‘Twas The Night Before

[BrokenSpokes]

Greetings, friend. My story for the Winter Holiday contest has posted. Please enjoy, and vote, should feel inclined.

’Twas The Night Before

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[LesDesirable]

Setting aside one or two minor wording errors, and some language in the author's note and first few paragraphs, I thought it was very well written, and more than deserving of a 5.

A few paragraphs in the early going (arriving at the Christmas Village) could have been combined and trimmed to match the story flow to the action of the moment.

Well done.

 

[Wrexscar]

Loved it. Reviewed it. Perfect characters.

Don't think I'd want a sequel to it.It would turn into legal fights and scheduling conflicts.
A longer story would become a very real world story whereas this is a perfect little holiday romance.