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POLYCHROME...a tale of many colors
(closed for Sienna, Dreamweaver and myself)
The action takes place some years ago, in the town of Clermont sur Lac, a well known artists and tourists retreat in the French Maritimes.
Julian Steele, the Professor, is an established painter, an American expatriate who has lived in Europe for more than a decade.
He spends part of each year in Clermont and owns a small house overlooking the lake.
This year he has brought someone with him. Gabrielle his lover and companion, a Parisian street girl who has set the town on its ear. She's an exotic, voluptuous creature who has all the men young and old lusting and all the women green with envy.
In spite of numerous opportunities to stray, Gabrielle seems totally devoted to the tall greying painter. That is until one day, the handsome writer comes to town.
This is a story that Sienna, Dreamweaver and myself have been working on via email for the last two weeks. It now seems the right time to bring it to LIT.
Hope you enjoy...
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Jules (Julian Steele)
The lake, as still as quicksilver at this time of the afternoon, provided the perfect background for the two pretty girls. A touch of rose madder to Hortense' cheeks, a light flecking of white for the glitter in Sophie's emerald eyes...yes...complete.
Jules stepped away from the small canvas leaning against the back of the green wrought iron bench and pronounced the work finished. A small crowd had gathered to watch and muttered in appreciation, some even clapped and then drifted away as the twins rushed around to see what the painter had done.
He looked at them in their matching yellow sundresses; lithe young bodies tanned brown by the Mediterranean sun and smiled. How gloriously young, he thought, fourteen, fifteen perhaps...
"Ahh Monsieur Steele, it is beautiful!" Hortense, the outspoken one was smiling delightedly, her arm around her sister.
"Isn't it Sophie?"
"Oh yes, mama will want to see it, I know she will."
Julian Steele carefully took the small oil sketch from the bench. "Now, now…it’s only a sketch remember, and besides any amateur with a brush, provided with such beauties before him, could have done the same."
The girls blushed, unused to flattery from so distinguished and respected a man as Professor Steele. Hortense stood on tip toe and kissed his bearded cheek,
"Let me show mama, please...please."
The painter laughed and released the work into her grasping hands, "All right, all right...you can have it. But be careful, it's still wet. And be sure to tell the Countess that it's only a sketch...remember that, only a sketch."
"Sly dog."
Graffini the poet was standing beside him. Jules lit a cigarette and watched the de Lavassere twins get into the black Peugeot limousine waiting at the park entrance. The cadaverous driver gave him an evil look and slammed the door.
"He doesn't approve of me my friend."
"He thinks you'll pluck their sweet little cherries before he does Jules. Your quite notorious you know."
The Poet sat heavily on the bench. He was fat and diabetic. The heat wasn't kind to him.
“All I wish to pluck is a bushel of francs from their mother with a portrait commission. Gabrielle has made an honest man of me."
The painter began putting his equipment away.
"Gabrielle...dolce Gabriella...what a vision...how is she in bed, old pal?. Tell me right now! What a spitfire..."
The poets voice trailed away as he imagined himself making love to the wild gypsy girl for the hundredth time.
She wasn't a real gypsy of course. Jules didn't know much about her background at all. Gabrielle was all the name she'd ever told him. Last winter a wolf-eyed waif had propositioned him on a cold back street in Paris. He'd taken her home to his bed, employed her as his model, taken her to his heart...yes he admitted it, his heart...and quickly became her protector, provider, companion and lover. She was breathtakingly beautiful, a perfect figure.
Long legs, high full breasts, a deep olive complexion, lustrous black hair, wide sensuous lips and strange grey green eyes. She might have been Basque...or Brazilian or... It was only guesses. Gabrielle claimed not to know and would tell him nothing of her past life.
She delighted him though. Oh how she delighted him! Their first weeks at lake Claire had been almost a honeymoon. She came alive in the bright fresh air of the Maritimes. He'd taken her down to the topless beaches at Antibes. They'd spent a weekend at Nice, another at Cannes. He enjoyed spoiling her; bought her all she asked for, revelled in her vitality, felt his own years drop away whenever he looked at her. He painted her over and over again. He made love to her over and over again, never tiring...
"Where is she Jules? I havn't seen her today. Is she sick?"
The poet interrupted his reverie.
"She's at the Market buying our supper I imagine."
"And she cooks too?" Graffini marvelled.
The painter laughed, "Oh yes, and quite atrociously but she's learning. You must come to dinner some evening. She...”
he stopped. Gabrielle was coming down the esplanade, shopping bags suspended from her arms and a furious look on her face.
"Uh Oh, I'm in trouble. She's found out I’ve been painting the Countess' girls all afternoon."
Graffini lurched up from the bench, "Maybe I'd better go then myfriend."
He took a last longing look at the femme fatale, "Good luck with that tiger of yours."
They'd only been in town a month, but already Gabrielle was known as much for her fiery temper as for her smouldering beauty. Steele stubbed out his cigarette and prepared for battle...
(closed for Sienna, Dreamweaver and myself)
The action takes place some years ago, in the town of Clermont sur Lac, a well known artists and tourists retreat in the French Maritimes.
Julian Steele, the Professor, is an established painter, an American expatriate who has lived in Europe for more than a decade.
He spends part of each year in Clermont and owns a small house overlooking the lake.
This year he has brought someone with him. Gabrielle his lover and companion, a Parisian street girl who has set the town on its ear. She's an exotic, voluptuous creature who has all the men young and old lusting and all the women green with envy.
In spite of numerous opportunities to stray, Gabrielle seems totally devoted to the tall greying painter. That is until one day, the handsome writer comes to town.
This is a story that Sienna, Dreamweaver and myself have been working on via email for the last two weeks. It now seems the right time to bring it to LIT.
Hope you enjoy...
****************************************************
Jules (Julian Steele)
The lake, as still as quicksilver at this time of the afternoon, provided the perfect background for the two pretty girls. A touch of rose madder to Hortense' cheeks, a light flecking of white for the glitter in Sophie's emerald eyes...yes...complete.
Jules stepped away from the small canvas leaning against the back of the green wrought iron bench and pronounced the work finished. A small crowd had gathered to watch and muttered in appreciation, some even clapped and then drifted away as the twins rushed around to see what the painter had done.
He looked at them in their matching yellow sundresses; lithe young bodies tanned brown by the Mediterranean sun and smiled. How gloriously young, he thought, fourteen, fifteen perhaps...
"Ahh Monsieur Steele, it is beautiful!" Hortense, the outspoken one was smiling delightedly, her arm around her sister.
"Isn't it Sophie?"
"Oh yes, mama will want to see it, I know she will."
Julian Steele carefully took the small oil sketch from the bench. "Now, now…it’s only a sketch remember, and besides any amateur with a brush, provided with such beauties before him, could have done the same."
The girls blushed, unused to flattery from so distinguished and respected a man as Professor Steele. Hortense stood on tip toe and kissed his bearded cheek,
"Let me show mama, please...please."
The painter laughed and released the work into her grasping hands, "All right, all right...you can have it. But be careful, it's still wet. And be sure to tell the Countess that it's only a sketch...remember that, only a sketch."
"Sly dog."
Graffini the poet was standing beside him. Jules lit a cigarette and watched the de Lavassere twins get into the black Peugeot limousine waiting at the park entrance. The cadaverous driver gave him an evil look and slammed the door.
"He doesn't approve of me my friend."
"He thinks you'll pluck their sweet little cherries before he does Jules. Your quite notorious you know."
The Poet sat heavily on the bench. He was fat and diabetic. The heat wasn't kind to him.
“All I wish to pluck is a bushel of francs from their mother with a portrait commission. Gabrielle has made an honest man of me."
The painter began putting his equipment away.
"Gabrielle...dolce Gabriella...what a vision...how is she in bed, old pal?. Tell me right now! What a spitfire..."
The poets voice trailed away as he imagined himself making love to the wild gypsy girl for the hundredth time.
She wasn't a real gypsy of course. Jules didn't know much about her background at all. Gabrielle was all the name she'd ever told him. Last winter a wolf-eyed waif had propositioned him on a cold back street in Paris. He'd taken her home to his bed, employed her as his model, taken her to his heart...yes he admitted it, his heart...and quickly became her protector, provider, companion and lover. She was breathtakingly beautiful, a perfect figure.
Long legs, high full breasts, a deep olive complexion, lustrous black hair, wide sensuous lips and strange grey green eyes. She might have been Basque...or Brazilian or... It was only guesses. Gabrielle claimed not to know and would tell him nothing of her past life.
She delighted him though. Oh how she delighted him! Their first weeks at lake Claire had been almost a honeymoon. She came alive in the bright fresh air of the Maritimes. He'd taken her down to the topless beaches at Antibes. They'd spent a weekend at Nice, another at Cannes. He enjoyed spoiling her; bought her all she asked for, revelled in her vitality, felt his own years drop away whenever he looked at her. He painted her over and over again. He made love to her over and over again, never tiring...
"Where is she Jules? I havn't seen her today. Is she sick?"
The poet interrupted his reverie.
"She's at the Market buying our supper I imagine."
"And she cooks too?" Graffini marvelled.
The painter laughed, "Oh yes, and quite atrociously but she's learning. You must come to dinner some evening. She...”
he stopped. Gabrielle was coming down the esplanade, shopping bags suspended from her arms and a furious look on her face.
"Uh Oh, I'm in trouble. She's found out I’ve been painting the Countess' girls all afternoon."
Graffini lurched up from the bench, "Maybe I'd better go then myfriend."
He took a last longing look at the femme fatale, "Good luck with that tiger of yours."
They'd only been in town a month, but already Gabrielle was known as much for her fiery temper as for her smouldering beauty. Steele stubbed out his cigarette and prepared for battle...