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[Morwen]

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[Byron In Exile]

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[OT]

"let the leaves fall.
where they play."

now that's a cool line !

 

[Morwen]

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[HomerPindar]

Furious, frumious, fragalicious factions
lay down the law, and let the leaves fall.
where they play.

God's baby feet kick out the hymen,
new universe born, cauled and raw.

This this this is all we've got?
Run it red raw but exhume

perfect?
not.

Not sure about the alliteration myself (am I missing something there?)

Some really great images and contrasts there though, not sure I'm getting it all, but I like puzzling about it