N8Dreams
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- Joined
- Nov 6, 2003
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Ahhhhhhh
Alle Lurkers, Spanners, Wankers und Voyeurs sind falsch hier.
Hier gibt’s nichts zu sehen. Ihr könnt weg klicken.
Warum der Thread dann so heißt?
DAS nennt man Werbung oder Promotion.
Nun gut, ihr wolltet es nicht anders, ich starte ein neues Thread.
Laßt uns darüber reden, was eine gute und was eine schlechte Story macht.
Ich selber könnte es nicht besser ausdrücken wie jener Leidensgenosse, der mir aus vollem Herzen spricht:
“I see a lot of shallow writing on this sites, dull characters, boring chliches and worst of all, horrible plot and development. There are some good writers here, no doubt, but so far most of what I have read is just cheese, there is no other way to mention it, its boring to read, disgusting, no structure and very narrow development if the story even develops, though most do not, its just mash of thrown together vulgarities in hope of achieving erection, there are much more creative ways to describe a scene of lovers in love, better terms to bring detail and emotion into play, most of which are completely absent from what I have read, though I am still searching.
I will not embarrass anyone here by naming names but writers please, it's like being back highschool with all the "yeah it was like..." or "her huge tits..." and "my massive cock..." that is cheese, its dull, its boring, it sux. If the story has meaning or is trying to achieve something, don't destroy it by killing the flavor with highschool phrasing and adolescent mentality, we are all adults here so lets all try to act like it by writing like it, hell bathroom walls have offered more in the ways of creativity, sorry for being so honest, and if I have offended you or your story....GOOD...
Somebody had to grow the balls to speak up, to the others, the GOOD writers, keep up the excellent work, you have skill and its nice to see it and fun to read…”
Ich hätte es nicht besser sagen können.
Für wen schreiben wir?
Warum schreiben wir?
Was ich beabsichtige?
Vielleicht - Ein paar Guidelines
„How to write a pretty story“,
“The real turn offs”
Eine Sammlung guter Geschichten?
Etwas tun gegen schlechte Geschichten?
Und vielleicht zuletzt – am wichtigsten – ein paar bessere Geschichten hier.
CALL FOR DISCUSSION!
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