A bit of folklore.

Black Tulip

Not so delicate flower
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Wow, that sure was quick. I submitted my story for the Winter Contest yesterday and today it's already up for reading.

Something is wrong with the lettering though. Somebody thought to use italics for a part, but then the italics never stopped till the next page.

Never mind. Because it said in the rules to take anything connected with the season I did just that. I picked the Dutch brother of Santa Claus as a background.

If you want to know more about Saint Nicholas:
http://www.thehollandring.com/sinterklaas.htm


If you want to read my story:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=117652

I like to thank my editor: HawaiiBill. I can recommend an editor, at least one like him. :D
It helps to have someone else read your ideas.

Feedback is very welcome.
 
Nice erotica for the holidays, Ms. Tulip.:rose:


I like the folklore as well as the little twist of vagueness between fantasy and reality.

There were a couple of places where syntax was a little awkward but I'm guessing that English is not your first language in which case it was applaudable.


Your spy story left me hanging though.:D
 
Thank you Weed.

You are right, I'm a furugner. ;)

And about part 2: being edited at the moment.
 
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