horny-oz
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Jan 1, 1970
- Posts
- 218
I recently adopted a fresh bunch of stories via the ever helpful Torg, a couple were just in need of a little cleaning and approving/rejecting to get them back on their feet, 3 of them however, were pretty much dead in the water. I don’t normally pimp my stories, but as these are new but look old, I thought I’d advertise them a little so that people who may have seen them in the past and thought ‘Yuck!’ can now know that they have been upgraded. 
Two of the stories literally have nothing to do with the originals, even the titles have been changed, all there were anyway were introduction chapters and nothing else, but they had literally nothing to do with the Mature motif so I had fun writing introductions that fitted with the basic themes that were originally outlined (One was a school gym, the other a hotel) The 3rd has 2 pages, but I added a heap to the introduction page to again make it fit with the Mature motif as that was the category it was put in.
So anyway, even though I wrote 2 of the intro’s from scratch, I think the originators names do still deserve to be there, because without the original premises I wouldn’t have thought of those plot directions.
The Gym And The Gym-Teachers
The Hotel
Hard As A Rock
Two of the stories literally have nothing to do with the originals, even the titles have been changed, all there were anyway were introduction chapters and nothing else, but they had literally nothing to do with the Mature motif so I had fun writing introductions that fitted with the basic themes that were originally outlined (One was a school gym, the other a hotel) The 3rd has 2 pages, but I added a heap to the introduction page to again make it fit with the Mature motif as that was the category it was put in.
So anyway, even though I wrote 2 of the intro’s from scratch, I think the originators names do still deserve to be there, because without the original premises I wouldn’t have thought of those plot directions.
The Gym And The Gym-Teachers
The Hotel
Hard As A Rock
