15K romance story need beta reader/editor

[Salacious_Scribe]

I have read and edited this story so many times I know it by heart.

I need a second pair of eyes to take a look at it.

I want
Constructive criticism
Make sure there is no change from past to present tense. Should be past only.
Make sure there is no change between the 1st/3rd person pov. It should be 3rd only.
Spelling and grammar
I need a better title, not happy with the one I have.

This is the link to the google doc. Feel free to add comments, to the doc, PM me in the forum, or email me from my author page

Please keep comments relating to the story private. Thank you.

 

[Salacious_Scribe]

Thank you to RandyD1369 for your feedback. I did fix those typos and character name.