A FemDom storyidea.

[CND]

I've had this idea of a story for a long time, and I have storyline with several ideas of details of the intrique. It's a FemDom storyidea, but I have come to the conclusion that I'm not the person to finalize this idea into a story. It would be much longer than any of the stories I have written, and would require some insight in the american justice system and the BDSM way of life.

It could be written from a male of female POV.

I would gladly share my idea in more details if someone is interested in writing it. It would begin with an innocent man accused of raping a woman, and even though he strongly believes in the justice system, he's found guilty and sentensed to...



Hoping this will appeal to some Literotica member.

 

[hazel43]

After being placed in prison, the accused rapist fights off a group of aggressive and sadistic prisoners. He gets caught by a guard as he throws a punch at one of these men. The accused is then placed in solitary. The guard in charge of him is a blonde woman. She is 5' 9' tall, about 180 pounds but has a muscular build. She forces him to.....

 

[CND]

Actually, the idea was

Actually the idea was that he would be sentensed to Community Service at FDR for a number of days. 30 days at minimum, but more likely 60 days. Thinking that FDR would be some school or other public place with a name based on a former US president, he soon finds out that FDR stands for FemDom Resort, where he's taken and used.

First days would be to break him, to also use him and remind him that men who rapes women gets raped themselves. The more days the longer the story, with greater possibilities to have him go through all sorts of happenings. Obedience is rewarded with a shortening of the sentense, while disobedience adds days. At no time during the first half of the sentense is he allowed to enjoy any pleasure, all while he's mentally torn apart with verbal and physical abuse. The writer would have the chance to decide if this would include torture or not, lack of sleep, and so on.

As he starts to find his place at FDR, he's given more training (instead of abuse), making sure he's turned from the innocent man he was to an obedient servant of women, who in return has the right to toy with him at any time, demanding the community services he was sentensed to, and tease his body.

Somewhere after three quarters of the time, he's forcefully pumped or milked in order to drain him and make him even more obedient, all while his sentense time is kept far from reaching zero.

Then one day, he's brought to a place at FDR he hasn't been in before, where he's told that he's sentense is over (to his surprise since he's been informed about how many days he has left) and that he is given a choice. To continue as a servant at FDR to a certain Mistress or return to normal life.

Apart from this storyline, I would like to see how the "trap" is revealed to the reader past halftime, about how the evident was planted in order to have him sentensed. Those details are something I have already figured out. I also would like to see FDR as a place laying partly under water, which would make thoughts of escape less interesting, and the involvement with some key persons from the legalsystem to have it all work. As a comment to his sentense being over, regardless his thoughts that he has many days left, would be: "We have to follow the law. We're not lawless or above the law." This comment coming from a certain key person who has been involved in having him sentensed.

Thus, to have female guards would be a logical thing, and to have them well fit and tall sounds good to me. All of them could naturally not be blonde, but instead each guard could have her speciality. Smoothering/facesitting, health inspection/nurse, and there's also a potential for a teasing sub who wants to pleasure him, but never going through with it.

As you all may understand, it's an idea which would require a lot of writing to make it work. With a 60 day sentense, it would be a rather difficult objective to describe each day differently than any previous days, but for a skilled writer it would be an interesting challenge to make him go through all of it and make his transformation come to live. I also know that I couldn't write this story, because it would require more from me than I have. That is why I came to the decision to suggest it here in the Story Idea forum.

Thank you all for listening, and if someone is interested, just post that interest here or mail me. I'll be glad to share more of the details that I have come to think of so far. It will also be interesting for ME to see this story come to live by another writer, and see how it developes.