A day in the life a dog’s life.

[MsLinnet]

This might sound stupid and it probably is stupid.

But I was thinking what Max (My Dog) thinks about as he sees every thing that happens in my household. He sees me make love to Mell my girlfriend and sees us in various states of undress and we don’t seem to mind.

What if it was him relating the story.

I am planing to write this one just to see if I could do it should be fun don't you think?

Luv N Stuff

Linnet

 

[MrFrost]

But I was thinking what Max (My Dog) thinks about as he sees every thing that happens in my household. He sees me make love to Mell my girlfriend and sees us in various states of undress and we don’t seem to mind.

What if it was him relating the story.

I am planing to write this one just to see if I could do it should be fun don't you think?

Luv N Stuff

Linnet

Well it could be a pretty good story if done right... Maybe something like this.

Max Our Dog

I thought today would be just another lazy day of sniffing asses and licking my crouch but to my surprise i got to see something that i havent ever seen before. My mother and father mating ! It all started when .....

( just an idea.... )

 

[Guest]

lol Too funny, Frost.

 

[MrFrost]

lol Too funny, Frost.

 

[Guest]

 

[MsLinnet]

Re: Re: A day in the life a dog’s life.

Well it could be a pretty good story if done right... Maybe something like this.

Max Our Dog

I thought today would be just another lazy day of sniffing asses and licking my crouch but to my surprise i got to see something that i havent ever seen before. My mother and father mating ! It all started when .....

( just an idea.... )

You have the idea

It would be a true animal story

 

[Sabledrake]

Interesting idea. I recommend Dean Koontz for examples of dog-POV (lord knows the man's had enough practice!)

Sabledrake

 

[Tatewaki]

A Serious Question ...

Does anyone truly find the idea of an erotic story written from an animal's POV titillating? Watching people fuck like bunnies is one thing. Hell, even the thoughts of a bunny watching its human owners fuck like bunnies could make for an amusing story. But I really can't get into a story from a kit's POV watching his buck and doe parents -- or any other male and female rabbit, for that matter -- going at it hot and heavy. An X-Rated Watership Down wouldn't get me hard.

Besides novelty, what would be the sexual allure in such a story? What are the conventions? What makes it 'work?'

-T

 

[Guest]

Re: A Serious Question ...

Does anyone truly find the idea of an erotic story written from an animal's POV titillating?

No.

 

[MsLinnet]

See The Funny Side

The general idea was to be on the funny side of what sex would look like from the dogs eye view

ok if no one likes it i won't post it

Luv N Stuff

Linnet

 

[Guest]

Re: A Serious Question ...

Does anyone truly find the idea of an erotic story written from an animal's POV titillating?

Why does it have to be titillating? I, for one, read and enjoy stories which are not titillating, especially if they are funny!

It could start:

"My name is Sit, or sometimes Damdog."

 

[Tatewaki]

Re: See The Funny Side

The general idea was to be on the funny side of what sex would look like from the dogs eye view

ok if no one likes it i won't post it

Luv N Stuff

Linnet

Linnet

Don't let my opinion or the opinions of anyone ever put you off of a project. Write what you feel. Post when you're done (If you wish!) We all may be pleasantly surprised. Opinions can be changed.

Warmest,

-T

 

[Tatewaki]

Re: Re: A Serious Question ...

Why does it have to be titillating? I, for one, read and enjoy stories which are not titillating, especially if they are funny!

As do I, Charm, but the razor I use to separate Erotica from other writing, whether they include steamy sex or not, is to determine if the story's prime purpose is to stimulate arousal. If it isn't I reclass it.

I'm not saying that a person has to sport an erection or soak their panties due to every tale they read, but I feel that this should be the aim of Erotica. I imagine that many of the readers who come to Literotica expect the same thing.

Welcome back, by the way! I've not seen you post in a bit.

Cheers!

-T

 

[Guest]

I'm not saying that a person has to sport an erection or soak their panties due to every tale they read, but I feel that this should be the aim of Erotica. I imagine that many of the readers who come to Literotica expect the same thing.

I agree. This is a site with a specific "goal". It's not a horror site, it's not a humor site. It's a site for erotic literature. (Be it romantic, pornographic, kinky, or 'nilla.)

 

[MsLinnet]

I agree. This is a site with a specific "goal". It's not a horror site, it's not a humor site. It's a site for erotic literature. (Be it romantic, pornographic, kinky, or 'nilla.)

Hi Tiggs

Are you saying just because something has to be Erotic or Romantic for this site it can not also be from a humorous point of view.

If thats your point of view, could you explain this please?

http://www.literotica.com/stories/stories_by_category.php?category=34&page=3

Luv N Stuf

Linnet

 

[Guest]

P.S.

If Laurel "fears" the story has even the slightest bestiality nature to it (she threw my masturbation/fantasy story over to Extreme/Non Human) she will throw it in Extreme instead of letting it go to "Non Erotic".

 

[MsLinnet]

Re: P.S.

If Laurel "fears" the story has even the slightest bestiality nature to it (she threw my masturbation/fantasy story over to Extreme/Non Human) she will throw it in Extreme instead of letting it go to "Non Erotic".

http://www.literotica.com/stories/stories_by_category.php?category=14&page=5

I do not follow what your saying, isnt the above link on lit E ?

 

[Sabledrake]

Hmm ... that pretty much answers my concern about "Infernal" ... gory sacrifices aside, the bit with the dog would therefore be enough to ensure it an Extreme placing (would that apply to Novellas too, or would it go into that category?)

Sabledrake

 

[Tatewaki]

Hi Tiggs

Are you saying just because something has to be Erotic or Romantic for this site it can not also be from a humorous point of view.

If thats your point of view, could you explain this please?

http://www.literotica.com/stories/stories_by_category.php?category=34&page=3

Luv N Stuf

Linnet

I'm not tiggs, but I can answer this one. All non-erotic focus stories will be placed in the Non-Erotic category. You can check it out at the link below:

Non-Erotic

Cheers!

-T

 

[Guest]

The bit with the dog would therefore be enough to ensure it an Extreme placing (would that apply to Novellas too, or would it go into that category?)

Anything with a hint of bestiality (or violent rape or necrophilia) will go to the Extreme section even if you "tried" to write it for a specific category.

 

[Guest]

Tate,

After reading your post quoting Linnet, I went back to read hers... Why does her link go to "regular" Non Human and yours goes to the humor section?

 

[Tatewaki]

Tate,

After reading your post quoting Linnet, I went back to read hers... Why does her link go to "regular" Non Human and yours goes to the humor section?

I quoted Linnet's message that was 4 posts above mine, not 2 posts above mine. Both those point to the same place. (3rd page of Humour and Satire.) The hypertext link I embedded in my message goes to Non-Erotic.

-T

 

[MsLinnet]

my dog story

It is going to be an erotic story but from the point of view of a pet not necessarily a canine sex story.

along these lines:

I moved in with my new bitch several moons ago now and I seem to be getting on well with these two legged bread of dogs.

My name is Maxwell (Max) I am a 2 year old German Shepard, my prime bitch is Linnet she lives with two other two legged bitches, Mell who lies with Linnet and Julia who lie’s in a different kennel. Julia is loan bitch and is not part of the pack but she has a two legged male who mounts her every time he visits.

The two legs seem to mate in different ways and I have found that my prime bitch seems to like me to mount her in different ways, not the same as us four legs, what a strange bread they are.

It was in the dark time that I heard a noise, I knew that both my prime and second bitch were bedded down but I was not sure about the loan bitch so I padded down the passage way to her kennel and pushed my snout against the hatch, as it opened I could see her head and her front paws above the covering on her nest so what was the thing making the noises.

I slowly padded down the stairs and the hairs on my back stood up, as the front hatch to the kennel the two legs call home opened, I started to growl and snarl at the figure coming from out of the dark. What was it and why was he invading my kennel.

I saw the quick daylight come on up the stairs, I barked to tell my bitches not to come down the stairs but the two legs as usual ignored my warning. The two leg, that was coming in through the main hatch to our kennel stopped in his track obviously understanding my warning. He barked in the two legs tongue and my prime Linnet seemed to understand the noises he was making and gave me the signal to be quite and I sat on my hind quarters but still on my guard.

 

[Guest]

I quoted Linnet's message that was 4 posts above mine, not 2 posts above mine. Both those point to the same place. (3rd page of Humour and Satire.) The hypertext link I embedded in my message goes to Non-Erotic.

-T

Still, when I clicked to open her post, it took me to Non Human. When she was asking me what her link meant or whatever...

 

[Amfig]

Try this

Posted in Humor & Satire

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=45036