Sammael Bard
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I initially started with 1st person but got a little bit unsure as I reached the end.
I'm writing a story where the protagonist metamorphs in to a beast.
Now, they are different personalities but when the demon takes over, our hero's consciousness takes a back seat. He can see but can't control his own actions.
How do I write those scenes?
One solution that I've come up with is to switch to Plural, i.e., 'WE'...but I don't know if its looking funny or not.
Anyone come up with any solution?
I'm writing a story where the protagonist metamorphs in to a beast.
Now, they are different personalities but when the demon takes over, our hero's consciousness takes a back seat. He can see but can't control his own actions.
How do I write those scenes?
One solution that I've come up with is to switch to Plural, i.e., 'WE'...but I don't know if its looking funny or not.
Anyone come up with any solution?