I have just had my first story published on Literotica. I would like to get some feedback. The link to the first story of the six part series is below. They haven't published the conclusion yet. I have another series that I am currently working on. Thanks for any feedback--whatever it may be. I am trying to get better. Thanks a bunch.
8Seconds
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=174401
8Seconds
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=174401
