A Belated Valentine

sirhugs

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If you write now, it would be plausibly titled.

if I write now, it is for next year.

Henry travels a lot for work. This year he is on the road on V Day. while away, he picks up sexy lingerie for his wife/sweetie and a souvenir snow globe for his Mom. when he gets home, he takes the wife/sweetie for a romantic dinner for a belated valentine. She opens her gift - except it is the snow globe.

Sunday dinner at Mom's should be interesting...

[if you want to avoid incest, substitute his secretary for Mom, and Monday at work for sunday dinner]
 
Too obvious. I mean really get down off that horse and breathe the air down here. :p

Same idea, different people. So married guy gets lingerie and something dorky for a woman, or man (let's not rule out gay sex here). So the lingerie is supposed to go to his wife, and the dorky gift is for the other person. So the other person ends up with the lingerie and that gets them thinking he wants an affair with them.

Course I'm totally seeing this from the side of the other person. You know thinking at first that it's just a mix up. Then when he doesn't apologize for the lingerie gift they start thinking he wants an affair with them so they start flirting to test the water. He returns a little reluctantly so they flirt bigger until it turns into an actual affair. Just because I totally don't think anyone would read a story about a woman trying to get the married boss in bed with her and he stays loyal to his wife.

Well alright so that might fly if say, she plays with herself and dreams about him in graphic detail. Then you get sex and he stays loyal to his wife. Probably go over really poorly in loving wives though. :D
 
Obvious sells on Lit though - I find readers HATE surprises.
 
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