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carsonshepherd said:
I have no idea what this means, but I swear I have never gotten a hostile or negative feedback. (Except one and I know who it was from.) Most of mine are really polite and sometimes gushing. It must be the gay sailor pic.
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Nor have I, but I have gotten a lot of the 'I don't really care for anal sex' variety. I should just issue a warning right here. If you don't like anal sex, don't read my stories. If you do, I'm your girl.
 
OhMissScarlett said:
I should just issue a warning right here. If you don't like anal sex, don't read my stories. If you do, I'm your girl. [/B]
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Whoa! As soon as word gets out I predict you will be very popular indeed!
 
carsonshepherd said:
Whoa! As soon as word gets out I predict you will be very popular indeed!
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Hmm, that doesn't read exactly right. Oh well, I'll take popularity any which way, lol.
 
OhMissScarlett said:
Hmm, that doesn't read exactly right. Oh well, I'll take popularity any which way, lol.
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Apparently you'll take a lot of things any which way...;)

Kidding, you know I love you:heart:
 
Hostility.

You should forget this whole thing, your story is dumb, your characters are unbelievable. --on my first story

You're just sick a father should never do that you make me want puke --on Camel Toe Incest

Made my skin crawl licking the black girl, you sick fuck -- on Jip, I think the one where they fall in love and discuss the possibility of a real future

That was amazing I cum all over the keyb oard I want one with the girl tied and the guy brings in his dog and makes her suck can you do that

People like you should be strung up I looked up your addres youll get it where it hurts --this one alarmed me a bit. It seemed to have to do with Jip again, just from the timing, but it might have been the incest story

Jip is a plain vanilla white boy who gets involved in group activities with his high school teacher, his aunt, and a Haitian woman with three children still back home. Lots of anal and other weirdness, and hashish, other drugs. Hard to tell what part might have ticked the fellow off. But what category does something like that go in? I put it in Group Sex, but it might have been the drug use that did the trick.

More rational objections to Chapter 3 of The Sculptor were that the girl fucking the whole band to get oxy was off putting, even though the sex was very hot. They weren't hostile, though, just critical.
 
You know what they say cantdog; it's better to be hated than ignored.
Also, in regards to dogs and small children, negative attention is still attention.
 
cantdog said:
Hostility.


Made my skin crawl licking the black girl, you sick fuck -- on Jip, I think the one where they fall in love and discuss the possibility of a real future
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I would print this one out and hang it on my wall. No one ever calls me a sick fuck. I'm still trying though.
 
The one which made me feel the worst was the first one, about my dumb plot and silly characters. It was not so far off; I wrote it as farce, almost.
 
I would call you a sick fuck, but after all, we hardly know one another.:)
 
Although I've dabbled with incest, I haven't touched non-consent, erotic horror, or biracial. Probably because most of my work tends to be fairly straight-forward stuff, my feedback tends to be polite and usually - thank goodness - positive. However, I treasure this one, from Anonymous, of course. Apart from the total lack of capitals, properly constructed, too.

jesus christ! this is the most convoluted piece of dog shit i've ever tried to wade through. mickey spillane you ain't. come to think of it a couple of monkeys and a typewriter and we'd have something better than this. what a total and complete waste of time.

On my story 'Goody-Two-Shoes Makes A Friend', if anyone's interested! A lesbian piece. Maybe it was because I'm not a woman, lol.

Now if anyone can explain to me the rationale behind one-bombing a 'How-To'?

Alex
 
Well, I'm somewhat puzzled and bemused that my first Lot story--"Survival, Part I" got a pan. I know it wasn't as well-liked as the second part, but I didn't expect to get an actual bad review. And after all this time, too. Quite naturally, it was from good old Anonymous, who said that the story didn't even "have the correct language limitations." Like, what is that even supposed to mean?
 
SlickTony said:
Quite naturally, it was from good old Anonymous, who said that the story didn't even "have the correct language limitations." Like, what is that even supposed to mean?
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Is there some sort of a quota for swear words on Lit that we don't know about? If there are language limitations, I'm sure I've exceeded them many times.
 
SlickTony said:
... good old Anonymous...said... the story didn't even "have the correct language limitations." Like, what is that even supposed to mean?
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Like, you used words with two and even three syllables, moron!

How is Mr. A supposed to read advanced shit like that?
 
I'm sure I don't know where good old Anonymous was coming from. Maybe he objected to the fact that I didn't use any cusswords. I'd tried to see if I could write an erotic story without them. You can't please everybody.
 
carsonshepherd said:
You did it and it was mighty good, too!
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Thanks Carson, but you don't know how relieved I am to be able to use the word "fuck" now in my writing. Don't be surprised if I overuse it. Oh, and pussy, you can never have too much of that!
;)
 
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