18 year old hitchhiker becomes a man

[SillyBilly1993]

An attractive 24 year old model driving her way to LA through route 66 in a classic muscle car picks up a shy but cute 18 year old virgin farm boy with a 8in penis that has runway from his parents to go to the big city and become a star. Through out the trip, the young woman begins to feel attracted to the 18 year old and seduces him with her hip cool attitude and her hot gorgeous body. But the story is not all just sex! It's a story about a beautiful young woman with a cool and hip attitude that shares the feelings of the 18 year old dude. The girl then mentors the young hung virgin in the art of sex and shows him the passionate blissful feelings of being with a beautiful woman and becoming a man.

 

[sirhugs]

the penis ran away from his parents????

now THAT suggests a powerful incest backstory! Just what were the parents doing to that poor penis?

 

[SillyBilly1993]

No incest please!!!

 

[sirhugs]

No incest please!!!

of course not, that's why the penis ran away!

 

[BuckyDuckman]

I think this is a pretty good, character driven idea. Someone with a good sense of dialog could have some fun contrasting the shy, simple country boy against the hip, worldly, sarcastic city girl. And maybe, by the end of the story, the country boy doesn't seem quite so simple and the city girl, not quite so worldly.

Thanks for the suggestion. Doubt that I'll write it, but it has my wheels turning.

 

[Tmmldr]

I think this is a pretty good, character driven idea. Someone with a good sense of dialog could have some fun contrasting the shy, simple country boy against the hip, worldly, sarcastic city girl. And maybe, by the end of the story, the country boy doesn't seem quite so simple and the city girl, not quite so worldly.

Agreed, particularly if both are flawed characters and during the course of the plot recognize that and grow. Maybe the hip, suave girl has a sexual perversion of one sort or another. Like she can not experience an orgasm unless the acts re done in a car.

 

[SillyBilly1993]

All I ask for is credit for the idea concept!

 

[MatthewVett]

the penis ran away from his parents????

now THAT suggests a powerful incest backstory! Just what were the parents doing to that poor penis?

It's like a buddy road trip. A Boy and His Penis. After being abused by his parents, the boy's penis runs away, and he goes with him, unable to bear life without his best and only friend. They go on a road trip to California where the two of them want to star in porn. It'll be a touching, heartfelt story of friendship and discovery!

 

[SillyBilly1993]

The boy's penis runs away and the boy goes with him??????? I'm sorry I don't get it!!!! I was thinking that the boy runs away form his farm because his mom (Father died years ago) is so christian she keep restricting him from being with any girls! Since he's fed up with his country lifestyle he wants to go out into the world and experience what it's like to have a wild time! The girl is a perfect mentor for the inexperienced teenager! My vision for this story is a friendship story with strong character development! Note one thing! The girl doesn't have sex with the boy as soon as he gets in the car! They first become buddies then they stop at a diner and have burgers. They become good friends through the course of the trip! Then at night they stop at bar to get the boys first beer. That moment in the bar they become more than buddies. Now they are making out in her car! They stop at motel in the middle of night to get some rest! The motel has a swimming pool so they go skinny dipping (first time boy sees a hot nude body of a girl). They have passionete sex! They continue driving and stoping by gas stations to fill up the car. Driving through the night she passes the wheel to the boy. He dives her musel car with her on the passenger seat. She opens a can of beer and gets drunk. She turns on the radio and rock's out some tunes. Geting real drunk and horny she kisses, licks, and teases the boy while driving by freeing her d cup tits from her low cut top and playing with them! Then the girl unzips the boys jeans and gives him his first blow job! When he cums in her mouth he almost crashes the car! As they get closer and closer to LA they get into crazy situations involving benig chased by police and angry bikers, stoping by the a creepy cabin in the woods to sex wild sex then a running through the woods naked from Bigfoot only to escape your neck of time. Stealing from gas stations, and having sex in the car while a Bigfoot watches! Oh I forgot to mention that during the time the two camp out in the woods. The boy goes far out to pee in the bushes We need to be confronted by Bigfoot again and receive a hand job! That's what I have so far!

 

[SillyBilly1993]

Images of the two characters! Kevin and Crystal

 

[DarkPleasures]

Images of the two characters! Kevin and Crystal

Okay, so who are they? For real. You've posted these pics more than once now.

 

[SillyBilly1993]

Well the pic of the dude is me and the girl is a friend of mine online.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

It's like a buddy road trip. A Boy and His Penis. After being abused by his parents, the boy's penis runs away, and he goes with him, unable to bear life without his best and only friend. They go on a road trip to California where the two of them want to star in porn. It'll be a touching, heartfelt story of friendship and discovery!

The penis ends up at a gloryhole with assee mcgee on the other end...

 

[JaxRhapsody]

The story ideas you post arr nice, but why dont you write one? Seriously... you can do it. There's editors that can help you. WRITE SOMETHING!

 

[Blase]

The boy's penis runs away and the boy goes with him??????? I'm sorry I don't get it!!!!

Since no one else seems inclined to tell you, Billy, I will.

Sirhugs was just riffing on the ambiguity of your phrasing. You wrote "An attractive 24 year old model driving her way to LA through route 66 in a classic muscle car picks up a shy but cute 18 year old virgin farm boy with a 8in penis that has runway [sic] from his parents to go to the big city and become a star". Since you used that (traditionally used to refer to objects, including body parts) instead of who, one could make a case for assuming that it was the penis that had run away from the boy's parents with the intention of making its way to the city and becoming a star, while the boy was "with" (accompanying) it.

Sometimes writers just have to have their fun.

 

[MatthewVett]

The boy's penis runs away and the boy goes with him??????? I'm sorry I don't get it!!!! I was thinking that the boy runs away form his farm because his mom (Father died years ago) is so christian she keep restricting him from being with any girls! Since he's fed up with his country lifestyle he wants to go out into the world and experience what it's like to have a wild time! The girl is a perfect mentor for the inexperienced teenager! My vision for this story is a friendship story with strong character development! Note one thing! The girl doesn't have sex with the boy as soon as he gets in the car! They first become buddies then they stop at a diner and have burgers. They become good friends through the course of the trip! Then at night they stop at bar to get the boys first beer. That moment in the bar they become more than buddies. Now they are making out in her car! They stop at motel in the middle of night to get some rest! The motel has a swimming pool so they go skinny dipping (first time boy sees a hot nude body of a girl). They have passionete sex! They continue driving and stoping by gas stations to fill up the car. Driving through the night she passes the wheel to the boy. He dives her musel car with her on the passenger seat. She opens a can of beer and gets drunk. She turns on the radio and rock's out some tunes. Geting real drunk and horny she kisses, licks, and teases the boy while driving by freeing her d cup tits from her low cut top and playing with them! Then the girl unzips the boys jeans and gives him his first blow job! When he cums in her mouth he almost crashes the car! As they get closer and closer to LA they get into crazy situations involving benig chased by police and angry bikers, stoping by the a creepy cabin in the woods to sex wild sex then a running through the woods naked from Bigfoot only to escape your neck of time. Stealing from gas stations, and having sex in the car while a Bigfoot watches! Oh I forgot to mention that during the time the two camp out in the woods. The boy goes far out to pee in the bushes We need to be confronted by Bigfoot again and receive a hand job! That's what I have so far!

Is this an elaborate prank? You seriously want Bigfoot voyeurism sex stories? The fuck?

 

[SillyBilly1993]

Ok I admit I went too far! Let's pretend that I never said that!

 

[DarkPleasures]

Well the pic of the dude is me and the girl is a friend of mine online.

Does she know you're putting her image on Lit?

 

[JaxRhapsody]

Since no one else seems inclined to tell you, Billy, I will.

Sirhugs was just riffing on the ambiguity of your phrasing. You wrote "An attractive 24 year old model driving her way to LA through route 66 in a classic muscle car picks up a shy but cute 18 year old virgin farm boy with a 8in penis that has runway [sic] from his parents to go to the big city and become a star". Since you used that (traditionally used to refer to objects, including body parts) instead of who, one could make a case for assuming that it was the penis that had run away from the boy's parents with the intention of making its way to the city and becoming a star, while the boy was "with" (accompanying) it.

Sometimes writers just have to have their fun.

I would've told him after I stopped laughing.

 

[Tmmldr]

The boy's penis runs away .....The boy goes far out to pee in the bushes We need to be confronted by Bigfoot again and receive a hand job! That's what I have so far!

And because the penis has attached to Bigfoot the boy finds himself staring at his own dick?

 

[hoo_hoo_boo]

I don't know- as soon as there are measurements the story becomes trite for me. I note that neither has a tape measure with them as yet. Also repeating hip and cool in the context would be difficult- the words say little. Instead I'd describe them and in doing so it would become apparent they are and create a stronger story. Show- don't tell.

 

[SillyBilly1993]

WHAT THE FUCK!!!!????!!!!???? R U GUYS IDIOTS????!!!!! When does the dude's penis detach and goes on Bigfoot???? P.S. I only put Bigfoot in because as funny humor and satire! Actually I'm not really that crazy about the bigfoot jerk off idea! The original idea was that Bigfoot walks through the woods at night and finds the 18-year-old boy and 21-year-old girl having wild sex And hides in the bushes and peeps on them. The idea is really supposed to be a joke actually! It's a American pie style joke! Besides that the two characters are supposed to be real people! The boy is a ordinary 18-year-old That as a 7 inch penis and lives on a farm in the country is a virgin and never had any friends because his mother is extremely over protective! So he runs off and hitchhike's with a hot 21-year-old and goes on a wild and Fun road trip to LA And becomes her boy toy!

 

[MatthewVett]

WHAT THE FUCK!!!!????!!!!???? R U GUYS IDIOTS????!!!!! When does the dude's penis detach and goes on Bigfoot???? P.S. I only put Bigfoot in because as funny humor and satire! Actually I'm not really that crazy about the bigfoot jerk off idea! The original idea was that Bigfoot walks through the woods at night and finds the 18-year-old boy and 21-year-old girl having wild sex And hides in the bushes and peeps on them. The idea is really supposed to be a joke actually! It's a American pie style joke! Besides that the two characters are supposed to be real people! The boy is a ordinary 18-year-old That as a 7 inch penis and lives on a farm in the country is a virgin and never had any friends because his mother is extremely over protective! So he runs off and hitchhike's with a hot 21-year-old and goes on a wild and Fun road trip to LA And becomes her boy toy!

Wait, I thought this story was about a hot 21 year old model who runs off with Bigfoot and becomes his bride, and they live together in the wild until they're caught by a seven inch boy with an 18 year old penis. What are you making this so confusing??????????!!!!!!!!!!???????????!!!!!!!!!!!????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????!!!!!!!!

 

[SillyBilly1993]

Are you joking???!!! Where did I write that the 21-year-old girl becomes Bigfoot's bride??? You know what forget about Bigfoot!!! The story is not about Bigfoot!!! The story is about a 18-year-old virgin boy that is sick and tired of being a farmer and runs away from his farm and hitch hikes with a hot 21-year-old model and becomes her sex toy throughout the long trip!!!

 

[Zulae]

Calm down. I may not be a native speaker nor an expert on Bigfoot or American Pie jokes, but from my point of view it looks like your are the only one who is serious about his posts on this thread. The others are joking around, you know, irony. And I am afraid you won't make them stop by USING CAPS or using three exclamation marks at the end of each sentence.

You seem to have the whole story on your mind. Why don't you write it yourself, so we can all see what its decisive aspects are?