9/11 Love, Tragic Poetic

[Aaron Dazer]

A couple Trapped in the Towers and after the first Plane hit. they Dash in an Office space and Delcare each others love for one another for the First time. Rip eachothers clothing off and climax as the Towers fall around them.

Tragic, Poetic.

Thoughts?

Maybe make it so the reader doesn't know it's 9/11 untill the end. They think the Big Huge Bangs and the shaking of building is something else.

 

[cloudy]

A couple Trapped in the Towers and after the first Plane hit. they Dash in an Office space and Delcare each others love for one another for the First time. Rip eachothers clothing off and climax as the Towers fall around them.

Tragic, Poetic.

Thoughts?

Maybe make it so the reader doesn't know it's 9/11 untill the end. They think the Big Huge Bangs and the shaking of building is something else.

I had a family member that died in the twin towers that day, and from my point of view, unless it was done very, very carefully, it would reek of exploitation of a tragedy.

Just my two cents.

 

[GratefulFred]

I wrote a story about 9/11

...concerning some strangers trapped under the rubble alive sharing a few moments together. It's a touching short dialogue driven romantic piece with an ending that has a bit of humanity to it.

I submitted it under the Author's section entitled "An Untold Story" and dedicated it to Shoshi who will always be in my thoughts.

 

[cloudy]

Re: I wrote a story about 9/11

...concerning some strangers trapped under the rubble alive sharing a few moments together. It's a touching short dialogue driven romantic piece with an ending that has a bit of humanity to it.

I submitted it under the Author's section entitled "An Untold Story" and dedicated it to Shoshi who will always be in my thoughts.

This is very, very personal to me. I started to apologize for feeling the way I do, but I'm not going to - I thought it was tacky to post what you did.

Did you have friends or relatives that died there? I would say no, since you didn't seem to realize how truly tacky it was to post that where someone like me might see it, and relive the pain again.

Bad form, truly bad form. You said you had lost someone in a terror attack. I don't know if that's true or not, and if it is, my heart goes out to you. However, I don't need anyone to make me feel any worse about it than I already do. It didn't read as a tribute, or even seem to have any sensitivity at all...it read like exploitation of an event that was horrific, and a personal tragedy for my family.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I also think that is no good idea to write a Lit Story about 9/11.

Even if you haven't lost anyone in this tragedy, this day is just horrible and far away from any erotic incident.

I would never read or write an erotic story about 9/11

 

[Guest]

No.

I would have trouble finding a way to equate eroticism with 9/11.

I'm sure eventually we'll see sappy heroic romantic TV movies of the week about it - but not yet.

Even TV/movie production companies realize how insensitive that would be at this time and how it wouldn't be accepted by the public.