A Feedback Question

[RazeByFire]

I need someone to answer me a question about my fic. I have written six stories. I like them all, some more than others, but I don't know why I seem to get so much more feedback about this one story. It wasn't the first I wrote, but it was the first with straight m/f sex. I wrote it as a challenge to myself and as a favor to a woman I wanted to get to know better. It's called, simply, 'A Fantasy For Her'. Can someone please tell me why this one story is so much better than the others? I appreciate any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism anyone can provide.
RazeByFire

 

[thumbs2_ca]

I will read your stories and see if I can shed some light on it for you. You should however be thankful you got some feedback. I have three so far and cannot get any feedback. At first I was disapointed but I figure what the hell I enjoy writing them and they are getting read so I will keep writing them and hopefully get better doing it.
I will drop you a note when I am done reading them.
Take care

 

[Weird Harold]

Can someone please tell me why this one story is so much better than the others? I appreciate any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism anyone can provide.

The link to your author's page helps:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=24315

Without reading your story, I can offer one obsvervation: You got more feedback because this story touched something in people who read it -- Something that th others didn't touch.

It was probably the plot or characterization as much as any difference in your writing style.

If you did anything different as far as your writing style that made your story more readable then that too can make a big difference in the amount of feedback you get. A story that is easy to read is also easier to get emotionally involved in. Emotional involvement is what prompts enough feeling about a story to send feedback.