Can anyone help this guy out?

sweetnpetite · Aug 18, 2004

He needs some comments, public or otherwise. not necessarily literary critisism, just- you know- how'd you like the story?

Dont' post 'em here, post em after the stories!

The Lusty Librarian
http://www.literotica.com:81/storie...ry.php?id=85398

A Genie Slut
http://www.literotica.com/stories/s...ry.php?id=82366

these are pure fantasy material, not meant to be 'realistic' in any way. just good old fashioned dirty stories.

Dig in. I promise, they are very naughty!

BlackShanglan · Aug 18, 2004

Neither of those links appears to be functional.

Shanglan

heaven-whh · Aug 18, 2004

Although the links were faulty, I managed to find and read your stories.

I'm not an author, just someone who reads a lot.

Both stories did not appeal to me, I lost interest in them halfway the first page.

Still: There will be lots of people out there liking them, so don't let my oipinion bother you in any way.

BlackShanglan · Aug 19, 2004

I took a peek, but felt that I couldn't really say anything useful in a small space. If your friend would like more detailed comments and suggestions, I would be happy to give them to him via PM or email.

Shanglan

sweetnpetite · Aug 20, 2004

BlackShanglan said:
I took a peek, but felt that I couldn't really say anything useful in a small space. If your friend would like more detailed comments and suggestions, I would be happy to give them to him via PM or email.

Shanglan

I'm sure he would love that.

sweetnpetite · Aug 20, 2004

BlackShanglan said:
Neither of those links appears to be functional.

Shanglan

hmm, that's odd. I don't know what happened. I'll try to fix that.

dr_mabeuse · Aug 21, 2004

Links still don't work.

Who is this guy, SnP? And why are you shilling for him?

---dr.M.

sweetnpetite · Aug 25, 2004

dr_mabeuse said:
Links still don't work.

Who is this guy, SnP? And why are you shilling for him?

---dr.M.

Guess.

Try this link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=196990&page=submissions

If that doesn't work, both stories are on my favorites page. (click my link or my www to open a new window)

Can anyone help this guy out?

sweetnpetite

Intellectual snob

BlackShanglan

Silver-Tongued Papist

heaven-whh

Virgin

BlackShanglan

Silver-Tongued Papist

sweetnpetite

Intellectual snob

sweetnpetite

Intellectual snob

dr_mabeuse

seduce the mind

sweetnpetite

Intellectual snob

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