1ST post would like some feedback

[mojack]

I just had my first story posted and would like some feedback on it. It is "Four Way Holiday" in the erotic couplings section.

Thanks for the help

Mojack

 

[DJHyrrikhayne]

This was an excellent story about two nymphomaniacs who are madly in love with each other and don't let sex come in the way of it. Keep up the good work.