1253 Views,3 Votes? Vote, Vote, Vote For Me!!!

[JAYCE73]

I am very very honored, for a first time erotica author to be veiwed by 1253 readers. The feed back that I did get, is very good. But I would like to be up for something for my writing. So please help me out, VOTE FOR ME! I promise that all my future writings will make all people of all nationalities cum. I promise never to use racial slurs, or call woman derogatory names. I promise, to be the best first time erotic writer there is.

VOTE FOR JAYCE19- STORY- MARIE.

 

[peachykeen]

LOL I know Jayce it's really fun checking on your stories to see how many have read, how many have voted...I dunno why people read and then don't vote (I mean, it takes what, a half a second?) but if it will make you feel good I will go look for it and read it right now.

 

[n-erasmus]

Marie comment

Well it certainly was a pain in the ass finding the story -- a link in your post would have helped -- next time.

I enjoyed the story though we are very different men, and apparently our experience with women has been quite different. From the women I have known I would say she is not flirtacious enough, verbal enough. A woman who comes on to a man is almost always *TOO* chatty, and almost never forward enough physically. Still, either I am too dense to catch it or women seem to always *TOUCH* you when they are being encouraging. Just my experience. They seem to want to *PROVOKE* some sort of pursuit, even if they started it all.

Guess I am *REALLY* a dirty old man because I didn't find what the characters did to be kinky at all. Have always suspected it and now I know.

I enjoy writing my own things too. You might try my sole selection so far,
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=59145

 

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Jayce73

Jacyce73 thanks for the story of the guy falling for the porn queen. I had a shitty day, and loved the story, it was wonderful, not the sex part, the part about the car, and his thoughts on how to keep her, and how to accept her. Although, I did like the sex parts too. Keep up the good work!
Dirk