story.

Linda and Tim have sex play under Gary's nose, or while he is close by nearly getting caught. Gary trusts Tim and asks that he look in on his wife while he's away. That's the way I think you're going with the story. I think a good conclusion would be that Tim's affair with Linda was plotted by Gary and Linda. They plan to have Linda come on to Tim and start an affair, because Gary don't want his wife to be alone while he's away and he also want her to have sex with someone he trusts, since he is having sex with another woman on his trips. Gary's affair is long standing, something Linda had agreed to long before.

I think this could lead to spin off stories or a series of shorts.
 
lexium said:
Blacksnake, if it's more to the story I think it would be a great story.

Linda and Tim have sex play under Gary's nose, or while he is close by nearly getting caught. Gary trusts Tim and asks that he look in on his wife while he's away. That's the way I think you're going with the story. I think a good conclusion would be that Tim's affair with Linda was plotted by Gary and Linda. They plan to have Linda come on to Tim and start an affair, because Gary don't want his wife to be alone while he's away and he also want her to have sex with someone he trusts, since he is having sex with another woman on his trips. Gary's affair is long standing, something Linda had agreed to long before.

I think this could lead to spin off stories or a series of shorts.

I was thinking somewhat like that. I was thinking that Tim and Gary would have a meeting of the minds over coffee the next morning while Linda would be in the shower. Gary would tell Tim that he knows he can trust him. Gary admits to Tim that if the shoe was on the other foot and Linda was Tim's wife he would have stopped by and made a play for her, and thanked Tim for being a friend he could trust. Gary rushes off to work before Linda gets out of the shower leaving Tim there. Tim is conflicted. He feels guilty about already having sex with Linda after Gary confesses his trust in him. Tim also wanted to go jump right in the shower with Linda and fuck her brains out. He had only had a small taste of her and he wanted more. Against the wishes of his hard on he leaves also before Linda finishes her shower.

Tim visits Gary and Linda after work, mainly because he couldn't keep his mind off Linda all day. Linda is wearing a black mini-dress with nothing underneath it and is on the hunt. She flashes Tim several times just out of sight of Gary. Tim's cock is threatening to burst out of his pants...
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:
Sounds to me like you already have the story written, you just need to fill in the details a bit! :)

What I would like to show is Tim and Linda having sex in the near presents of Gary without his knowledge. For instance, Linda is under the table giving Tim a blowjob while Tim is talking to Gary. Lots of situations like that.

I'm still looking at how I can work all of the situations in the story.
 
You can have Tim and Gary work together, and have Linda have sex with Tim at work while Gary is in his office. All guys want to fuck the boss's wife, hot or not.
 
Hi black snake I am with pretty_lil_stranger on this just needs the details filled in.

PLS your arse lookes beter all the time.

love lin :kiss:
 
I agree- lots of potential , however you decide it works best :)

I like that Gary trust tim, so asks him to help while away. Tim and Linda get together. when Gary reurns, they continue. works with or without gary secretly having planned it.
 
sirhugs said:
I agree- lots of potential , however you decide it works best :)

I like that Gary trust tim, so asks him to help while away. Tim and Linda get together. when Gary reurns, they continue. works with or without gary secretly having planned it.

This idea came to me last night. I went over a neighbor's house who had been on a trip. His wife's nice tits were poking through her top. I didn't see anything, but I was looking.

It seemed to be a nice fantasy.
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:
I agree, it's a nice fantasy. You shouldn't be fantasizing about your friend's wife, though. ;) :p

I think you should get to writing. It sounds like a fun story.

I did say neighbor...not that I don't like the guy, we talk at a very high level. His wife is a hottie, but not as hot as you pretty_ ;)
 
BlackSnake said:


This idea came to me last night. I went over a neighbor's house who had been on a trip. His wife's nice tits were poking through her top. I didn't see anything, but I was looking.

It seemed to be a nice fantasy.

did she know you could see? you think she wanted you to look?
 
sirhugs said:


did she know you could see? you think she wanted you to look?

She saw me looking, but she did indicate anthing. Actually it was at blue t-shirt she was wearing. Very nice tits, not implanted or anything. Totally braless.
 
BlackSnake said:


She saw me looking, but she did indicate anthing. Actually it was at blue t-shirt she was wearing. Very nice tits, not implanted or anything. Totally braless.

what did she do when she noticed?
 
BlackSnake said:


Nothing, but sit down and joined the conversation. I think she was just tolerating me looking.

what sorta view did she leave you then?
 
sirhugs said:


what sorta view did she leave you then?

Only the shape of her braless tits, and her nipples poking out. Like I said, I think it would make a great fantasy story if it had enough depth to it.
 
BlackSnake said:


Only the shape of her braless tits, and her nipples poking out. Like I said, I think it would make a great fantasy story if it had enough depth to it.

yes
similar stories are around, so you need a twist
 
sirhugs said:


yes
similar stories are around, so you need a twist

Exactly, not saying anything negative about all the great writting on Lit, but some or most are predictable. Everyone gets laid.

How about Gary not being in on the sex between Linda and Tim. Say that Tim has a wife also. Minimize Tim's wife appearance in the story at the beginning, so the main focus is on Linda and Tim. Twist it with Tim's wife and Gary in the end.
 
BlackSnake said:


Exactly, not saying anything negative about all the great writting on Lit, but some or most are predictable. Everyone gets laid.

How about Gary not being in on the sex between Linda and Tim. Say that Tim has a wife also. Minimize Tim's wife appearance in the story at the beginning, so the main focus is on Linda and Tim. Twist it with Tim's wife and Gary in the end.

like Gary and she secretly have had an affair for years, so this completes the circle? But someone needs to know everything, or the reader has trouble with being the only one in on the irony.
 
Why are you standing in the corner?

Sexy pretty lil stranger why are you in the corner? Did you do something naughty? Or did you say something naughty?
I wonder?
 
BlackSnake said:


I did say neighbor...not that I don't like the guy, we talk at a very high level. His wife is a hottie, but not as hot as you pretty_ ;)

yes, we all wish for a neighbour as hot as pretty;)

if so, they'd need to add a separate category for " Good Neighbour" stories
 
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