A thought

alias x said:

I banged my foot. It hurt a lot. The resulting sound I made was a kind of muted "OH, oh, oh" sound. A bit later, I contemplated that such sighs, had they been a bit louder, may have been interpretted as being the sounds of sex. I wonder if this could be turned into a story.

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alias x said:

I banged my foot. It hurt a lot. The resulting sound I made was a kind of muted "OH, oh, oh" sound. A bit later, I contemplated that such sighs, had they been a bit louder, may have been interpretted as being the sounds of sex. I wonder if this could be turned into a story.

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alias x said:

I have no clue. Still, Hallowed Eve's idea has promise. Something like this:

Protagonist is narrating story. He hears a very brief set of sighs, goes off on a tangent about his fantasies about what she was doing, scene pans to her room, where she is nursing her leg from banging it.

Alternatively, he confronts her, goes off on his fantasies and tries to get her to tell him what happened, they have sex, then she finally tells him she'd just banged her leg.

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Hallowed Eve said:

I see it as the "whole story" is the neighbor's fantasy of what's going on next door...and maybe adding a small bit in the end of what really happened. IE: Neighbor bursts his bubble...

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alias x said:

Agreed, but an alternative is for that "whole story" to be the guy telling it to his neighbor rather than just imagining it. Neighbor can burst his bubble after she screws him in that case

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Hallowed Eve said:

YOU write it. I've got too much to do right now as is!

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Hallowed Eve said:

Sucking Daddy's cock is just yet another thing on my "to do" list.

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sirhugs said:

now there's a story idea...a young woman with a serious "To Do" list...very methodical. While she's not looking, someone write's "suck Daddy's coclk" on the list. When she reaches it, she does....

twist is ...who wrote it there?

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togitc said:

for me that makes things a bit too hokey.

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sirhugs said:

how about big brother, who wants to secretly watch?

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togitc said:

that could work. like a fantasy he has but didn't think it would actually happen.

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