3.14 Fleshed Out

[Guest]

pie
apple red delicious
blueberry makes me suspicious
blackberry better than cherry
peach I fed my deary
boston creme
I had a gooseberry dream
plum, stuck in my thumb and pulled it out
chocolate creme makes me scream and shout
strawberry cream topped
cherry popped
hairpie creamy tasty
snatch lick it, don't be hasty
cunt red delicious
twat makes me suspicious
pussy

 

[daughter]

masked

Guess it was time we got an example, eh?

Cool.

Peace,

daughter

 

[tigerjen]

Masked Poet.....

Thank you for "fleshing out" my "3.14".......I read it
twice and got a kick out of it......would you enjoy sharing
copyrights with me with the "revised" edition, since
the original one was created by me?

Very cool revision!

Merci!

TJ

 

[WickedEve]

unmasked

You call that a poem? lol

You know, tj, the foundation of it is your poem. You had a good idea when you wrote it. And when I read it, that's kind of how I pictured it... like the poem above. I saw beyond the "list of words." I knew it had potential. And I'm sure many will find the fleshed-out version to be pretty bad, like some of my stuff... lol But I think it's entertaining. Though, I do wonder what a gooseberry dream is?

Well, I'm going to put my mask back on! Like Zorro, I may strike again!

 

[tigerjen]

Gooseberry dreams.....

WickedEve...
I wonder what a gooseberry dream could be.....nice
and mushy and sweet

Yes......the foundation of the "revised" version is
my original poem......people can use their imaginations
(such as you did)....but there are others who want to
see it right out front with detail such as Masked pointed
out

TJ

 

[Guest]

tigerjen, no need to share the copyrights. This is gift from the masked poet to you.

 

[tigerjen]

tigerjen, no need to share the copyrights. This is
gift from the masked poet to you.

Masked.....

Merci......in fact I just had my half bday back on
11/4.......what a lovely gift for my 27 1/2 bday!


TJ

PS....can i take the gift wrapped up in shiny gold
paper or just a red velvet ribbon?

 

[Guest]

Birthday Pie

For you, shiny gold paper and a velvet ribbon. And instead of a birthday cake, how about a pie with a candle? lol I wonder if you can put 27 1/2 burning candles in a gooseberry pie?

 

[tigerjen]

Re: Birthday Pie

For you, shiny gold paper and a velvet ribbon.
And instead of a birthday cake, how about a pie
with a candle? lol I wonder if you can put 27 1/2 burning
candles in a gooseberry pie?

Pie with a candle sounds great......I think it should
be chocolate cream pie (one of my faves!) or
blueberry....mmmmmmmmmmm! I think one can
put 27 1/2 candles on a pie...just as long as they get
blown out mighty quick after making a wish!

TJ