A Benign Something

[jtmalone70]

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[CopyCarver]

I'm always interested in recieving feedback for my stories, and my latest is finally up and running.

A Benign Something

As usual, it wasn't written to be a "wham/bam" story. It moves along at a tepid pace, striving for a realistic and believable level at all times.

Thanks again!

Alas, I don't know how to hack Lit's computer, so I'll post my vote and comment here as well.


Outstanding!
10/29/05 by CopyCarver
This obviously isn't a story for people with short attention spans. What it is, instead, is some of the best work I've ever read on Literotica--or in most other venues. I'd have given it a 200 vote if I knew how to gaff Lit's computer.

 

[jtmalone70]

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[CopyCarver]

re:the couch

Actually, I did notice the couch...but I assumed it was symbolic rather than fortuitous accident.

I know exactly what you mean about material getting out of hand: I once had an assignment for 1,500 words--and hit the 2,200 mark before I finished defining the problems that the new high-tech gizmo could potentially solve. Actually, uncontrollably growing manuscript syndrome generally means that you're really interested/care about the material.