A better nonconsent ending?

[shereads]

First, she doesn't comes.

Then, she doesn't come.

Then, we learn that one of the endings was real, while the other was only a dream, but she doesn't know which was which, so we must decide.

What the heck, it worked for John Fowles in The French Lieutenant's Woman.

It doesn't always work, though. Remember how people rioted when they were shown the alternate ending of Schindler's List where Schindler had an orgasm?

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

I always thought Fardels Bear was Fozzie Bear's first cousin on his mother's side. Just goes to show how little I know.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Virtual_Burlesque]

It doesn't always work, though. Remember how people rioted when they were shown the alternate ending of Schindler's List where Schindler had an orgasm?

It wasn't the orgasm, it was the list that made them go crazy.

If he would have had his orgasm with his tray folded away and his seat in an upright position no one could have cared less.

 

[msboy8]

If there's not some form of consent or enjoyment on her part, LIT won't post it.

IMHO. I think you're wrong. Her body might enjoy it, but that doesn't mean her mind and soul do.

 

[kendo1]

How dare you denigrate The Bard's fardels

 

[sophia jane]

Well my nonconsent is up- it's my earth day story. So if any of you want to read it and then comment on the way I decided to end it, feel free. I have no idea if I made the best choice, but I think it works. But then, what do I know really?

SJ

 

[NoJo]

I'm confused. I had a pretty graphic rape going on in one of my recent stories. It was actually submitted in Romance. Is that how I got away with it?

 

[sophia jane]

I'm confused. I had a pretty graphic rape going on in one of my recent stories. It was actually submitted in Romance. Is that how I got away with it?

Fucking hilarious, Joe. Really. I needed a good laugh.

SJ

 

[NoJo]

Fucking hilarious, Joe. Really. I needed a good laugh.

SJ

Er, for once I was actually serious. But I'm glad you had a laugh anyway.

I suppose it does seem like a joke. But it was a rape scene between the Bad Guy and the heroine.

I need to put a little "serious" smilie in from now on. Damn, there isn't one. I have to use

 

[sophia jane]

Er, for once I was actually serious. But I'm glad you had a laugh anyway.

I suppose it does seem like a joke. But it was a rape scene between the Bad Guy and the heroine.

I need to put a little "serious" smilie in from now on. Damn, there isn't one. I have to use

Oops. Sorry bout that then.
It is kinda funny tho either way that you can sneak a rape scene in as long as it's not in a nonconsent story.
Hope I didn't offend.

SJ

 

[Guest]

Er, for once I was actually serious. But I'm glad you had a laugh anyway.

I suppose it does seem like a joke. But it was a rape scene between the Bad Guy and the heroine.

I need to put a little "serious" smilie in from now on. Damn, there isn't one. I have to use

If it helps, for a straight face, Charley uses this: :/

 

[NoJo]

If it helps, for a straight face, Charley uses this: :/

What, in real life?

 

[Guest]

What, in real life?

Yes, she draws it on with a crayon.

 

[NoJo]

Yes, she draws it on with a crayon.

I wouldn't put it past her, the madcap thing. You know your post made me laugh out loud. I often wonder if people think I have a straight face the whole time. I actually find it really hard not to keep laughing. Hey, maybe that burns calories.

 

[Guest]

I wouldn't put it past her, the madcap thing. You know your post made me laugh out loud. I often wonder if people think I have a straight face the whole time. I actually find it really hard not to keep laughing. Hey, maybe that burns calories.

That could also explain why I've lost so much weight in the past year; I love to laugh and I've been laughing a lot recently. Life without laughter would be just, well... dull. Kinda like this: :/

(I always imagine you with a smile on your face.)

 

[NoJo]

That could also explain why I've lost so much weight in the past year; I love to laugh and I've been laughing a lot recently. Life without laughter would be just, well... dull. Kinda like this: :/

(I always imagine you with a smile on your face.)

Now I imagine Charley with a smilie on hers. I think it would have to be a banana smilie on yours.

 

[Guest]

Now I imagine Charley with a smilie on hers. I think it would have to be a banana smilie on yours.

Yep, I have adopted him as my own. I even have the T shirt.

You'd be this one: Or this one: Or this: Or even this: This is Carson: And Lew: Abs:

 

[msboy8]

Hi SJ I R.V.C.ed your story. Wonderfully different.

 

[sophia jane]

Hi SJ I R.V.C.ed your story. Wonderfully different.

Thanks ms! I like to be wonderfully different.

SJ