Rape Fantasy Island

So the idea for the story is that a guy inherits an island and money from a crazy aunt (or maybe buys the island with the money). Anyway, he falls in love with the short story "The Most Dangerous Game" but doesn't want to kill anyone. So he comes up with the idea of paying women to run on the island. If they can make it to the far side they are free and get the money, if not he rapes them when he catches them.

Anyway, I have never even thought of writing a nonconsentual story until now, but this concept intrigues me. I would like input on what sort of motivation the girls would have to run, aside from the money? Or would money be enough to risk rape? Are rape fantasies really that common, or rather would there be women who would doing it hoping to lose?

Actually, it could probably be a series of stories, with a different girl running in each.

Why just girls?

Why just women running? If it's "Fantasy Island" he can give any person (male or female) their fantasy to be the persuer or the runner, can't he? And pay or trick or threaten their opposite number into chasing or being chased. You could have a a story where a guy is told "You have to find and have sex with this girl or you'll lose your job." And he could say to a girl, "We've got your guy on the run over here, now it's up to you to catch him and arouse him...."

And then there's gays, lesbians and transexuals, too.

With a potential concept like this, why limit yourself to just guys chasing girls?

3113 said:

Why just women running? If it's "Fantasy Island" he can give any person (male or female) their fantasy to be the persuer or the runner, can't he? And pay or trick or threaten their opposite number into chasing or being chased. You could have a a story where a guy is told "You have to find and have sex with this girl or you'll lose your job." And he could say to a girl, "We've got your guy on the run over here, now it's up to you to catch him and arouse him...."

And then there's gays, lesbians and transexuals, too.

With a potential concept like this, why limit yourself to just guys chasing girls?

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3113,That is what I call creative thinking!My compliments to you.

3113 said:

Why just women running? If it's "Fantasy Island" he can give any person (male or female) their fantasy to be the persuer or the runner, can't he? And pay or trick or threaten their opposite number into chasing or being chased. You could have a a story where a guy is told "You have to find and have sex with this girl or you'll lose your job." And he could say to a girl, "We've got your guy on the run over here, now it's up to you to catch him and arouse him...."

And then there's gays, lesbians and transexuals, too.

With a potential concept like this, why limit yourself to just guys chasing girls?

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I don't think he's really going for a "Fantasy Island" vibe.

He said he wants to play at being General Zaroff, without actually killing anyone.

Couldn't you say that if the girls get captured he would put them into bondage like BDSM. If they reach a mark then they get say 4 million dollars.

If they are captured and then escape and reach their mark, they win their freedom and 2 million dollars.

If they are released, they get their freedom and 1 million dollars.

If he decides to keep the captives, then they are his.

So,

A girl get captured and is put into bondage with woman that have been in their for months. She see women going through pain, but they like the torture.

Shendude said:

I don't think he's really going for a "Fantasy Island" vibe.

He said he wants to play at being General Zaroff, without actually killing anyone.

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I did figure that, but it is called "Fantasy Island," and there was the mention of more than one story. If it's just "dangerous game," well, that sounds like one story to me, not several. The only variation you get with that is in what kind of girl you chase down. There's the terrified girl, the bold girl, the bratty girl...but it's still chase down and "dominate" the girl over and over again.

If that's the only fantasy this person wants to play on this island, hey, more power to them. But, personally, I think the concept could be richer than that and more fun could be had with it.

This is something like the Movie Saw....only non horror and sexual instead..

coochie said:

Couldn't you say that if the girls get captured he would put them into bondage like BDSM. If they reach a mark then they get say 4 million dollars.

If they are captured and then escape and reach their mark, they win their freedom and 2 million dollars.

If they are released, they get their freedom and 1 million dollars.

If he decides to keep the captives, then they are his.

So,

A girl get captured and is put into bondage with woman that have been in their for months. She see women going through pain, but they like the torture.

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I had thought of an angle where if they get caught, part of the deal is they have to submit to him for a fixed period of time. Or at least the whole adventure is limited to something like 30 days. So if they stay out of his reach for 29 days, they only have to be his victim for a day.

3113 said:

I did figure that, but it is called "Fantasy Island," and there was the mention of more than one story. If it's just "dangerous game," well, that sounds like one story to me, not several. The only variation you get with that is in what kind of girl you chase down. There's the terrified girl, the bold girl, the bratty girl...but it's still chase down and "dominate" the girl over and over again.

If that's the only fantasy this person wants to play on this island, hey, more power to them. But, personally, I think the concept could be richer than that and more fun could be had with it.

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When I originally envisioned the concept, I did picture he would go through different types of girls. Specifically I thought he would first get a relatively normal girl who made it too easy or gave up, then an athlete who was helpless/lost in the woods, then a hiker type who almost wins.

But I also thought that there would be a chaperone to make sure that the limited rules were followed (no killing or maiming, that the hunter doesn't cheat by using a homing device or such, basically ensuring the "safety" of the participant). It then occured to me that the lawyer (who I pictured as female) was unexpectedly turned on and asked to have her own run as the hunter (although it could work as the hunted as well). It's a bit obvious for her to be the "bull-dyke" type, so hunting a man would work as well as a woman.

From there it could spawn off in any number of directions, but personally I wouldn't know how or would want to write something that is other than MF+ or FF. Although the concluding part of the story could be the man "finding his calling" and opening the "Rape Fantasy Island Resort" where people of all orientations could choose their desired victim type and hunt (and where victims could volunteer to be hunted).

This could make for an interesting story. I could also see it in the SRP section. I'd love to write parts of it. I'd want to make it a fairly long chase situation.

Yes, rape fantasies are very common and not just for women.

Fury

only_more_so said:

I had thought of an angle where if they get caught, part of the deal is they have to submit to him for a fixed period of time. Or at least the whole adventure is limited to something like 30 days. So if they stay out of his reach for 29 days, they only have to be his victim for a day.

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He's going to tie her up so she has no choice in what he does to her, right? She has no choice but to submit. She has to stay away to be free of him, so he can't touch her

coochie said:

He's going to tie her up so she has no choice in what he does to her, right? She has no choice but to submit. She has to stay away to be free of him, so he can't touch her

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Well, he does have to catch her first. Part of the input I will want/need is also what restrictions are placed on the guy doing the hunting, ie how sporting will he make it. He would probably have rope, but anything else? Remember he isn't trying to he doesn't want to hurt the prey (is that contradictory?!?), but a survival type knife for making snares and woman-traps? A tranq dart gun?

only_more_so said:

A tranq dart gun?

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I think any kind of dart gun is "unsportman." If he wants to make if fair, then he has to trap her. It's too easy to get her from long distance if he has any kind of gun or arrow. All he has to do in that case is lie in wait and shoot.

The Rape Island Gaming idea is pretty good. I don't think he has to limit it simply to just women. Perhaps the island is at first simply for his pleasure- but maybe he has a bit of a voyeur in him.... He could accept applications or go out looking for people who would want to participate or who he would like to watch participate.... This would open the door for all sorts of stories. Some women could be chosen for their excessive reliance on the "tease" to get their way. Revenge for divorced spouses or cheated-on partners. Fetishes, incest, gay (NC sex is an interesting way of coming out), straight, everything is opened up. You just need to let the juices flow!

If there is any interest in developing this further I would love to hear about it.

Sound kind of like a porn-rape version of Japanese movie Battle Royale,,,filled with AV girls....I like the sound of that!!!

3113 said:

I think any kind of dart gun is "unsportman." If he wants to make if fair, then he has to trap her. It's too easy to get her from long distance if he has any kind of gun or arrow. All he has to do in that case is lie in wait and shoot.

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He could have restaints, but nothing metal like handcuffs, and he would have to catch her without aid of vehicles or other things. It would have to be even. Even if he catches her, he would have to get the restaints on her without hurting her. She doesn't have to just give up, so she shouldn't be in fear of getting hurt.

A captive could be held for months, because of the payoff she'd get if she gets away. That would be the man's reward. The woman's reward would be the money she could win.

This way both the woman and the man would try really hard to win. Maybe if captive she gets nothing.

Also, have camera's rolling so that everyone can see what is happening. Including the capture torture-teasing and sex. To make other women want to play.

I think if you want the story (however fantasized) to come across as real, you need to understand that the only women who would participate willingly were those who were either super confident in their victory (and thus assured the money) or the women who believe they would enjoy the sexual experience (thus assured to lose). It would seem more realistic to make freedom the prize. If a woman can get across the island than she is allowed to go free- a single person motorboat with an extra can of gas and a few bottles of water will be waiting for her. The alternative is a lifetime on the island as a collectible in this guy's den of sexual trophies. Perhaps he could sell some of them off after the fact to the rich rulers of third world countries who enjoy the hunt as well.

Most women would be extraordinarily cautious to sign up for this contest regardless of how much the monetary gain would be. I enjoy rape fantasies and being tied up, but only with people I am at least semi-familiar with. 2 million, 20 million, 200 million wouldn't really be worth the risk for me in a dangerous and uncontrollable situation like that.

The motivation for the man/ men is sex in a way in which society does not permit. "The return to the hunter" or something like that. Noncensual sex is a way of expressing dominance over another person or the societal laws which would normally keep one from behaving with such licentiousness. Of course, we all understand that fantasized nonconsensual sex is much more enjoyable for both parties and that is what this should be. My best experiences with this type of thing in reality have been the ones which seemed most real. A roommate of mine surprising me with a guy friend- tying me up while masked and proceeding to "rape me". And I think that sense of reality would really help people and I get off!

Athena_e19 said:

I think if you want the story (however fantasized) to come across as real, you need to understand that the only women who would participate willingly were those who were either super confident in their victory (and thus assured the money) or the women who believe they would enjoy the sexual experience (thus assured to lose). It would seem more realistic to make freedom the prize.

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Some girls might do it because they're daredevil thrill-seeker types, I suppose. Wasn't there a guy a few years ago who was offering money for women to run accross some land he owned wearing nothing but a pair of running shoes while guys tried to hunt them with paintball guns? If the girl made it to the finish line, she got some kind of large cash prize, and I think the guys got cash prizes for tagging the girls.

Chain Story?

only_more_so said:

From there it could spawn off in any number of directions, but personally I wouldn't know how or would want to write something that is other than MF+ or FF.

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Why not make this a "Chain Story"? That way you could write your MF & FF Rape Fantasy Island stories, but open it to other authors to write...well, almost any variety of hunt-down tales? Including women chasing down cheating men, gay men tracking down flirtatious gays, even someone hunting down more than one person for group sex.

To make it even more interesting, the island could have different hunting "landscapes." Why just jungle, after all? There could be caves, mazes, ruins, even a town.

I think, as well, that you can crack this open wide fantasy-wise. Some people can be lured in contest-wise (for money), some for the thrill, if the owner wants a "fair" contest. But as it is a "fantasy"--you can have a tale where, say, that cheating husband is dart-gunned and transfered to the island, waking up to find himself in loincloth and with a knife--ordered to run from cheated wife. If he gets to freedom, he goes home. If he's captured...cheated wife gets to have her way with him.

It's all up to the Island owner, after all. He may want to grant certain people a hunt for the sake of justice or love, not just the thrill of the hunt or voyerism.

Texguy84 said:

Some girls might do it because they're daredevil thrill-seeker types, I suppose. Wasn't there a guy a few years ago who was offering money for women to run accross some land he owned wearing nothing but a pair of running shoes while guys tried to hunt them with paintball guns? If the girl made it to the finish line, she got some kind of large cash prize, and I think the guys got cash prizes for tagging the girls.

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Yes, there was. It was called something like "hunting Bambi." The girls were paid and willing though I understand paint balls hurt like a bitch.

Fury

I think tranquilizer dart guns would be HOT!

Fury

FurryFury said:

I think tranquilizer dart guns would be HOT!

Fury

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So the girls get the guns, cool *giggles*

coochie said:

So the girls get the guns, cool *giggles*

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I happen to like guns. Tranqs are fun too!

Fury

3113 said:

Why not make this a "Chain Story"? That way you could write your MF & FF Rape Fantasy Island stories, but open it to other authors to write...well, almost any variety of hunt-down tales? Including women chasing down cheating men, gay men tracking down flirtatious gays, even someone hunting down more than one person for group sex.

To make it even more interesting, the island could have different hunting "landscapes." Why just jungle, after all? There could be caves, mazes, ruins, even a town.

I think, as well, that you can crack this open wide fantasy-wise. Some people can be lured in contest-wise (for money), some for the thrill, if the owner wants a "fair" contest. But as it is a "fantasy"--you can have a tale where, say, that cheating husband is dart-gunned and transfered to the island, waking up to find himself in loincloth and with a knife--ordered to run from cheated wife. If he gets to freedom, he goes home. If he's captured...cheated wife gets to have her way with him.

It's all up to the Island owner, after all. He may want to grant certain people a hunt for the sake of justice or love, not just the thrill of the hunt or voyerism.

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I guess there are basically two types of situations for this story idea. The first is the more hunt aspect of the game. Someone who brings prey to the island and hunts them for the sport of the hunt (and the pleasure of the sex). The second is closer to real rape, where the concentration is on the domination of the victim/prey by the rapist/hunter.

The first is what I was really more interested in writing. I think it provides for a deeper story, and I guess I don't think I could really write a "real" rape story.

I think the second could be a very intersting chain story. With a Mister Roarke (an extremely weathly voyeur perhaps?) and a really creepy Tattoo (more like Hervé Villechaize's character in The Man with The Golden Gun, except with sex instead of violence). And perhaps it would be more in dealing with the title "Rape Fantasy Island". So every rape fantasy could be another episode of the show.

How are chain stories arranged anyway?

FurryFury said:

I happen to like guns. Tranqs are fun too!

Fury

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So if the man trys to capture the girl she can shoot him with a tranq and tie him up and torture him, and then she goes and captures the flag.