40,000 words of sick, twisted, filthy Fetish porn.

Stella_Omega

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No plot.

Episodes of 1,000 to maybe 3,000 words, mostly around 1,500 apiece.

Does anyone want to read any of it, tell me if I actually have anything?

What you might call "Picaresque," there is a little bit of context but not much, mostly it's sex scenes strung together ... like anal beads. Think "Sleeping Beauty" maybe set in an upscale district, and fueled by hentai addicts. (actually, that is literal-- I could say this is Gelbooru.com fanfic) There is no plot, but several themes, a feeling of an alternate universe, a handful of characters that are fleshing themselves out. Hurr hurr I said 'flesh'... I've even come up with a rationale for all of this action, and it's far more plausible than those stupid Princes and Princesses, IMO.

Kinks include;
consensual slavery, consensual mind control, dehumanisation, objectification,humiliation both situational and verbal, exhibitionism, voyeurism, gang bang, bondage, confinement, cages, piss play, piss control, orgasm control, piercings tattooing, guro butts, butts, enemas and more butts and also more piss, maybe even some scat, robotic sex devices, electroplay, punishment kink, rape kink,... *takes a breath* fear kink, genital torture, urethral play... oh, and some bestiality. Yeah I know I cant post that here.

Every thing, EVERY THING is consensual. Everyone owns their sexuality. Nobody is an innocent corrupted, nobody is abducted. The mind control drugs are lots of fun, and the characters choose to take them. If you want to give any of those kinks a miss, but want to read some of it I can give you sections that don't include, for instance, the dogs.

Multiple characters, all sexual combinations, often in the same sentence. The main POVs are a cis woman, an undefined woman, two gay cis men.
Trigger potential; I've used the words bitch, slut, and rape. Nobody is actually raped, but it's a kink for them. And a clown, I just wrote clowns. :confused:

My id, let me show it to you...
 
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The idea of choosing to take mind control drugs is something I've never thought of. I'd certainly like to read that part.

Actually, I'd like to read the whole thing. I've only got two squicks, noncon and pedo, and I gather that you've avoided those.

Please specify the kind of feedback you're looking for. I assume that you want more than just "that's hot, that's not". Grammar and spelling corrections? Style criticism? Logical inconsistensies? Scientific impossiblities? Too much willing suspension of disbelief?
 
Well... it turns out that logic and scientific accuracy make my hoo-hoo sad.:p

So no, on this one, I can't care much about those things! I guess I'm wondering if it's hot enough to make you willing to suspend your disbelief to such a ridiculous extent.

Style, yes please! And is it worth it to develop the characters and the setting?

What fetishes am I missing, have I repeated myself too much? Stuff like that...

PM me with an email address, I'll send you the doc.
 
consensual slavery, consensual mind control, dehumanisation, objectification,

I've used the words slut* and rape.

I guess I'm wondering if it's hot enough to make you willing to suspend your disbelief to such a ridiculous extent.
Just the above is hot enough for me to suspend my disbelief from the ceiling and beat it into submission. ;)

Besides, you came up with Despina Jones - on the basis of that, i'd be willing to try reading anything of yours.
 
Just the above is hot enough for me to suspend my disbelief from the ceiling and beat it into submission. ;)

Besides, you came up with Despina Jones - on the basis of that, i'd be willing to try reading anything of yours.
Gawrsh, that's quite a compliment! :heart:

shoot me an email address, but please-- promise to get some feedback to me in a hurry, okay?
I can't stand these careful readers... People are taking hours to reply... :eek:
 
My dear friends-- I have created a sooper sekret sextion on my blog http://stellaomega.com.

Them who registers there can read the sooper sekret smut that I've been writing... in all it's semi-edited glory. :D

(plus I am not sure if I've put the software together right, I'm hoping what I did works right)
 
Wow... those who have registered, thank you!

Somehow, every single one of the posts that I was asking for commentary on-- had comments turned off, and I spent a merry couple couple of hours fixing that... So I do hope that any reading anyone did last night was satisfactory.
 
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