3 On a Webcam
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Rumple Foreskin
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dv8tor,
You'll have a better chance of getting some response(s) if you post the URL for your story.
RF
You'll have a better chance of getting some response(s) if you post the URL for your story.
RF
Ahhh, we newbies do stand out, don't we? <G>
Here is the URL - took me a few minutes to figure out how to copy and paste it. In the future I shall try not to make such a flagrant display of my ignorance.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=40732
"Stylish living is a matter of money, taste, upbringing and education. Dying with STYLE - now that takes real class."
Here is the URL - took me a few minutes to figure out how to copy and paste it. In the future I shall try not to make such a flagrant display of my ignorance.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=40732
"Stylish living is a matter of money, taste, upbringing and education. Dying with STYLE - now that takes real class."
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DRxBlue
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Don't stop NOW!
Oh--Yeah! i'd say this story line has a good deal of unexploited potential. i think you're in JUST the right place to find an appreciative audience as well.
i'm a newbie too, but awfully glad to have found this place. There's a LOT of incredible talent here--stiff competition! (pardon the hackneyed pun)
There's a lot of excellent advice and educated criticism too.(as you'll find out when KillerMuffin gets her claws on you.)
Feel free to "stroll around the grounds until you feel at home". i've found the other residents to be quite friendly and anything but boring.
We'll be keeping an eye on you i'm sure!
Tell me another one!
Oh--Yeah! i'd say this story line has a good deal of unexploited potential. i think you're in JUST the right place to find an appreciative audience as well.
i'm a newbie too, but awfully glad to have found this place. There's a LOT of incredible talent here--stiff competition! (pardon the hackneyed pun)
There's a lot of excellent advice and educated criticism too.(as you'll find out when KillerMuffin gets her claws on you.)
Feel free to "stroll around the grounds until you feel at home". i've found the other residents to be quite friendly and anything but boring.
We'll be keeping an eye on you i'm sure!
Tell me another one!
Justin_Thyme
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3 On A Webcam
dv8tor, read the story and tried to send anon. feedback (w/e-mail addy) but do not know if it posted before the crash
Anyhow the gist was..5. Yes, there were a few tech. problems-mostly typo's I think but the story was great. I suspect that like myself you do your own proofing. If so, I haven't a clue as to how to avoid the occasional misspelled word as I certainly tend to read what I intended to write rather than what my poor typing skills produce. OK, 'nuff of this. GREAT STORY!
dv8tor, read the story and tried to send anon. feedback (w/e-mail addy) but do not know if it posted before the crash
Anyhow the gist was..5. Yes, there were a few tech. problems-mostly typo's I think but the story was great. I suspect that like myself you do your own proofing. If so, I haven't a clue as to how to avoid the occasional misspelled word as I certainly tend to read what I intended to write rather than what my poor typing skills produce. OK, 'nuff of this. GREAT STORY!
Belilica
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Well, I've never been big on incest, but I thought it was a very well written story. I think I saw a spelling mistake, but I could be wrong. The idea of a story written about webcams was what really got me though. I've always wanted one myself.... anyhow, I know that this is still the same type of stuff that everyone else is telling you, but great story! Keep them coming!
-Bel
-Bel
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