Miltone
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OOC: Would she die the way she lived—hard and fast? The first murder was called an accident. Peter Cavanaugh had gone swimming and never came back. “Accidental Drowning,” they had said. Such a shame! Just a month before his 21st birthday—when he would come into his million-dollar inheritance. But there would be no mistake the second time. Sylvia Cavanaugh had just been threatened, just a month before her 21st birthday—when she would come into her inheritance. Somebody obviously wanted to be twice as rich.
But then Sylvia shows up on my doorstep in the wee hours, drunk and alone and needing my help. With her clear blue eyes and swirling honey-blonde hair and her trim young body, she crawled under my skin. I knew that she would make it my job to find out who was after her … and that was enough to keep me from letting this young beauty down—even if she might end up too dead to care …
Please feel free to read along as DangerousDarkEyes and Yours Truly tell the tale of a beautiful young rich girl whose life has just been threatened and an older jaded down-on-his-luck PI in a film noir story set in a large city of the mid 1950’s.
IC: Vince Latimer, PI
She was young and very beautiful. And very drunk.
“They’re going to kill me,” she said, her slender body swaying side-to-side in the dim yellow light of the streetlamp. The fur cape wrapped loosely around her shoulders slipped down on one side, revealing a lean stretch of clear silky skin.
I looked up and down at the noiseless city streets. No headlights, no burbling sound of exhaust, no shadows moving in the still night. Arriving home from a failed stakeout at 2 a.m. to find a lovely if glassy-eyed stranger on my doorstep doesn’t happen to me every night of the week, so I’m no expert at handling them. Especially if they are young and beautiful and as vulnerable as this doll seemed to be.
“Who’s going to kill you, honey?”
She waved with a limp slender hand. “That’s what you’re s’posed to find out. Hirin’ you right now to find out who’s going to kill me.”
This was too much. I laughed, not out loud but enough that she would have heard it—if she had been the least little bit sober. If she knew who was going to kill her then fine. Maybe we could do some business. But this was no hour for guessing games—not even with a doll like this. And then I looked at her eyes. Under the blueness and alcohol was fear, real fear. Then I felt that sappy warm feeling percolate inside my belly and knew I couldn’t turn her out. Not tonight. “Come on in,” I said begrudgingly. “I’ll make some coffee and we’ll talk it over.”
When she tripped climbing up the single flight of stairs, I reached for her arm. She tried to wave me off, but when I took a firm hold of her, she glanced up at me.
“Thanks,” she said, lucid for just a brief moment.
I slipped the key into the lock and opened the door. The girl sashayed inside like she owned the place, like she had been here before, more than once. The scent of her perfume was as intoxicating as the clear moonlit night sky. All blue eyes gleaming and creamy pale skin glowing as she passed by me. I snapped on the floor lamp and watched as she collapsed onto my favorite armchair, and for the moment, I didn’t know what to do but play along. Following her drifting scent, I went to the kitchen, turned on the gas and got the coffee brewing. A few minutes later, when I carried two hot cups of Joe out to the living room, I half expected to see her gone, but she wasn’t. She slumped back in the armchair like it belonged to her, gazing vacantly at the opposite wall.
“Cezanne, isn’t it?” she said absently, her eyes heavy lidded and lowering.
“Yeah,” I replied, my interest piqued by her interest in my favorite print that hung proudly on the wall.
“So mush better in the original,” she commented, her words slurred slovenly.
“Look, honey, it’s late and this happens to be my apartment, not my office.”
“You’re a private inveshtigator, aren’t you? Y’name’s Vince Latimer, isn’t it?”
“Sure, that’s me, honey, and tell you what. You finish your coffee there and be on your way. You can come down to my office tomorrow and we’ll talk it all over. How’s that?”
Not good enough, apparently. She shook her sleek little honey-colored head and waggled an unsteady forefinger in my general direction. “Can’t wait. My birthday’s next month.”
“Happy birthday,” I said; and then, against my better judgment, added warily, “What’s that got to do with it?”
She leaned forward and attempted to bring me into focus long enough to deliver a patient and weightily mysterious look. “Well—it happened to Peter just before his birthday, didden it?” she asked solemnly.
This was getting too complicated to be worth the effort. Peter—whomever the fuck he was—didn’t even matter. I was tired and wanted to get to bed. I smothered my third yawn.
“I wouldn’t know, honey. Now listen, be a good girl. This isn’t getting us anywhere. You go home and sleep it off and we’ll talk about it tomorrow, huh?”
“Wait—” She opened her purse and began fumbling through its contents. “Money,” she announced grandly, “ ‘s no objeck—no objeck atall.”
Apparently it wasn’t. Because the purse suddenly slipped from her lap and as it fell bills went sailing in every direction. Lots and lots and lots of bills.
Fuck! Good old honest Vince. That’s me. I knelt down and retrieved all that alluring lettuce and wadded it back into her purse and put the purse firmly back in her hands.
“Honey,” I said. “I’m just not for hire tonight. Get that through your pretty little bean, will you? If you want to talk business, see me tomorrow.” I took hold of her arm and hoisted her to her feet. “Come on now—you’re going home.”
“Home?” she asked her voice dull and confused.
“You’ve got one, haven’t you?” You know—a place where you live. House, apartment, room, hovel—”
The hovel was pretty unlikely. Looks, clothes, the dough in her purse, and something indefinable in her manner despite the alcoholic shape she was in—it all smacked of money, lots of money.
She stood there, swaying uncertainly, looking around like I’d disappeared. One strap of her turquoise evening gown slipped down a creamy shoulder, and for a minute events promised to be more revealing, but she hitched it up in time. I retrieved the fur cape she’d let slide to the floor and put it around her shoulders.
She made another try at locating me and bringing me into focus. “Don’t want the job, huh?”
“Not tonight, honey.”
I wasn’t sure that I’d ever want it, or that there even was one. It sounded like a vodka-dream to me. Probably her boyfriend had threatened to wring her neck and she’d taken it seriously. While I was thinking this she suddenly reeled against me, and it occurred to me she wasn’t above passing out, and then I would have something on my hands.
“Where’s your car?” I asked hastily.
“Car?”
“You know. What you came in. Car, gas buggy, moving vehicle—”
“Oh, that. Left it … left it … red and white B-Buick …converable …”
I groaned. “Honey,” I said, “why did you have to happen to me?”
There didn’t seem to be any answer to that; she didn’t even try. She simply fell into my arms, her arms falling around my shoulders, her firm slender body pressing against mine, her honey-colored hair brushing against my cheek, her sweet delicate perfume tantalizing me.
“Not happnin’ … not tonight …”
Her blue eyes finally found their focus for a moment, right on my dark browns, as if she was trying to tell me something. Then she pressed forward and her lips brushed against mine. She moaned and kissed me hard and urgently and I felt a deep stirring register in my loins. God! I had been without for so long and wanted her so badly. But as my kisses spread to her cheek and neck, she moaned deeply and then her body went limp.
Shit! Just my god dammed luck! With one arm around her shoulders my other swept down below the firm curves of her sweet little ass and I lifted her up. Not the couch, I thought. This broad’s too classy for that, so I carried her to the bedroom and lay her down on the bedcovers. I slipped off her pumps; turquoise to match her dress, pointed toes, stiletto heels, very sexy. Very expensive. Stockings too, sheer and silky, not cheap by any stretch. I stood up and looked down at her.
Damn! Why this broad? Why now? My life was already fucked up as it was. Why did I need her to wrangle her pretty way into my apartment at three fucking a.m.? Then I could see the gown chafing at her creamy, sleek skin, so I rolled her onto her side and worked the zipper down. Parting the satin fabric and slipping it down along her slender dreamy body almost made me forget about my gentleman’s code. But I didn’t, fool that I am. I left her in her skimpy silken panties and stockings, afraid that my high-minded resolve would melt if I had just a glimpse of the heaven that resided underneath.
I pulled a soft plush blanket from the closet and tucked it around her sleeping form, covering up the pert pink nipples that seemed to be pointing directly at me, the sensuous flair of her hips, and the long trim lines of her legs. Shit! I hadn’t even learned her name. Some kind of private dick I am! I doused the light and returned to the living room, making up my bed on the couch.
Such a fucking sap I am, I thought. All it takes is a pretty face with a good sob story and I’m hooked like a big ole small mouth bass on opening day. At least she had some dough—for a change. Lots and lots of dough. I crushed out my last Camel of the night and switched off the lights. Fuck! Where was this going to take me?
But then Sylvia shows up on my doorstep in the wee hours, drunk and alone and needing my help. With her clear blue eyes and swirling honey-blonde hair and her trim young body, she crawled under my skin. I knew that she would make it my job to find out who was after her … and that was enough to keep me from letting this young beauty down—even if she might end up too dead to care …
Please feel free to read along as DangerousDarkEyes and Yours Truly tell the tale of a beautiful young rich girl whose life has just been threatened and an older jaded down-on-his-luck PI in a film noir story set in a large city of the mid 1950’s.
IC: Vince Latimer, PI
She was young and very beautiful. And very drunk.
“They’re going to kill me,” she said, her slender body swaying side-to-side in the dim yellow light of the streetlamp. The fur cape wrapped loosely around her shoulders slipped down on one side, revealing a lean stretch of clear silky skin.
I looked up and down at the noiseless city streets. No headlights, no burbling sound of exhaust, no shadows moving in the still night. Arriving home from a failed stakeout at 2 a.m. to find a lovely if glassy-eyed stranger on my doorstep doesn’t happen to me every night of the week, so I’m no expert at handling them. Especially if they are young and beautiful and as vulnerable as this doll seemed to be.
“Who’s going to kill you, honey?”
She waved with a limp slender hand. “That’s what you’re s’posed to find out. Hirin’ you right now to find out who’s going to kill me.”
This was too much. I laughed, not out loud but enough that she would have heard it—if she had been the least little bit sober. If she knew who was going to kill her then fine. Maybe we could do some business. But this was no hour for guessing games—not even with a doll like this. And then I looked at her eyes. Under the blueness and alcohol was fear, real fear. Then I felt that sappy warm feeling percolate inside my belly and knew I couldn’t turn her out. Not tonight. “Come on in,” I said begrudgingly. “I’ll make some coffee and we’ll talk it over.”
When she tripped climbing up the single flight of stairs, I reached for her arm. She tried to wave me off, but when I took a firm hold of her, she glanced up at me.
“Thanks,” she said, lucid for just a brief moment.
I slipped the key into the lock and opened the door. The girl sashayed inside like she owned the place, like she had been here before, more than once. The scent of her perfume was as intoxicating as the clear moonlit night sky. All blue eyes gleaming and creamy pale skin glowing as she passed by me. I snapped on the floor lamp and watched as she collapsed onto my favorite armchair, and for the moment, I didn’t know what to do but play along. Following her drifting scent, I went to the kitchen, turned on the gas and got the coffee brewing. A few minutes later, when I carried two hot cups of Joe out to the living room, I half expected to see her gone, but she wasn’t. She slumped back in the armchair like it belonged to her, gazing vacantly at the opposite wall.
“Cezanne, isn’t it?” she said absently, her eyes heavy lidded and lowering.
“Yeah,” I replied, my interest piqued by her interest in my favorite print that hung proudly on the wall.
“So mush better in the original,” she commented, her words slurred slovenly.
“Look, honey, it’s late and this happens to be my apartment, not my office.”
“You’re a private inveshtigator, aren’t you? Y’name’s Vince Latimer, isn’t it?”
“Sure, that’s me, honey, and tell you what. You finish your coffee there and be on your way. You can come down to my office tomorrow and we’ll talk it all over. How’s that?”
Not good enough, apparently. She shook her sleek little honey-colored head and waggled an unsteady forefinger in my general direction. “Can’t wait. My birthday’s next month.”
“Happy birthday,” I said; and then, against my better judgment, added warily, “What’s that got to do with it?”
She leaned forward and attempted to bring me into focus long enough to deliver a patient and weightily mysterious look. “Well—it happened to Peter just before his birthday, didden it?” she asked solemnly.
This was getting too complicated to be worth the effort. Peter—whomever the fuck he was—didn’t even matter. I was tired and wanted to get to bed. I smothered my third yawn.
“I wouldn’t know, honey. Now listen, be a good girl. This isn’t getting us anywhere. You go home and sleep it off and we’ll talk about it tomorrow, huh?”
“Wait—” She opened her purse and began fumbling through its contents. “Money,” she announced grandly, “ ‘s no objeck—no objeck atall.”
Apparently it wasn’t. Because the purse suddenly slipped from her lap and as it fell bills went sailing in every direction. Lots and lots and lots of bills.
Fuck! Good old honest Vince. That’s me. I knelt down and retrieved all that alluring lettuce and wadded it back into her purse and put the purse firmly back in her hands.
“Honey,” I said. “I’m just not for hire tonight. Get that through your pretty little bean, will you? If you want to talk business, see me tomorrow.” I took hold of her arm and hoisted her to her feet. “Come on now—you’re going home.”
“Home?” she asked her voice dull and confused.
“You’ve got one, haven’t you?” You know—a place where you live. House, apartment, room, hovel—”
The hovel was pretty unlikely. Looks, clothes, the dough in her purse, and something indefinable in her manner despite the alcoholic shape she was in—it all smacked of money, lots of money.
She stood there, swaying uncertainly, looking around like I’d disappeared. One strap of her turquoise evening gown slipped down a creamy shoulder, and for a minute events promised to be more revealing, but she hitched it up in time. I retrieved the fur cape she’d let slide to the floor and put it around her shoulders.
She made another try at locating me and bringing me into focus. “Don’t want the job, huh?”
“Not tonight, honey.”
I wasn’t sure that I’d ever want it, or that there even was one. It sounded like a vodka-dream to me. Probably her boyfriend had threatened to wring her neck and she’d taken it seriously. While I was thinking this she suddenly reeled against me, and it occurred to me she wasn’t above passing out, and then I would have something on my hands.
“Where’s your car?” I asked hastily.
“Car?”
“You know. What you came in. Car, gas buggy, moving vehicle—”
“Oh, that. Left it … left it … red and white B-Buick …converable …”
I groaned. “Honey,” I said, “why did you have to happen to me?”
There didn’t seem to be any answer to that; she didn’t even try. She simply fell into my arms, her arms falling around my shoulders, her firm slender body pressing against mine, her honey-colored hair brushing against my cheek, her sweet delicate perfume tantalizing me.
“Not happnin’ … not tonight …”
Her blue eyes finally found their focus for a moment, right on my dark browns, as if she was trying to tell me something. Then she pressed forward and her lips brushed against mine. She moaned and kissed me hard and urgently and I felt a deep stirring register in my loins. God! I had been without for so long and wanted her so badly. But as my kisses spread to her cheek and neck, she moaned deeply and then her body went limp.
Shit! Just my god dammed luck! With one arm around her shoulders my other swept down below the firm curves of her sweet little ass and I lifted her up. Not the couch, I thought. This broad’s too classy for that, so I carried her to the bedroom and lay her down on the bedcovers. I slipped off her pumps; turquoise to match her dress, pointed toes, stiletto heels, very sexy. Very expensive. Stockings too, sheer and silky, not cheap by any stretch. I stood up and looked down at her.
Damn! Why this broad? Why now? My life was already fucked up as it was. Why did I need her to wrangle her pretty way into my apartment at three fucking a.m.? Then I could see the gown chafing at her creamy, sleek skin, so I rolled her onto her side and worked the zipper down. Parting the satin fabric and slipping it down along her slender dreamy body almost made me forget about my gentleman’s code. But I didn’t, fool that I am. I left her in her skimpy silken panties and stockings, afraid that my high-minded resolve would melt if I had just a glimpse of the heaven that resided underneath.
I pulled a soft plush blanket from the closet and tucked it around her sleeping form, covering up the pert pink nipples that seemed to be pointing directly at me, the sensuous flair of her hips, and the long trim lines of her legs. Shit! I hadn’t even learned her name. Some kind of private dick I am! I doused the light and returned to the living room, making up my bed on the couch.
Such a fucking sap I am, I thought. All it takes is a pretty face with a good sob story and I’m hooked like a big ole small mouth bass on opening day. At least she had some dough—for a change. Lots and lots of dough. I crushed out my last Camel of the night and switched off the lights. Fuck! Where was this going to take me?
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