69 Word Fiction

[RP519]

I found a collection of what were called "55 Word Fictions" in the short story section of the library a few years back, and was taken with the concept; How few writers are so good at what they do, they can express a full story in only 55 words? It's harder then it sounds, or at least it was for me, so let's find out who on this site is up to the challenge. However, in light of where we are, I decided to bump the number up to 69 instead.

~A Room With A View~​

She threw open her drapes. Midnight close, stripping slowly by the window, chiil air hardening her nipples. Naked now...flat on her back in bed.
He's watching across the way. He always watches. She always gives him a show.
Hand trails betwen her thighs. Rubbing, teasing, dipping in.
Back arching. Gasping, panting. Full breasts expanding with one deep, held breath as the moment comes.
Sighing, falling back. Drained...pleased.

 

[SweetDreamStories]

This should go into Author's Hangout since it's not a story idea. On Lit, stories must be a minimum of 750 words in length. Writing sixty-nine word tidbits here are not "ideas on developing stories".

By the way, I've had ideas for flash fiction where I would stop at 100 words each (and had a "collection title" called The Hot 100), but even one hundred good, erotic words is difficult to accomplish.