KillerMuffin
Seraphically Disinclined
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- Jul 29, 2000
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I hope I've got the right date. I never check.
Our next selection comes from the Earl who has been wonderful with his ideas both here and in the Author's Hangout. He has requested that we take a look at the series, and I generally find critiquing a whole story simpler than one. However, the rules are one link. Those of you who prefer to do one story, the Earl has requested that you read the second story. For those who'll do the whole series, both are included.
I'll be back in a bit with some questions to, I hope, prompt discussion. Anyone who has a question that you think is good for discussion, please, ask!
Our next selection comes from the Earl who has been wonderful with his ideas both here and in the Author's Hangout. He has requested that we take a look at the series, and I generally find critiquing a whole story simpler than one. However, the rules are one link. Those of you who prefer to do one story, the Earl has requested that you read the second story. For those who'll do the whole series, both are included.
I'll be back in a bit with some questions to, I hope, prompt discussion. Anyone who has a question that you think is good for discussion, please, ask!
Do you do feedback on a series? If so, then I'd appreciate anything on my Seducing Dawn series. Whenever I ask for constructive feedback, people go straight to my worst story and tell me what's wrong with that, so I'd appreciate feedback on my better ones. The second one's better IMHO.
Seducing Dawn - http://www.literotica.co.uk/stories/showstory.php?id=43477
Seducing Dawn 2 Preferred - http://www.literotica.co.uk/stories/showstory.php?id=44174
Thankyou
The Earl