The Festival http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=202080
(This is a spin on an actual event. The watcher did not in real life come across the street and join us.)
and
In the Cellar http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=202083
(This is sheer fantasy about 2 females who have made me hot. One I have been on again off again lovers with before being married and the other is someone with whom I have never been intimate, but there have been some outrageously flirty encounters.)
Please rate and make comments on them and my other story as well if you like:
It happened at a Party http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=202086
Some of the feedback I got on my first story will probably apply to these 2 as well, because they were all basically submitted at the same time. I had to tidy up the 2 most recent ones a little to get them approved, but I did not make major changes. Just separated out dialogue more and reviewed some longer paragraphs.
(This is a spin on an actual event. The watcher did not in real life come across the street and join us.)
and
In the Cellar http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=202083
(This is sheer fantasy about 2 females who have made me hot. One I have been on again off again lovers with before being married and the other is someone with whom I have never been intimate, but there have been some outrageously flirty encounters.)
Please rate and make comments on them and my other story as well if you like:
It happened at a Party http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=202086
Some of the feedback I got on my first story will probably apply to these 2 as well, because they were all basically submitted at the same time. I had to tidy up the 2 most recent ones a little to get them approved, but I did not make major changes. Just separated out dialogue more and reviewed some longer paragraphs.
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