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story=Geeks are Freaks: they just wear glasses; writers' oppinions & threads welcomed

My first real story was finally offically accepted (my very first got really messed while I was learning everything, I still can't figure out linking). Anyway it's called "Geeks are Freaks: they just wear glasses", the link to it is:

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/1864

Check it out, tell me what you think, and add if you like; I would love to have lots of diffrent styles on this one, I am really going for diversity.

Thank you,

Maester
 
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If your wondering Yes I did get this idea from seeing someone else doing the same, but it is a good idea

thanks,Sim8425
;)
 
So far jakelyon, Sim8425, WattsIsnaim, Sekhmet, analplay, and amativissimus have all been gracious enough to post some really good threads but everyone is invited to add their ideas

P.S. Thanks again guys:)
 
On the story front, we have several options, but I would always like new ideas :)

Plot 1: Protagonist is caught with an exposed erection. This has so far lead to some mild dominance

Plot 2: Protagonist helps a friend with car trouble. Several threads later, there has been a mysterious fog and this somehow ends with a magic video game :confused: long but interesting (I have actually done most of the threads for this storyline but I think is still ok)

Plot 3: Protagonist goes home and is caught by another friend with doctored pics of teachers and schoolmates. This has lead to two threads of erotic coupling stories one of which is leaning towards incest

Plots 4: Protagonist helps yet another friend with a science project, which has to do with the penis ;)

Plot 5: Protagonist is exposed to genetically engineered retroviruses that will probable give super human abilities but will he use them for good, evil, or sex? Take a wild guess ;)
 
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Sim8425 has post new thread that interupt's the hero's help of Rachel with her science project it is well done and really keeps the idea of the hero being the real variable in this.

Thank man, your stuff has always been worth reading
 
How do I get more people to add to my story?

So far, my story has 15 threads, including the intoduction. Unfortunatly, they are all by me.:(

Oh, And yes, I have been planing to do some more threads to Geeks are Freaks, but I have also been trying to keep my story updated ever few days.

Anyone have some ideas they might want to add? Anything at all?
Well, here's alink to my story again.
Meeting Your Girlfriend's Mom
Thanks

Watts Isnaim
 
W: Post a thread for your story. Include the guidelines. Read Gystex's checklist. And mention the story now and then here.

-Z
 
Re: How do I get more people to add to my story?

WattsIsnaim said:
So far, my story has 15 threads, including the intoduction. Unfortunatly, they are all by me.:(

Oh, And yes, I have been planing to do some more threads to Geeks are Freaks, but I have also been trying to keep my story updated ever few days.

Anyone have some ideas they might want to add? Anything at all?
Well, here's alink to my story again.
Meeting Your Girlfriend's Mom
Thanks

Watts Isnaim
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I looked at your story as I really like the idea. The thing I was put off by if that you used all four of the starting threads yourself, and did not leave a new author anywhere to start if they had another idea.

I always try to leave a couple of threads open off of the first thread for someone new to jump in on.

I am trying to figure out a story line that I like that I can build off of the choices you give, but it would be easier without the first four options used.

:D
 
Re: Re: How do I get more people to add to my story?

jakelyon said:
The thing I was put off by if that you used all four of the starting threads yourself, and did not leave a new author anywhere to start if they had another idea.[/B]
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You know, I disagree with that one. Certainly the editor is entitled, but I think that in some cases he's actually obligated to kick off all four intro threads. It's a matter of how much determination he wants to have over the direction the story will take. One way of looking at it is simply that each of the first four choices is an extension of the introduction, and that where it goes from there is really the "first option".
 
Re: Re: Re: How do I get more people to add to my story?

gystex said:
You know, I disagree with that one. Certainly the editor is entitled, but I think that in some cases he's actually obligated to kick off all four intro threads. It's a matter of how much determination he wants to have over the direction the story will take. One way of looking at it is simply that each of the first four choices is an extension of the introduction, and that where it goes from there is really the "first option".
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I agree that it gives the editor more control, my point was simply it eliminates the option for the story to go in an unexpected direction right out of the chute. For instance in this story I envisioned a slower tease by the mother on our main character, but in all four threads things get off to a pretty quick start.

It is all a matter of personal opinion I guess.

By the way Gystex, nice avatar up right now. Really like the nipple close up.

:D
 
Re: Re: Re: Re: How do I get more people to add to my story?

jakelyon said:
I agree that it gives the editor more control, my point was simply it eliminates the option for the story to go in an unexpected direction right out of the chute. For instance in this story I envisioned a slower tease by the mother on our main character, but in all four threads things get off to a pretty quick start.

It is all a matter of personal opinion I guess.

By the way Gystex, nice avatar up right now. Really like the nipple close up.

:D
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That is true but for now and don't let them know at the Chyoo H.Q. you can get around that with this, I shall now Quote Sim

Sim8425 said:
I know how to add more even if you have four options already. This is how:

1) Copy the number of the thread that you want to add off of. You can get this through the story map.

The thread's address should look like this:
www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/ first numbers/second numbers

Copy the 'first numbers.'

2) Click 'add a new thread' on a page where you've used less than four options.

3) You'll see an address like this...
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/member.thread.addedit/0/'thread number'

Where I put 'thread number', imput the number copied from step 1, replacing the one currently there, in the address bar. Then hit enter in the address bar.

I hope those instructions are clear for anyone wanting to use this. If they're not, ask me, and I'll clarify.
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I have tried it, and it does work.


I will also like to take this moment to say if you like use this anywhere you like when it is already full.;)


P.S. Ditto on the avatar
 
Re: Re: How do I get more people to add to my story?

jakelyon said:
I looked at your story as I really like the idea. The thing I was put off by if that you used all four of the starting threads yourself, and did not leave a new author anywhere to start if they had another idea.
:D
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To be honest right after I added the fourth one I was like, "OOPS!" BUT if you choose to lie about your experiance, you have room for more options. Really, I wanted to have more options in the first page, and someday, I might go back, and try that trick for doing five or more threads. Unfortunatly, I'm not as computer savy as I used to be, so I'm a bit scared that I'll just mess the whole thing up.

Tell, you what. I'll try tonight or tomorrow, to add a thered that is called, "Add a thread" that promts the reader to add options there. With luck, it won't mess anything up... I hope.

Watts Isnaim
 
Juliet

:rolleyes: Ok, this is the offical notice about the character Juliet "Julie." Yes, I messed up I let two or three treads slip by that were about to make the character of a sister (namely Julie) impossible. If you find a thread altered it is probably about that. On 1:1 2:1 3:2 there is Again I apologies it was I who fucked up. I am also sorry because it (here) is so deeply hidden, I hope to fix that soon, and put it on the front page. However I was waiting for some more ideas to be put on the front page first, but seems now to be a pressing matter.:rolleyes:
 
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Ok, quick poll. I'm thinking baout adding a thread to the RPG game story line. I would like to do acameo of two of my favoried hentai manga characters, Pamila and Pfil from Bondage Fairies. BUT would anyone else know them?
 
NO

I have no idea what you are talking about. If you posted an extensive background thread of who and what they are it should be ok though.
 
Re: NO

jakelyon said:
I have no idea what you are talking about. If you posted an extensive background thread of who and what they are it should be ok though.
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Basicaly, they are lesbial fairies who help people and woodland creatures out with their sexual problems. [Think "Crocodile Hunter/ Sex Theropist"] It gets into some really REALLY weird stuf, but they are such great characters, especialy Pfil. I supose it would take way too long to explain, so I guess I'll skip it.
 
Bondage Fairies!

Wattsisnaim, Pamila and Pfil need no explanation. (Does the comic need an introduction? No, it just jumps right in!) Go for it!

-Z

I'd suggest adding a fairy thread to A Descent Into Dreams (story summary), which has a great set-up thread for some fairy action but the editor PheylonFirestorm seems to be inactive lately. However the story is set to auto-approve threads that receive 3 or more ratings of 3+, so if you think you can get two more people to vote for you (I'm in!), you should give it a go.
 
WattsIsnaim said:
Ok, quick poll. I'm thinking baout adding a thread to the RPG game story line. I would like to do acameo of two of my favoried hentai manga characters, Pamila and Pfil from Bondage Fairies. BUT would anyone else know them?
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I'll have no idea where to go with that, but just have fun man :D

we'll learn from you.
 
Re: Re: NO

WattsIsnaim said:
Basicaly, they are lesbial fairies who help people and woodland creatures out with their sexual problems. [Think "Crocodile Hunter/ Sex Theropist"] It gets into some really REALLY weird stuf, but they are such great characters, especialy Pfil. I supose it would take way too long to explain, so I guess I'll skip it.
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I have to say I like the sound of it.

:D
 
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