New Swim Coach

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Ok this story is to have me and SaphireCameo1 as the main characters for now...but it could lead to others joining down the road...i just ask you pm me or her before you jump in.

thanks

The storyline will be about a university girls swim team getting a new coach. The new coach is a 28 yr old swimmer who just missed out on making the Olympic team, so he has retired and turned to coaching.

His name is Dan Smith, he's 6'1 and extremley fit as you can imagine a world class swimmer would be. He's from texas so he has a slight southern drawl that women find charming.

The team is full of beautiful and fit female swimmers, from the ages 18-22, which is a nice added perk to the job.

*SaphireCameo1 i'll let you get creative with your character (as one of the swimmers)

feel free to add or edit anything you don't like or you think i've missed ok.
 
OOC = Jessie Donald's is a 19 year old swimmer, with the potential to go big time. Her dedications are Swimming and study she wants to be the best of the best....well so she thinks.

Her parents give her a lot of pressure to get goods grades and be all she can be. Her father has hopes of her being a great business woman and following in his foot steps, he owns a major air line and his wife, her mother is the the head of many many committees, her dream for Jessie is that she marries well and becomes a valued member of the comunitie.....alot like herself.

Jessie hasn't dated as she just doesn't have the time with her swim training, study and doing this with her mothers committees.

She is very fit with a lean athletic build, she has long brownish red hair and sparkling blue eyes. She is rather proper in her dress and in her manners as you would expect daddy and mummies little girl to be. Her majors are Business and as her mother thought it was a charming choice art. she is also a proud member of the university swim team.

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Jessie Donalds
 
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The first team practise of the season was about to start. Almost 30 young girls gather by the pool deck around 6 am. The girl are chatting and wondering about there new coach. Most of the girls had at least herd of Dan as he was a successful national level swimmer.

Then Dan walked onto the pool deck wearing a pair of shorts and a tight polo style t-shirt. Some of the girls were giggling and checking him out as he stood before them.

"Ok ladies calm down, I have a few things to say before we start practise"

"My name is Dan Smith, I have been swimming for close to 20 years and for the last 10 years I've been among the top swimmers in the country. I've been to alot of International level meets as well. I'm confident my experience and knowledge will be a great advantage for all of you girls, and if your willing to do what I ask of you I know you will all become better swimmers."

Dan continued his coach talk as he looked over all the girls. From what he knew the team did ok last season but he did have a few simmers that were all conference last year and he was brought in to help develop these girls talents.

Finally practise starts and the girls are told to hit the water. The last girl to go in the pool was this beautiful young lady with redish hair...Dan thought to himself this must be Jessie Donald, the team's best young swimmer he had her so much about from the schools athletic director.
 
Jessie didnt fancy going to the change rooms just yet, todays practise had been exciting for her but not for the same reason the other girls were all a flutter. Her new coach was Smith the world class swimmer she was in awe but did her best not to let it show. He could be very good for her swimming.

After the final girl had gone and the room had cleared out Jessie got serious she hated training with the others as they just didn't have the drive or the determination she had, to them it was just something to do it beat basketball or some other sport and they got to look good in swimmers. But for Jessie it was much more so much more.


Standing on the blocks her red and black swim suit , the university colours, Jessie prepared to do some laps. Her hair tied back she took some deep breaths and pulled her goggles down.

She had been training hard the last couple of weeks. Always the first one at the pool and the last to leave, tonight was no exception. Pressing the timer on her watch she dove into the cool water and started her training. 800 metre's was her best but her times were to high. She was the fastest in the school and had yet to be beaten at a meet but they were still to high she had to be the best of the best.

There were no lights on in the indoor pool except the lights in the pool itself. Jessie didn't mind as it was often the case as the janitor and other swimmers often left her to her training. pacing herself she turned and headed back up the other way concentrating hard on her technique.

Jessie loved to train it was the only time she was alone and nothing else mattered just her the water and the clock no body telling her to study hard or to do this or do that just her and the clock her mind was free and she could just swim.
 
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Dan's first practise was finishing up....he thought to himself that it had gone very well. For a smaller University there seemed to be a few girls with some potential.

As the girls started to hit the change room there was still one girl left in the pool. Dan approached the girl and asked her to stop.

"c'mon girl stop your not gonna win nationals from one practise. The workout is over lets get out of the pool!"

The girl reluctantly stopped and she got out of the pool. Dan couldn't help but notice her body. She was just a vision and her suit hugged every cuve just the right way. Her nipples were now poking threw her suit as the air outside the water was cool.

"You must be Jessie Donald" Dan said as he tossed her a towel.
 
Half way through a lap she heard a voice.......stopping in the middle of the pool she realised it was Dan Smith the new couch.

"c'mon girl stop your not gonna win nationals from one practise. The workout is over lets get out of the pool!"

Jessie didn't want to stop but he was the coach so she figured it would do her no good to argue she swam under the ropes to the side of the pool he was standing on, placing her hands on the side she hoisted her body up out of the water.

Removing the goggles she looked at him as he asked "You must be Jessie Donald" and tossed her a towel. Dabbing her face with the towel she took down her hair and shook it free then replied with a warm smile "yes that's me coach" feeling rather silly as she had just sounded like the other "girls" in the team she just focused on getting dry.

Gathering up her things she looked at him again realising he may have wanted to train after all he was a professional " I thought I was the only one here, hope I wasn't stopping you from training"
 
" I thought I was the only one here, hope I wasn't stopping you from training"

"Well actually I was about to jump in and get a quick workout in" Dan said as he removed his shirt and outer shorts in front of Jessie.

"You are a hard worker Jessie, that's good I like that. But you have to learn how to train smarter not just harder"

"I noticed some flaws in your stroke that I'd like to work on this year You could be alot more efficent in the water, which in turn will make you faster while not burning up so much energy"

Dan watched her as she began to towel off, he couldn't help but notice her amble breasts and muscular legs. She hung on Dan's every word as he talked about her swimming.

"I've herd how dedicated you are Jessie so I'll tell ya what I'll work with you after practise some nights if you'd like"
 
"I've herd how dedicated you are Jessie so I'll tell ya what I'll work with you after practise some nights if you'd like"

Jessie couldn't help but smile her whole face lit up she was delighted "If your sure" she replied eagerly " I would be very grateful but don't want to take up from your time" she couldn't wipe the smile off her face but she also couldn't drag her eyes from his chest he was so toned.

Trying to pry her eyes away from him she was about to get dressed but paused " Did you want me to start tonight coach?" she didn't want to push her luck but she also didn't want to go just yet she wanted to watch him, it wasn't often a world class swimmer was around to learn from.
 
Dan was now in the water ready to start his workout but then looked back to catch another glimpse of Jessie drying off.

Jessie's smile lite up the whole pool it seemed....and when she asked " Did you want me to start tonight coach?" Dan couldn't bring himself to tell her no.

He looked at the clock and then again at her and then waved her in and shook his head. "ya get in here I'll show ya a few things"
 
"ya get in here I'll show ya a few things"

she didn't need any more encouragement then that dropping the towel she grabbed her goggles and dived into the water surfacing right beside him she smiled and placed her goggles over her head resting them for now on her forehead.

She was treading water beside him ,He smiled at her and she felt herself blush slightly. Stop being an air head Jessie she thought to herself as she asked "okay now what Coach"

Her leg accidentally brushed his "sorry" she smiled and waited for instruction.
 
Jessie wasted no time getting in the water....this girl was eager he thought!

Man she was hot, with her wet hair and sexy lips....the way she looked at Dan just made him get excited her eyes were so big and innocent.

"okay now what Coach"

Dan took alittle to long to answer as he was lost in her eyes and all he could think of was holding this hot babe against his rock hard body.

Then her leg brushed up against his and it broke his stare. "umm ya Jessie lets go down to the shallow end we need to work on your form"

Dan demonstrates how he wants Jessie to use her arms as she pulls the water. It was hard to watch her as she swam away from him so he got an idea.

"jessie i'm going to hold you up and you can go through the motion without going anywhere so i can watch and make sure your doing it right"

Jessie noded and had no problem with the idea, so Dan had her lay out and he stood beside her and placed his left hand under her on her stomach and his right hand on the small of her back right above her bum, while she layed on her stomach in the water.

Dan couldn't believe how good her body felt in his hands....and now her tight ass was sticking just out of the water, his cock started to stir in his little speedo swim trunks. Get a hold of yourself Dan you won't be able to hide an errection in this thing!
 
Jessie did as he asked she had done this sort of thing before but usually the coach used a stationed strap that went around the waist it was used for training when the pool was crowded and to work on technique. But that coach also refrained from getting in the pool. Jessie use to jest he had a fear of water.

Feeling Dan's hands around her waist and the cool of the water Jessie felt her body stir her nipples became sensitive to the water and her body suddenly warm. Calm down Jessie she thought he is just your coach now is not the time to go boy crazy.

Sure she had thought of boys before even been asked out by them but she just didn't want the complication or the hassle. Dan was just impressive to her he was a champion and a good looking one at that.

She placed her head in the water and began her strokes, she must have been stronger then Dan had suspected for she serged forward in his grip his hand stroking over her butt and her lower abdomen before he was able to hold her firmly. Her concentration broken by his accidental intimate touch.

Jessie stopped stroking and stood up she was blushing slightly "sorry I should have said I was going" she whispered to Dan then took a step back to were she was supposed to be and laid back down on her stomach. preferring to ignore what just happened "ready" she asked before placing her head in the water.
 
Jessie caught Dan of guard by going early and her body moved ahead, which caused Dan's hands to now be on her butt and just above her mound.

Dan then gripped harder with his strong hands to hold her there, He ended up getting a great feel of Jessie amazingly firm ass. That did it, his cock jumped and swelled to a full raging hard on.

Jessie then stopped and applogized for not letting him know she was gowing, but at this point Dan didn't mind at all. Jessie repositioned her self and started over. Dan was just praying that his new athlete wouldn't notice his full throbbing rod under the water.

By this time Dan could care less about her swim form he was mesmorized by Jessie's round ass cheeks. Because Dan had his hands on her suit and how much strength Jessie had her suit started to sneak up the crack of her ass which allowed Dan to see even more exposed skin of this beauty.
 
Jessie felt her swimmers ride up alittle, moving her hand back she went to fix them but got a startling surprise as her hand stroked past Dan's..........was it? It was, his penis it was standing to attention and she had accidentally brushed it.

Dropping instantly from his grip Jessy turned bright red looking at him she innocently stammered "sorry I umm er" totally lost for words and suddenly feeling over heated she dove into the water and started swimming.

As she swam away she began to chastise herself how silly she must look, he must think me a complete fool a silly school girl. I brush him accidentally and all I can do is swim laps.

Deciding she just didn't know what to say or do she continued swimming turning at the other end she headed back towards Dan, it was funny how her pace slowed she really was intimidated by him and what he must think of her.
 
Dan was fully arroused now, as he kept looking at Jessie's wonderful ass. Then out of no where Jessie's hands cam back and rubbed against Dan's package. This made Dan's cock contract and move with her touch.

It all happened so fast he didn't know what to think and before he knew it Jessie wigged out of his hands and swam off. He wonders to himself is she upset? did she mean to do that? why did she swim away?

As Jessie made her way back to him she slowed down and instead of being embarassed Dan let his lust take over and he grabbed Jessie and pulled her up out of the water so they were both standing in the shallow end facing each other.

No words were said, Jessie had this flushed look on her face and she could barely look Dan in the eye. Dan took her hand in his and she finally looked up at him with her big beautiful vibrant blue eyes while biteing her lower lip.

Dan pulled her closer with his free hand so once again she could feel his hard member against her and he gave her a slow passionate kiss. Jessie melted his Dan's strong arms and before she knew it, she was kissing him back.....
 
Jessie was shocked he grabbed her out of the water like a prized fish, then he so very tenderly took her mouth in a passionate kiss.

It was happening so fast she was in a daze and before she knew it she was kissing back. Jessie could feel his hard body against hers and his horned member pressed against her allowing her to know full well his desire.

Jessie slowly allowed reality to seep back in, he was her coach she couldn't do that she couldn't have the distraction not if she was to be all they wanted her to be. She pushed against his chest and broke apart from him, glancing at him once she whispered sorry and dove under the lane rope and headed for the side of the pool.

Hoisting her body up she didn't even stop to dry she scooped up her bag and towel, she turned to him before leaving " I will be at practise tomorrow.......with the other girls" and she left.


Running across the court yard of the university she headed for her car. Throwing in her bag and towel she jumped in and speed out of the car park headed for her apartment......

Arriving home she didn't know what to thing she threw down her stuff and headed for the shower. Washing her hair she began to think of the kiss and couldn't help but smile. Stepping from the shower she put on her pink silk robe and went to the kitchen.

In the mood to spoil herself and forget about the kiss. Jessie began to make some pasta and a salad and chilled some white wine.

While the pasta was cooking she went through her DVDs and selected "dirty dancing" she loved the line "no body sits baby in the corner" she wanted someone to stand up for her it was in her mind romantic and sexy.

Settling down on the couch with some pasta and side salad her glass filled with white wine she was about to hit play when............
 
Once Jessie left the pool, Dan wasn't sure if she was just teasing him or if she was offended.

Some time had passed and he was now in his office and he couldn't get Jessie out of his head. He picked up the phone and dialed.........the phone rang, and rang, and rang and right before Dan was about to hang up Jessie answered "hello"

"Hi Jessie it's Dan. I think we should talk about what happened today....but I'd rather not do it over the phone"
 
**** ON A SIDE NOTE **********

any ladies interested in joining in as one of Jessie's friends that is also on the team?

pm me if your interested plz
 
"oh Hi" was all she could say as she found out it was Dan, Jessie had no idea what to say to him and now he wanted to talk, face to face.

Glancing down at her attire she was settled in for the night " ahh Dan I am not dressed to meet up, can we do it another time?' She was so nervous and really didn't know what to say to him.

Part of her was screaming yes yes meet up with him the other half was screaming don't be foolish you have study and swimming you don't need this distraction.


"well I can come there" Came his reply "I have the address its in your file"

Jessie panicked alittle she didn't know how to handle this "uh oh I am watching a movie and eating dinner" she stammered to try and deter him but he seemed to ignore it as he replied "sounds just fine I will be right over."

Jessie placed down the phone and looked around. Deciding well he is coming any way so I best be hospitable, she took her plate and glass to the kitchen and was fussing on expanding the meal to suit two when she had lost all track of time and was startled to hear the door bell.

Jessie placed the plates on the kitchen bench and the glasses and went to answer the door, It was only when Dan's eyes scanned her body that she realised she hadn't changed. Jessie blushed "uuh hi, sorry I didn't get a chance to fix myself up. I wasn't expecting guest tonight" She stepped aside and let him in.
 
Dan couldn't believe his eyes when he saw Jessie answer the door in nothing but a thin tight elegant pink robe. It hugged her hips and showed more clevage then her swimsuit did.

She was simply a vision of perfection. Jessie looked embarassed in how she was dressed, but Dan noticed this and said. "you look great Jessie, I'm glad you feel comfortable enough around me to wear that"

Jessie just stood there blushing and fussing with her hair in a nervous way.

To break the tension Jessie invited Dan in and asked if he wanted some dinner. At this point Dan was more concerned with desert, but he smiled and said "oh great I'm starving, what are we having?"
 
Jessie blushed brightly at his compliment and simply smiled politely and offered him dinner.

"hungry dinner's ready" Jessie said as she walked back to the kitchen.

"oh great I'm starving, what are we having?" Came Dan's reply, Jessie smiled and handed him a glass of wine "nothing special at all I just expanded the pasta and salad I was having, hope you don't mind?"

Jessie nodded towards the table and then carried Dan's plate for him and placed it on the table. It was only a small breakfast table but it was suitable for two. "Don't wait for me dig in" and with that Jessie went to fetch her own plate and glass from the kitchen. She returned and sat beside Dan.

Jessie was nervous because she knew he came here to talk, and she didn't think she was capable of talking about such things with him. Her body seemed to heat up and her brain turned to mush when ever she was near him she would act just like the other brainless bimbo's on the swim team.

As Jessie picked up her fork she realised she was still in her robe, placing the fork back down she stood and went to walk away "oh I should dress first" before she even got a step away Dan reached out to stop her but instead snagged her robe and caused it to fall open for his eyes to freely gliding over her body.

Jessie gasped and was shocked stunned she stood there looking at him her eyes shocked and her cheeks stained red from the heat now travelling through her body.
 
Jessie gasped and was shocked stunned she stood there looking at him her eyes shocked and her cheeks stained red from the heat now travelling through her body.

Dan certainly did not mean to grab her robe but he wasn't sorry that he did now that he got to see this wonderful young womens fit naked body. Dan had dated many girls all over the world, but none had blown him away with sheer physical beauty like Jessie did. Her breasts which earlier in the afternoon had been tucked away into a tight swim suit were now exposed and free to hang and bounce with Jessie movements. They were simply amazing, full and firm.....perfect size for her athletic figure.

Jessie was paralyized with embrassement and fear. She didn't move or say anything for a period of time that seemed to her like a lifetime. Then she tried to close her robe but Dan stood up and stoper her hands from closing the silky material. He gazed into her soft blue eyes and slid the robe off of her shoulders letting it drop to the floor.

Dan moved in for a kiss and the two locked into a heated passionate embrace that was much less akward then there first kiss earlier in the day.
 
Feeling Dan's hands stroking her body while his lips tantalised her own, was so overwhelming for Jessie she felt like she was burning a fever and couldn't stop herself from responding.

She kissed him back her hands stroking his back as his tongue traced along her lips and his hands down her naked back sending a shiver through her spine, it was all very intoxicating.

Exposed before him she broke the kiss and gazed up at him, her eyes full of wonder, Jessie hadn't indulged in such sins of the flesh and never had a man seen her this exposed or taken such delights from her before.

Innocently the only thing she could say to him to break the trance was "your dinner will get cold" she immediately felt silly for saying it but she could think of nothing else.

Bending she scooped up the robe and slide it over her arms, The cool satin fabric enhanced the goose bumps she already had.

Slower then one would expect she tied it at the waist loosely and took her seat back at the table, Jessie decided she would only look silly to get dressed after that.

Her eyes on her plate she took a large sip of wine and began to toy with her food waiting for the silence to be broken.
 
Jessie's skin felt so wonderfully soft as he ran his hands down her naked back. She was kissing back again but just like earlier she again pulled away.

Unlike before Dan was now assured that Jessie wanted him just as much as he wanted her, but she was either being a tease or she was so unexperienced she was nervous. Dan couldn't imagine that a girl like this was a virgin, but the thought alone made his cock start to harden in his jeans.

Now sitting back at the table Jeesie was drinking her wine and Dan reached over and held her free hand. "you know Jessie as your coach I can teach you alot of things...... if your willing to learn that is" They both knew he wasn't talking about swimming anymore but just to make sure Dan started to run his foot under the table sliding it up her calf muscle.
 
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