Tank Top Weather

As I typed an email to a friend commenting upon how nice the scenery was, I thought, "there must be a Literotica story in this..."

But I've been thinking on it for a few days, and it's still mushy like runny mashed potatoes.

... and then there are leggings...

in my youth (young adulthood), no proper woman would wear just leggings, now everybody seems to. Which provides great scenery when they jog...or just bend over.

I'm thinking "mature category potential?"

And cameltoes are in abundance !

"...I see the girls walk by, dressed in their summer clothes
I have to turn my head until my darkness goes..."
--M.Jagger

Hypoxia said:

"...I see the girls walk by, dressed in their summer clothes
I have to turn my head until my darkness goes..."
--M.Jagger

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I wonder what Mick`s Lit username is.

I woud love

Tank tops are sexy and peeking and teasing are fun but I fear they aren't as sexy as or don't take readers to a strong, satisfying finish.

Take this story line:

It's finally hot out in a northern state and a woman in her 40s/50s gets to get outside. Her neighbor's kid, who's a senior or is 18-20, has creeped on her the past few years because she stays in shape but is still curvy and round. She knows he watches her when she's outside so she decides to have some fun. She puts on a loose cotton tank-top, skips the bra because she wants and likes the attention and goes outside. She sees movement in his bedroom window and knows he's looking while she pretends to look around the yard at her landscaping. Lots of bending over happens and peeks of flesh and hints of rosy, hardened nipples pop out.

The neighbor's kid comes outside to get a better look and can't really conceal his gaze going back and forth while she's talking to him and pulling a weed there or a stick and he's set up on the fence between their yards, enjoying the view.

Now, I could not in good conscience have her just suddenly fuck the kid or jerk him off. She works him up, she shows him skin in her tank, and then ... that's kind of it.

I imagine the L/W crowd would come over to criticize and attack me there. So how does exhib/voy have a 'good ending'? She didn't tease the neighbor to get turned on herself, it was more an act of charity for him to give him a little something. She could rub one out but, eh.

What's the ending?

Hypoxia said:

"...I see the girls walk by, dressed in their summer clothes
I have to turn my head until my darkness goes..."
--M.Jagger

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I love that song. I'm guessing that the narrator has been through a bad break-up, but he also seems to be having some kind of mental instability about it. One interpretation, anyway.

I remember when halter tops were a big thing; that was when I was in high school years ago. Sometimes girls would bring along a shirt if they wanted to cover up, but mostly they shamelessly walked around in classrooms and the hallways showing themselves off.

I remember sitting in a history class and there was a girl named Nancy in the front row wearing a halter. I could clearly see the side of a her right breast. I'm sure the little vixen knew what she was doing.

gunhilltrain said:

I remember when halter tops were a big thing; that was when I was in high school years ago. Sometimes girls would bring along a shirt if they wanted to cover up, but mostly they shamelessly walked around in classrooms and the hallways showing themselves off.

I remember sitting in a history class and there was a girl named Nancy in the front row wearing a halter. I could clearly see the side of a her right breast. I'm sure the little vixen knew what she was doing.

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in my day they used to send girls home if they dressed like that.

High point was in senior year when one buxom lass took off her sweater to reveal she was braless under a sheer top.

sirhugs said:

in my day they used to send girls home if they dressed like that.

High point was in senior year when one buxom lass took off her sweater to reveal she was braless under a sheer top.

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This was in New York City, 1969 to 1973. The city was a liberal (and increasingly feminist) stronghold, so girls did not get sent home as far as I remember. They usually didn't wear bras under their halter tops. I remember fewer halters in college (also in New York) but I'm not sure why. They seemed to go out of fashion perhaps.

There was also the young science teacher in high school who wore hot pants to class one day. She only did it once. I'm not sure if it was her own choice to give them up or if the administration had a word with her. It definitely was distracting.

It's a hot day at the Mojave Desert convent, the AC has broken down, and Mother Superior and all Sisters are wearing formal wifebeaters aka tanktops. Jesus looks down from the sky at all his beautiful brides and licks His lips.

That's the ending. The story should write itself.

I miss halters immensely, but still sometimes sighted:

https://live.staticflickr.com/3860/14908287159_7285fd07f7.jpgrelaxed by Yowser, on Flickr

yowser said:

I miss halters immensely, but still sometimes sighted:

https://live.staticflickr.com/3860/14908287159_7285fd07f7.jpgrelaxed by Yowser, on Flickr

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That woman looks "pleasingly plump." She also looks a bit old for a halter, which seemed to end for women beyond their early twenties if not even earlier. I remember when one magazine years ago (New York?) had a whole article about girls in halters.

I'll have to be aware of New York female fashions this summer. Short shorts seem to be big recently, plus lots of bare midriffs. Also, there are some of those "ripped" pants that are more hole than cloth.

gunhilltrain said:

That woman looks "pleasingly plump." She also looks a bit old for a halter, which seemed to end for women beyond their early twenties if not even earlier. I remember when one magazine years ago (New York?) had a whole article about girls in halters.

I'll have to be aware of New York female fashions this summer. Short shorts seem to be big recently, plus lots of bare midriffs. Also, there are some of those "ripped" pants that are more hole than cloth.

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not to mention that her belt could be a bondage accessory

Rude much.

Daddysgirlfl said:

Rude much.

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????????

Forget tank tops. Remember tube tops?

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Carnevil9 said:

Forget tank tops. Remember tube tops?

https://di2ponv0v5otw.cloudfront.net/posts/2020/08/21/5f406e169bd5efc54fe09c69/m_5f406e73c693bdd0dae25da3.jpeg

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They also seem to have gone out of fashion. When was their peak; the 1990s?

Tube tops rule! One does see them once in a while on campus, but not nearly enough.

As for a potential story idea

Obviously a woman displaying her luscious breasts through a white tank top would be the expected setting. A hot summer day, a mother removes her blouse to her camisole, when son and a few of his friends come in. Her blouse is in the other room and she doesn't have time to go fetch it. Of course, all the guys, son included, can't help but take extra glances, and she notices, finding herself turned on by the situation...

Or, a college girl is working a landscaping job one summer, being the only girl she is teased a lot, but does her share of the work. One hot summer day, all the guys strip off their shirts while working, she can't help but also strip off her shirt down to her tank top, forgetting that she is braless...

Boyfriend/husband dares his partner to go to the mall wearing only a tank top. He follows her discreetly, filming the reaction of men taking a double take, including a few who are hit on the arms by their wives/gfs when caught looking. After her day of shopping, both of them are quite turned on and don't make it out of the parking lot, fucking with wild abandon in their car...

Lost_Yonder said:

...a college girl is working a landscaping job one summer, being the only girl she is teased a lot, but does her share of the work. One hot summer day, all the guys strip off their shirts while working, she can't help but also strip off her shirt down to her tank top, forgetting that she is braless...

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A male does not 'forget' that he lacks a jockstrap. A female does not 'forget' that she lacks a bra. Not unless either is quite fucking stoned. Perhaps her landscaping crew is planting decorative cannabis bushes and she soaked much primo resin through her hand calluses? Otherwise, her stripping is deliberate.

Tube tops

Then, of course, the "tubette top."

https://live.staticflickr.com/4103/4957583834_66d93a59ca_c.jpgDancing by Yowser, on Flickr

yowser said:

Then, of course, the "tubette top."

https://live.staticflickr.com/4103/4957583834_66d93a59ca_c.jpgDancing by Yowser, on Flickr

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I like the lady in the see-through skirt and the black underpants. Obviously, the photographer liked her too, because she shows up several times. Well, I assume that you, Yowser, were the photographer. Was there a festival going on somewhere that day?

Tank-top weather? After acclimating to Alaska for a few years, January is tank-top weather when returning to California. And it's tank-top time all year in Central America... except for locals. I saw an energetic bicyclist wearing a heavy sweater in 92f heat in Yucatan because that was a cool day there. I recall reading of folks in Yemen complaining that 80f was bitterly cold.

So it's all a matter of context and location.

Hypoxia said:

Tank-top weather? After acclimating to Alaska for a few years, January is tank-top weather when returning to California. And it's tank-top time all year in Central America... except for locals. I saw an energetic bicyclist wearing a heavy sweater in 92f heat in Yucatan because that was a cool day there. I recall reading of folks in Yemen complaining that 80f was bitterly cold.

So it's all a matter of context and location.

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I realize it isn't this thread, but a festival is an excellent NND setting.

gunhilltrain said:

I like the lady in the see-through skirt and the black underpants. Obviously, the photographer liked her too, because she shows up several times. Well, I assume that you, Yowser, were the photographer. Was there a festival going on somewhere that day?

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Thanks, yes on both counts, an annual music festival in Northern California, a casualty of the current health climate, I'll miss its happening again this year.

Sirhugs, I agree that festivals can present a huge array of plot ideas, dancing, hedonism, outdoors, etc. But I am afraid I do not know what 'NND' means?

Dancing girl:

https://live.staticflickr.com/4788/38986936870_7ae75dc6d8.jpgMovin' by Yowser, on Flickr