A Babysitter Story With A Slight Twist

[rcairns84]

So I had an idea for a story. It’s a babysitter story, with a slight twist that turns into incest.

Having kids at a young age is such a bad idea. When Mike and Sherry, 18 years old and seniors in high school become pregnant, they decide to give the kid up for adoption. Years later, Mike and Sherry had another child, but separate shortly after the kid is born. Sherry leaving her husband and son for a young actor.

Mike has to hire a babysitter for his kids since he works two full time jobs and doesn’t have the time nor the energy to raise a child, but can’t bare the thought of giving up another kid to adoption. So he hires Melinda, a young teenager who is really smart and pretty to watch his son.

The years pass and Mike watches Melinda grow into a beautiful young adult. She continues to baby sit for him even after she turns 18. When he catches her masturbating on the couch one night after coming home early, things get interesting…

Mike and Melinda began having sex shortly after he catches her. After the act they talk and really start to get to know each other. Mike finds out that Melinda was adopted and that she shares a birth date with the daughter he gave up for adoption many years ago…

So… what does everyone think? Good idea? Bad idea? Decent idea if executed correctly? Constructive feedback only please. I don’t mind if you say this idea sucks or has been done to death, but I’d like a little more so that I can change it and develop it.

 

[Vielle]

Could be good if it's done right. I like stories about unknowing incest where the lovers find out about their family relationship only after they've been intimate with each other. There's a movie, Lone Star, in which two lovers find out at the end that they are actually half brother and sister.

Parent child relationships are even more taboo which, I think, increases the erotic potential.

As for your story idea, I would wonder about being able to suspend disbelief. You have two taboo themes in a single story--the babysitter affair followed by the discovered father-daughter incest. That might be hard to pull off. But, if you can do it, it might be a fun story.

 

[monak4u]

interesting.....

 

[RicoLouis]

Love the idea. Only thing I would change is that when he comes home he finds her crying, possably just broke up with her boyfriend. He comforts her a little and bow chicka wow wow.