MsJess0125
Really Really Experienced
- Joined
- Aug 20, 2005
- Posts
- 343
Ok, I wrote my first story on Lit. Its got a good score...I personally think the sex scene is a little clunky.
I'd love LOVE some more feedback because I was wanting to make a series of these stories...
here's the link.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=278032
Please help
and if you live in Mobile, AL I will bake you a cheesecake and give u $10 off...
I've resorted to bribing people, please help me
I'd love LOVE some more feedback because I was wanting to make a series of these stories...
here's the link.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=278032
Please help
and if you live in Mobile, AL I will bake you a cheesecake and give u $10 off...
I've resorted to bribing people, please help me