A few twists on an old idea

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I found that lately, when I'm picking stories at random, I tend to come across a recurring story set up.
Edit: Yeah, I've been on a bit of a taboo kick lately
You've probably read or even written a story like this.

The concept: Brother/stepbrother is stuck at home. Sister has friends over.

The idea branches for the first time here:

1. Brother is told to stay away or stay in his room.

2. Brother is actively invited to participate, maybe to get Sister's fried a date or maybe because she just feels sorry for him.


Brother at first is either apathetic to their presence and stays in his room, just ignores them, or gets involved, regardless of his or his sister's wishes.

The girls start doing something erotic out of nowhere (going topless, playing a game of truth or dare that goes from "kiss my feet" to "stick this in your pussy" in no time flat) and then the story can branch again:

1. Brother becomes part of things as a player

2. Brother becomes an object of the teasing/game. Maybe they're trying to embarass him, maybe they want to expose his inexperience, or maybe they want to see if they can get a look at what he's hiding in his shorts.

The story then continues until it reaches one of three conclusions.

3. Brother has sex with one or two of the girls while the others leave,

4. Full on orgy

5. Game goes too far and brother and one of the members (usually his sister) run from the event and then later hook up

There's mild changes, sometimes the brother is visiting his sister, sometimes it's just a platonic friend as opposed to a brother but the general idea is the same.

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So how can we spin this? I've got a couple of ideas but feel free to share your own.

1. Rule 63. True, double standards of porn allow for all women to at least be bi-curious while most guys are either straight, gay, or gay men who are fucking women until they can find some bigger guy to make them their bitch.

However, there would be something rather amusing about watching guys engage in either a bunch of coy teasing to embarrass the sister or some amazingly homoerotic dares or games ("All right Zach, I want you to fondle Dean's balls for one minute.") so they can tease or even entice a woman.

2. There's a good reason that brother/sister should not be around their sibling's friends. Maybe they're former criminals, maybe the friends are a coven of witches and when he intrudes on their gathering, he's turned into a slave, maybe they're werewolves, maybe they all have a huge pegging kink...or maybe the brother/sister is one of the above.

2a. Coming off that idea: Sis tells brother to stay away from party as she's trying to getting one of the girls to be more than friends with her and he agrees. The other girls decide it would be fun to embarass the brother she never tries to mention, only to discover that he is an Eldtritch horror. The sister sighs as her brother pulls her friends into a wave of gibbering madness that will swallow them whole and turn them into wretches of their former selves...but then finds out that the girl she liked wasn't among them and now she has her all to herself. She asks if her brother needs anything, closes his door and then skips off to her nervous but excited friend for a game of butterfly.
 
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2a. Coming off that idea: Sis tells brother to stay away from party as she's trying to getting one of the girls to be more than friends with her and he agrees. The other girls decide it would be fun to embarass the brother she never tries to mention, only to discover that he is an Eldtritch horror. The sister sighs as her brother pulls her friends into a wave of gibbering madness that will swallow them whole and turn them into wretches of their former selves...but then finds out that the girl she liked wasn't among them and now she has her all to herself. She asks if her brother needs anything, closes his door and then skips off to her nervous but excited friend for a game of butterfly.

Why do I always get the impression that you're Rod Serling returned from the dead?
 
*tosses away cigarette and quickly covers a bunch of paintings*

I have no idea what you're talking about.
 
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A few twists on an old idea
I found that lately, when I'm picking stories at random, I tend to come across a recurring story set up.

Loved the OP's sense of humour.

But continuing on EM's line of thought: You know what they say: "You only see in the world or the people around you, the things that interest you."
So, what other kinks do you have?;)
 
Hypoxia has a gun, is on his/her way home and has to fight off constant tentacle attacks .... and all they want to do is get home and eat a frozen dinner.
Hey, AFAIK *I'M* the designated dinner. Tentacles to the right of me, suckers to the left -- like a minefield that squirms and oozes. Sort of like Wash.DC.

(what a tough world Hypoxia lives in).
Somebody must. I volunteered. And what thanks do I get?

Back to the story. Sonny is told to stay in his room but that's okay, he already has the house wired for A/V so he can enjoy the proceedings, be they sexual, witchy, or vampiric. Little does he know that his network has been penetrated by bi-curious space aliens. They transform him into a worldly woman to monitor his reactions. Hilarity ensues.

Then the tentacles arrive...
 
Got another one. Bro is secretly a supervillain and the girls are either a group of supervillains who start talking about their favorite sky-scraper wrecking ally is, or a group of super heroes who wonder who that new dastardly never-do-well is.

EDIT: The Supervillain variant could have Bro having the awkwardness of his sister going on about how wet she gets thinking about him, coupled with the horror of her friend thinking a fun party game would be implanting a mind control device in him.

The superhero version could have the girls convincing his sister that it's better to tell her family about her secret identity, rather than not, so they drag the brother out of his room so she can tell him. Only problem is, one of her friends is an empath who wants to see what he thinks about the secret and probes his mind. So he suddenly has to come up with a bunch of thoughts to camouflage his true secret. Of course, given no prep time, he just starts thinking up sexual fantasies about sister's friends.

Complicating matters further is the fact that his sister's best friend, who is always ridiculously sweet, kind, and gorgeous...moonlights as a violent vigilante who pummels villains with her bare fists.
 
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Reminds me a bit of the movie "Push", in which Chris Evans was a mover and his girl was a pusher.
Cool idea.
 
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