Camp 23. An RP proposal (OOC Discussion)

MaiusImperium

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You may skip this first section if you're new to the thread, the following few points are for people already involved in the thread.

Some Important things to think about regarding the camp :

1) – All inmates and staff are on strict birth control, so no pregnancies!

2) – Inmates sleep in co-ed dormitories that house 20 or so, paired in bunks. They are usually slightly more females than males, as the women are technically more valuable (as in, one man can impregnate several women due to the mechanics of it, etc)

3) – The dormitories are split into 4 wings (the four wings of the camp). A plan can be viewed below.

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4) – The camp is a mix between prison and hostel, there is a lot of physical training, medical check-ups, history classes/brainwashing. Inmates are given a limited amount of leisure time at the end of the day, but the eyes of the soldiers are never far away.

5) – There are a few areas where inmates can congregate and meet each other aside from their dorms, though they are closely watched. There is a cafeteria where all inmates eat, a library with very selective texts on Pronteran history and the need for eugenics. Aside from this inmates are encouraged to join their wing football (read: soccer for Americans!) teams and other sporting activities.

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Taking into consideration that not everyone likes to read weighty paragraphs of background/setting information I shall highlight in bold the most important bits, but I do hope some of you at least will read most of it to get a feel for the RP I’m proposing.

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The planet is Eloria, a world not so different to our own 50 years ago, at least in terms of topography and vegetation. The society is quite different. The planet has been bathed in nuclear war for 30 years, it’s nations are twisted and corrupt mockeries of our own. With not a shred of moral high ground to claim between the patchwork of small nations that cover the land of Eloria the mostly totalitarian states of Eloria may appear horrific and barbarous to our eyes, but one must keep in mind these nations have been forged in the fires of war and death, their armies driven by the simple instinct to survive with little heed paid to the morals we, in our comfortable homes, can afford to cherish.

Our story shall take place specifically within the borders of Federal Kingdoms of Prontera, a loosely-associated but militarily homogenous superpower of Eloria. The nuclear fire ended 5 years ago, when the brutish superpowers had finally managed to wipe off the face of Eloria all the knowledge pertaining to the creation of nuclear weaponry. What has been left is a blighted land with a sparse and sickly population. Decades of bitter warfare ensured that even after the nuclear fire stopped raining from the skies the remnants of the great nations of Eloria continued to feud and bicker over the charred wasteland that remained.

Genetic mutation is rampant, those that have survived are often bitterly deformed and stillbirths are widespread, and five years since the last bomb fell radiation poisoning is still the foremost cause of death amongst the people of Eloria.

In this world of radiation poisoning, stillbirths and horrific deformities the need for untainted and healthy males and females is the top priority for the remaining nations of Eloria, while long-broken armies fight over the last un-irradiated patches of land on Eloria there is another, more insidious war being waged, “babysnatcher” squads of covert-operation soldiers slip over national borders and spirit away babies and young children to be raised in foreign lands.

When the need is desperate they will widen their kidnappings to include older, physically matured subjects, men and women both who are tested for genetic mutation and radiation levels. The cleanest and healthiest are taken to sexual instruction camps both the males and females are indoctrinated into the host-nations ideology and put through a brutal fitness regimen. Most camps work in a similar manner, there may be a few mild differences in ideology and training methods between different nations, but ultimately they have the same effect.

These camps are run by the military, and while the Elorian states may hide behind the mantra of doing what needs to be done to survive, in reality these camps are often horrific and brutal, the camp-directors are given carte-blanche to run the camps as they see fit, so long as they produce the fit and healthy specimens required by the armies to breed genetically healthy soldiers for the ceaseless wars with each other. These reproductive camps are often little more than sex-farms, filled with corrupt guards and officials who are quite happy to take what they want from the “inmates” however the like, the people who run these camps simply do not care how these men and women are sexually conditioned, so long as their bodies are unbroken when they emerged from the “instruction”.

Most inmates are aged between 18-28, though there are often older inmates too, taken as the spoils of war and taken to these camps to “break them in”, before shipping them off with the rest to officers and the gentiles of society who can afford genetically healthy “breeding stock.”.

My SRP proposal will take place on one such camp.

Welcome to Reproductive Instruction Facility 23 – or Camp 23.

Camp 23 had been under the jurisdiction of Director-General Davus Fairwell for the past 3 years, due to reassignment to the frontlines the Camp 23 has been allocated a new director, the new director-general in charge of the camp, Ethan Tarquin will be arriving in a few short days. I intend to play the role of the new Director-General, who is effectively ultimately responsible for the running and management of the camp.

It shall be important to bear in mind that the previous Director Fairwell was a monster of a man, who had treated Camp 23 as his own sadistic sex pit until eventually complaints were raised about the damage suffered by the inmates, “damaged goods” are not acceptable and though Elorians in general will tolerate many, many vices and the abuse of many personal freedoms in the name of “survival” permanent physical harm to potential breeders is seen as a step too far.

I intend Ethan to be a hard man who will eventually soften as he grows more attached to one of the female inmates until eventually a romantic interest develops between them with a view to him fleeing the camp with her (far, far off into the future of the thread mind, I intend for the bulk of the “action” to take place within the camp itself).

What do I need? Well, mainly I need one female inmate to work with my character, Ethan, but I would PREFER it if we had a whole gamut of characters. Just a few ideas are inmates, some snatched at a young age from their homes, others the spoils of war after some battle or other, guards/soldiers, doctors, nurses and all sorts of staff for the camp.

I’m fairly open about what people want to do in this RP, there won’t be an overriding plot arc to unite all our characters, at least not initially and I’m quite happy for people to pair-off and do their own thing so long as you don’t enact silly events like the camp getting invaded by an army or crap like that.

What I’m NOT looking for are those people who cannot type in full sentences. I prefer lengthy posts but It doesn’t have to be War and Peace, reasonably correct punctuation is a must however.


If you’re interested just post here or you can PM me with your interest, I’m open to additions/changes to the setting, so please don’t hesitate to contribute. :)

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My Charaacter Bio:

Name: Ethan Tarquin

Gender: Male

Age: 32

Appearance: Ethan is a fit, tall and strapping man, he carries himself with the solid posture of a soldier. His shock of dirty blonde hair is kept short and his steely grey eyes gleam intensely from his roughly-hewn face. He is never seen around the camp out of uniform, a utilitarian black smock unmarked save for the right sleeve which carries the red/green divided flag of Prontera and the three silver pips marking him as a 3rd rank general in the military. His right breast carries the golden sigil of the Pronteran royal family: a golden hawk perched atop a medieval kite-shield.

Background: For a 3rd rank military general, Ethan is remarkably young. He has recently been transferred from commanding the 6th task force on the front lines as a “reward” for good service. Being transferred to a instruction camp was always seen as a good deal for any soldier in the Pronteran military, the camps’ relaxed attitudes to sex was well known throughout the kingdom. And now Ethan found himself in charge of one, this was a kind of unchecked power few had experienced, the authorities didn’t care what went on behind the high barb-wire fences, so long as quotas on unspoiled “breeders” were met.

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I shall edit this periodically to keep people the people interested in the thread apprised of wha'ts going on, who's doing who etc.

ME!: Ethan Tarquin, male, director-general of Camp 23.

TearsoftheWorld: Alexi MacAble, A female soldier

BritWitch: Karita, A female inmate

dailyskater: Karintha, A female inmate

Kuuroinochou: Remi Devoraux, a female inmate

gagonthis: Blest 67, a male inmate.

Muser400: Xaver "Xav" Moran, a male soldier.

Bluemage: Felix Castman, a male inmate

Ok, we've got a nice mix of guys and gals now. We're still open to new inmates, if you can find an opposite to play with.
 
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Wow, that's quite the intro, but I'm fairly interested if you'll have me. Need to re-read to get better grasp though
 
Yes, that's fine, I do tend to ramble on. I shall probably work to make it more concise and easier on the eyes later. Take your time, thanks for showing interest :)
 
thingy ^_^

I love that word, I don't use it enough.


I'm working on bio, etc. but for now I'll just say that if it's ok my character will be one of the female soldiers, hope that's ok ^_^
 
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Thingy is, in my humble opinion, a much undervalued word ;)

I think I'd rather be an inmate if that's ok...? :eek:
 
im in too if you'll have me!! ill do a bio and stuff once we've started. i'll try and do long posts but sometimes due to lack of time, they may be a little short but i'll make up for it in the next post.

btw, could i be an inmate please???
 
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All three of you are welcome to join, inmates and soldiers are all good (glad we can get a female soldier in particular, I dig chicks with guns! :D).

dailyskater, shorter posts are fine if the full-stops and commas are in the right places. :)

So, three ladies on board! (oh my!), any blokes out there? C'mon, I know you're out there! You know you wanna play! Can't have all three girlies to myself :p

EDIT: Just to say, I shall work on my bio after dinner (couple of hours) and get that posted, hopefully it'll give people a feel for the camp. If I get time tonight I'll also "clear up" all that background/setting stuff, make it a little more concise and easier to comprehend. ;)
 
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I'll jump in as an inmate with a profile later today, feeling a bit under the weather right now.
 
Welcome aboard! Ok, I think we have plenty of girls now (though I'm not closed to others joining, if maybe some have bisexual tendencies). Hopefully we can stir up interest for some guys to jump in, don't want anyone feeling left out.
 
Karita
20
Long dark brown hair
Bright green eyes
Fair, freckled skin
Generous chest, narrow waisted with rounded hips
A virgin, she had lied about her health, saying her mother had been deformed and the liklihood of her own children bearing the same genetic problem was high. The lie had worked, until her capture.

She was captured just beyond the borders of Prontera, part of a rebel group fighting to free those within the breeding camps, she was being brought to Camp 23 for punishment and, after testing they discovered she was in fact healthy and of a suitable age, for 'instruction'.
She knew what went on within the walls of the camps, having freed many men and women, all psychologically groomed to believe their sole role was to please those in power over them and to breed. To conceive children who would grow to bear arms for the army.
She had fought and struggled but had easily been overpowered and now she found herself tightly bound and en route to Camp 23.

Hope that's ok... :eek:
 
I'm in, sounds like a real good story idea.
I'll also have to work on a profile thingy... heh.
 
Hey there!

I'm brand new to these forums, but I'd love to join this! I'll make up a profile for a bloke. Would you rather an inmate or a soldier?


Cheers =D
 
Karintha
19
5 ft 8 ins
shoulder length dark brown hair
baby blue eyes
lightly browned skin from spending alot of time in her mothers garden and allotment (her father went off to help fight the war and died in battle)
large breasts, curvy body where it counts
A virgin, saving herself for marriage, at least she was
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Karintha was on her hands and knees in the allotment when she heard the screams of her mother. she started to run towards the house when 2 masked people came out and started to walk towards her. she made to turn and run but another masked person smacked her in the back of the head with their gun.

she came around in the back of a van with other women.
 
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I was thinking I'd play a male innmate Muser, so if you wanted a choice I'd go with soldier just so there's not an overwhelming number of inmates to soldiers.. heh
 
Blest 67
6'3
200 lbs. sculpted muscle
Cold steel grey eyes
short black hair

Christoff Bleston was a special ops soldier for one of the many enemies of Prontara (don't want to invent a name if you have the other nation names already decided) who was captured during a mission deep inside Prontera territory. The rest of his squad met with death, but he was shipped off to Camp 23 when it was discovered he was an untainted human, a surprise to find in a special ops soldier, as most nations would not risk their breeding stock as soldiers. Still Bleston, or Blest as he was known in his squad, was too good at what he did to be kept as a breeder, though now it appeared that is what he would be, for the enemy. He had been trained to resist though and would need to be broken. When asked his name he would only respond with his squad nickname and his assigned soldier number, 67.
 
Name:Alexi MacAble
Age: 24
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 121 lbs.
Eyes: Hazel eyes
Hair: Short brown hair cut just above her ears
Fair, tan skin
Cupsize: 36D
Appearance: http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/57/1nv7.png
Bio: Alexi had been working at Camp 23 for a little over a year and a half. She had seen the effects of war, and she had seen the results that the camps produced. She marvelled at the "requirements" that the camps needed, and yet she bottled up her human morals and inhibitions in the hope that what they were doing was the for the best. There was also the plus sides to having her job: she had access to nearly all the inmates, both male and female alike.
 
Name: Xaver "Xav" Moran
Age: 27
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 185
Eyes: Green
Hair: Dark blonde, long in the front and short in the back.
Skin tone: Somewhat tanned.

Xaver, quite bluntly, is a prick. A born and raised Pronteran (or whatever it might be), he truly believes that what is happening in these camps is the right course of action. He joined the ranks of the Militia at 18, and worked his way up. As he himself believes that he is God's (what do they believe in on Eloria, btw?) gift to anything of the female persuasion, he found quite a home in Camp 23 when he arrived there. Cocky, vain, sociopathic and always up for a good shag, Xaver takes great advantage of the women here in Camp 23, almost on a daily basis. He respects the Director-General a great deal, and is eager to assist with anything.
 
Ok, looking good so far guys, 3 girls and 3 guys should make a good balance, though we're still open to new players if you're at all interested. Edited in my character bio in my original post.

I should probably formulate some camp rules for the inmates to abide by, but for the moment the only IC rule is pregnancies between inmates and staff are NOT permitted and result in summary abortion. Don't worry, this won't effect any part of the role-play, male and female staff are given birth control pills (yeah, they have a male version in this reality, lazy but sue me :p)

This is really just because most staff will have some sort of genetic decay/mutation that would lead to tainted offspring and such unions are forbidden in most nations (including prontera). This is a (somewhat inneffective) method of trying to control the population of "tainted" until there are only purebreeds remaining.

I'm thinking the opening of the thread will be an inspection type deal, my character Ethan will have arrived at the camp in the early morning and we'll have all the inmates lined up in the central courtyard, stripped bare, for "inspection". Naturally all the soldiers will also be in attendance too, with their big guns and mean dispositions ;) It'll be a good starting point, we can all pair off from their.

As for the camp, I don't like to draw parrelells with something as macabre as nazi death-camps, BUT if you've seen Shindler's list, the camp has a simliar layout (erm, minus the ovens and the genocidal tendencies) and a similar feel, though the inmates live in slightly better conditions.

I shall work on starting the IC thread this evening and should have the IC thread up by tomorrow morning at the latest. I'll probably get it done before I go to bed tonight really, but just avoiding making promises I can't keep :)
 
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I shall work on starting the IC thread this evening and should have the IC thread up by tomorrow morning at the latest. I'll probably get it done before I go to bed tonight really, but just avoiding making promises I can't keep :)

Might miss the opening of the thread if it's in the morning...*grumbles about her job getting in the way of her internet fun*...but will post as soon as I can :D
 
im on tonight but tomoz might be a late post be late cause of work and other comitments, but i'll try really really hard
xxxx
 
Ok, the IC thread is posted here .

It is rather long, I make no apologies for that but I shall summarise the opening post here.

Ethan Tarquin has arrived in the early morning for his introductory inspection/tour of Camp 23. All inmates have been stripped bare for "appraisal" and are formed in ranks for the inspection in the central courtyard. Here the most desirable male and female inmates are taken as personal pleasure-slaves (whatever you wanna call them) for the officers and certain low-ranking soldiers as reward for faithful service. I'm thinking from this inspection we can pair-off, soldiers can take whichever inmates they like and do what you will with them ;) (with OOC consent, of course!)

My character, Ethan Tarquin will be playing with Britwitch's own Karita, though as the big cheese Ethan might sleep around a bit, really depends.

I'm fairly open about what goes on in the camp, the inmates have a lot of physical training aswell as theory classes and brainwashing sermons about the survival of the species and about how wonderful Prontera is, so use your initiative.
 
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Name: Remi Devoraux
Age: 20
Height: 5ft 3in
Weight: 113lbs
Eyes: Violet
Hair: Ash Blonde
Appearance: Click
Bio: As the daughter of a well known militia leader, Remi was set to live a decent life away from the instruction camps. Her father had fought long and hard to keep her hidden knowing of her 'breeding' status. On the outskirts of Prontera, the militia group housed many instruction camp refugees that managed to get free through some means or another.

However, this did not last long as a group of military ops raided the encampement taking her father's life, along with many 'breeding stock' and Remi herself. The next thing she knew she was apart of the instruction camps she'd been sheltered from, scared and lonely she hasn't said much since her prisonment.
 
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Not going to have time to post this morning, time's running away from me a little :eek:
But will work on something and post when I get home later on today :D
Excellent beginning by the way...this looks like it's going to be fun ;)
 
hey i had like to join in too
If you need players do let me know please
 
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