3 days off (BDSM story idea)

[alias x]

The openning of this story would start with the protagonist saying that her contract requires her employers to give her 3 days off every week, and that she had just returned home to her boyfriend for her long weekend. She would elaborate to explain that she worked as a BDSM model. She had agreed that she would allow them to do anything to her, and but had stated that she doubted she could handle their bondage for a full 5 consecutive days, and would need a longer rest period. Her beauty and talent (and the fact that the anything included allowing them to bind her for more than 8 hours in any given day) made them accept this agreement.

Her boyfriend would ask her how work was going. At this point, the narrator would describe miscellaneous stuff done to her over the course of the modelling. Throughout her description, she would lament how horrible the job was. At the conclusion, she would state that she she could barely handle it even with the long weekends.

Her boyfriend would comfort her, saying that her employers just didn't understand that she couldn't handle their treatment. That they didn't understand how tight she needed the ropes. That they didn't understand (etc.). But she could not respond, as he had already gagged her.


I suppose this story idea is somewhat predictable, but it still might work.

 

[emap]

You know, actually it's a great idea, except instead of her boyfriend asking about her day, she walks in the door and he stuffs a ball gag in her mouth and the whole telling of her week at work is rememberances interspersed with his actions. Maybe a they did this, but I wish they had done it harder or tighter and her boyfriend is doing it type thing.

Now of course I can't do such a tale, even in my submissive moments I wouldn't let someone tie me up or flog me or any of that, rather needs an actual submissive to do a good telling.

 

[sirhugs]

is it really horrible? or does she secretly love it? is it the intensity that she has to escape?

 

[emap]

The way I read it, it's not horrible enough, but she is a model so they can't or won't do it harder so she has to get the 3 days off to get abused right, which is what I based my idea of it off of.

 

[alias x]

emap: Yeah, but it's supposed to be a surprise (a predictable one, I admit) to the reader that she doesn't mind the bondage.

Sirhugs: I think you misunderstood the story.

emap: That's it exactly. Just because she tells them they can do anything doesn't mean they will.


She might complain that they had tied her hands really tight and that all she could barely move. Her issue would be that she could move at all, but the reader wouldn't be told this until the end.

 

[emap]

Hmmmm, so what your thinking of is a reluctant sub then, but of course what springs to mind is if she is a reluctant sub, why would she have a dom boyfriend?

I think perhaps move away from boyfriend to boss dominating her, say she goes on a photo shoot somewhere can't take boyfriend but boss goes and dominates her, of course after she can't say no to him and he continues.

OK, I have to admit, I'm taking an interest in this idea and might do a story on it, after I do some research, it just won't go away.

 

[sirhugs]

emap: Yeah, but it's supposed to be a surprise (a predictable one, I admit) to the reader that she doesn't mind the bondage.

Sirhugs: I think you misunderstood the story.

emap: That's it exactly. Just because she tells them they can do anything doesn't mean they will.


She might complain that they had tied her hands really tight and that all she could barely move. Her issue would be that she could move at all, but the reader wouldn't be told this until the end.

I didn't misunderstand. I just suggested an alternate set of questions that might lead to a better story, or not.

 

[emap]

Hmmm sorry you old fogy, i gotta say makes for a worse story.