2 ideas

lynm35

Virgin
Joined
Jul 2, 2002
Posts
4
I have dabbled with 2 story ideas forever, but never got around to doing anything about them.

The first is just built around a question: "at which point do you know you're making love"? You can interpret that many ways, but in my context (and those that have read my stories know my chain of thought), two women are required to pose (unwillingly) for photographs. The pics get more explicit, but at some point the women are engaging with each other, willingly, and not the camera. I thought it would make an erotic tale to skillfuly show the change in their thinking as the story progresses.

The second is around a story that was told to me, and I actually could not write it at all. A (male) friend was looking after a friend's house. He walked in one day on the friend's son, dressed to the hilt in mommy's clothes and make-up, and obviously preening/stripping/masturbating in the mirror. He kept the secret - but I wondered what story it would make if he had the same fascination with woman's clothing - and if he had taken the time to talk it thru - and perhaps seduce this boy in woman's clothing. With some skillful writing I think it could be erotic as well - but I suspect it would take a man to do it! lol
 
lynm35 said:
I have dabbled with 2 story ideas forever, but never got around to doing anything about them.

The first is just built around a question: "at which point do you know you're making love"? You can interpret that many ways, but in my context (and those that have read my stories know my chain of thought), two women are required to pose (unwillingly) for photographs. The pics get more explicit, but at some point the women are engaging with each other, willingly, and not the camera. I thought it would make an erotic tale to skillfuly show the change in their thinking as the story progresses.

The second is around a story that was told to me, and I actually could not write it at all. A (male) friend was looking after a friend's house. He walked in one day on the friend's son, dressed to the hilt in mommy's clothes and make-up, and obviously preening/stripping/masturbating in the mirror. He kept the secret - but I wondered what story it would make if he had the same fascination with woman's clothing - and if he had taken the time to talk it thru - and perhaps seduce this boy in woman's clothing. With some skillful writing I think it could be erotic as well - but I suspect it would take a man to do it! lol

I like these ideas, the latter most, though I'm not sure why, since I'd never read it. Perhaps because it's so different.

For the first I just think the photographer should have a line, somewhere near the end, "Okay, you can stop now."

For the second, I think the friend (who will be interested in transvestites) should talk to the son like he's seducing a woman. An incentive for the son to cooperate would be that the friend could tell the son's parents about their son's crossdressing fetish if he didn't play along.
 
how

I like the story ideas and the first fascinates me.

You seem to be starting the story in the middle of the plot.

How did the two women get to the sate that they have to pose? This aside the idea intrigues me and as the story unravels the play gets to be sexual and the two unwilling subjects become willing sexual partners…

Nice one

Love Linnet
:rose:
 
Re: how

MsLinnet said:
I like the story ideas and the first fascinates me.
I think you and Lynnm35 should try to make a story of this. I understand she hasn't written much, but you have lots of experience, MsLinnet. Take her under your wing (there's kinky) and get her writing.
 
Always happy to acnowledge my inexperience and accept suggestions from whence they come :)

I have submitted 2 parts to a story in the last week, though, which follow on from this idea (at which point do you know...); although it is not at all like my original thinking.

As for the image of women being obliged to pose: a personal fantasy lol

So - all advice welcomed
 
lynm35 said:
Always happy to acnowledge my inexperience and accept suggestions from whence they come :)

I have submitted 2 parts to a story in the last week, though, which follow on from this idea (at which point do you know...); although it is not at all like my original thinking.

As for the image of women being obliged to pose: a personal fantasy lol

So - all advice welcomed

good luck it normaly takes about 5 days for a story to accepted or regected. you just have to keep checking

look forward to reading them
 
Back
Top