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CutieMouse said:

teasing can be fun

What an interesting road trip that could make...3 subbies heading to DVS's... there has to be a Christmas carol parody in there somewhere....

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The Three Wize Ass Subbies who've traveled from afar, "bare-ing" their gifts (gleaming shackles made of silver and gold to tempt DVS, Wine and other spirits to mellow his stamina and soften his swing and lots of lubrication and sauve, in case it doesn't) singing "I'm Dreaming of a Red Ass Christmas."

cellis said:

Or DVS Santa visiting 3 subbies... Christmas... New Years and of course, my birthday!

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Cellis, it would always be your birthday, when I'd come to visit you. And, you'd be sure to get that same present...over and over again.

OMG ...

DVS said:

The Three Wize Ass Subbies who've traveled from afar, "bare-ing" their gifts (gleaming shackles made of silver and gold to tempt DVS, Wine and other spirits to mellow his stamina and soften his swing and lots of lubrication and sauve, in case it doesn't) singing "I'm Dreaming of a Red Ass Christmas."

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I fell out of my chair I laughed so hard! You are incorrigible, DVS!

Esclava

DVS said:

Cellis, it would always be your birthday, when I'd come to visit you. And, you'd be sure to get that same present...over and over again.

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Oh goody goody....

Damn, this installment is getting long. I might have to break it up into two. Right now, I've got about 4,300 words, and I'm about 75% finished with it. Most of the installments have been about 2,500-3,000 words.

If I cut it up, I'll have to find a good spot to do that, so I can torment you readers with a bit of a cliff hanger. That way, you will be drooling in anticipation of the second part. I like to keep my readers drooling, when I can.

Anyway, there should be something posted here, sometime today. If I can't find a decent spot to break it up, I'll have to wait and post it finished. Either way, you'll get something within the next 6-8 hours.

It's strange how a story can kind of take over. It's got a mind of it's own, I guess. Please, be patient. Too bad, if you're not.

ooooooooh

This will make good reading tomorrow while I'm off from work. Delicious! Thanks for the anticipation, DVS.

Well, I didn't want to do this, but I said I'd have something posted by now, so I am posting the first half of this installment.

I'm up to nearly 6,000 words on this one. There is an end in sight, but it keeps getting further away.

And, to make matters worse, I couldn't find a good spot to cut it up, and leave you all drooling for more. So, I'm just going to post the first 3,000 or so and leave it at that. When I get the rest written, I'll just post it as the next installment, I guess.


I didn't give Rita much time to recover before I had her get up off the slut. She wasn't moving very fast, so I had to resort to taking the crop to her ass. That worked, but it had mixed results until I started swinging harder. Rita is such a pain slut.

Lucy went to remove the purple dong from the gag in the slut's mouth, but I stopped her. "No, Lucy, I think you might want that to stay where it is."

Lucy smiled. "Oh, really? OK."

I did want to change the slut's position, but not very far. I asked James to help me untie her from the ottoman. I intended on standing her up. The whole evening had been with her immobilized in different ways and I though it was time for her to do some of the legwork.

After we got her untied, we helped her up. She needed a lot of help to regain her balance. I wouldn't say she had been horizontal too long, because saying "too long" assumes an excessive amount. I didn't think the evening had been excessive. Although, it was safe to say she hadn't been vertical for quite a while.

After a short while, she could stand on her own. She stood there, completely free of any restraints. She could have made a dash for the door, if she wanted to. But, I knew she wouldn't. She made it clear to me from the beginning, that she was where she wanted to be. She rubbed her sore wrists and attempted to cover nakedness. She was a slut, but a modest one, I guess. She stayed exactly where James and I put her. Her feet didn't move.

It wasn't long before her modest posture changed. I got a spreader bar from James' bag and had Rita and Lucy hold it so it was in front of her at waist level. Pushing her forward, I made her lean over far enough so her wrists almost extended behind her thighs. I tied her wrists together, pulling the rope behind her legs and below her ass. With the spreader bar in front, she was bent over and tied that way.

To make it even more secure, I also tied her thighs together, so her wrists and thighs were one. The way I had her tied forced her to bend her knees. The bar was sticking out on both sides, so she could be easily controlled or made stationary, if necessary.

Her ass was forced out, just like I wanted. Her asshole and pussy were exposed, and residual lube glistened in the crack of her ass. In that position, together with the purple dildo attached to her gag, she was no longer in a modest posture. She was ready to submit or be taken in most any way I wanted.

Rita and Lucy were still holding the spreader bar. Lucy had only one hand on it. Her other hand was between her legs. Seeing this, I couldn't help but comment. "Lucy, is something on your mind?"

She blushed and lowered her head. "This looks like fun, Sir. I can imagine what you have in mind."

"You think so, huh? Well, I'm sure you have ideas, because that purple thing is still dangling just below her nose. I saw how you rode that thing, but I'd think you might enjoy a rest."

Lucy kept her face lowered, but I could see she a big smile on her face. "I'll share, Sir."

"I'm glad you said that, Lucy. But I knew you weren't greedy. We're all taking turns, here. Yours is coming around again, soon. Rest up."

Lucy looked at me and smiled. She pulled her finger from her wet clit and slowly sucked on it. "I don't need a rest, Sir. I'm always ready."

"That's one of the things I like about you, Lucy." She's always been that way. James has called her Loosie Lucy. And, she's also been kidded about working for the post office, because she's always ready to deliver or accept the delivery, which ever is needed. And, this time she would probably be delivering.

My plan was to have the slut do more work, this time, although we would still benefit from it. But, with everyone participating, we all needed an implement. Also, taking it even further, I had to match each player with the implement. For instance, I didn't want to give Rita a hard wood paddle. What I had in mind was to make us all as equal as possible. I was creating a little gauntlet of punishment for my slut.

I gave Rita the crop. It was a little vicious, but not as bad as a paddle. James went to his bag and got a strap. It wasn't a large one, nor was it very thick. But it was made of leather, and it had a handle. So with a good swing, it would cover the slut's ass and make a strong statement. I took the paddle. But, Lucy was without, and that wouldn't do. Rita pointed to the whip. It was on lying on the floor. Lucy approved, and I thought it was a good choice, too.

Everybody was armed, and I positioned the slut at the end of the line. She would do her best to walk the gauntlet, turn around and walk it again. We could use our implements to whip, paddle or whatever as much as we wished, as long as her ass was an available target. It would be to her advantage to go as quickly as she could.

James was at the beginning of the line, so he could have room to swing the strap. I was at the other end, so I could have room to swing the paddle, when she turned around for the return trip. Rita and Lucy were in the middle. Their implements didn't need a lot of swinging room.

The slut started down the line and the different smacking sounds were heard as her naked ass received it's due. The gag muffled her whimpers and cries, but her body jerked and twitched, when a well placed stroke landed.

Her ass was nice and white, because her asshole had been the party for most of the evening. Only during the beginning had her ass been smacked much. And, such a perfect target it was, too. Tied, and bent over like that, her cute little ass was just begging to get it. And it did get it. James was really swinging that strap. Although the slut tried to make him miss, when James swung, the slut's reaction told me she felt it.

Rita knew how to use the crop, and Lucy sure liked that whip. Both of them almost always got two smacks in, each time the slut passed. A whip and crop don't make much noise, so we got to hear the slut's whimpers, as they found their mark. The slut's ass was soon had several red welts on it.

I had planned it so I would be at the end where the slut had to turn around. It was difficult for her to change directions, so my target was stationary, at times. I got several pretty good smacks in, when she was trying to turn around. More than once, I helped her gain momentum, if you know what I mean.

But, it wasn't long before Rita mentioned that the slut was moving too fast and she didn't present a good target, sometimes. At first, I didn't think that was a problem. I thought it was just Rita looking for an edge. But James said he thought she needed to slow down, too. I knew he was less inclined to being greedy. Rita was always looking for an angle.

Quick thought told me I could just tell the slut to slow down, but she would probably eventually speed up, again. It was only natural for her to want to get through the line as fast as she could. So, I decided to remove that option from her. If she couldn't go any faster, her wishes wouldn't come into play.

I had her wrists tied to her legs, but to immobilize her more, I decided to tie her knees together. She could still move, but she was greatly limited in her speed. And, I knew it would also make it even more difficult to change directions. Yes, I can be mean, at times.

I got a fairly long piece of rope and wrapped it around her legs quite a few times, right above her knees. I also attached it to the rope her wrists were tied with, so she had very little movement from her knees up. That not only limited her movement, it also added to the show. She had to stand on her tiptoes, to move around and that made her ass wiggle nicely, as she moved past us.

That went on for quite a while. Her ass was getting pink and she wasn't moving as fast as she had in the beginning. But, that was part of the game and too bad for her. There also were welts on her upper thighs, where I'm sure Rita had been aiming that crop. The slut tried desperately to keep her ass from being a target of the paddle, but I had decided otherwise. Her creamy white skin was sure to become a nice shade of red.

My greatest pleasure was the look in her eyes as she watched the paddle. She knew where it was going to land, and she did her best to change directions and wiggle on up the line before I could swat her ass with it. But, I always won.

The same thing was happening on the other end of the line for James. He had plenty of time to aim and swat her with that strap. The slut tried to beat us every time, but we always ended up beating her, literally. Sometimes I acted like I was going to smack her ass, only to hesitate a little. She got to anticipate the pain, and when I hesitated, she couldn't do that. I think she felt those swats more than the ones that she knew were coming.

I decided to add a little more fun to this gauntlet. And, what I had in mind involved Rita and Lucy. I had each of them sit in a chair, at the ends of the gauntlet line. James and I stayed in the middle. Lucy laid the whip on the floor, next to her chair. Rita put the crop on the floor by her chair.

The slut's new task was to make her way from one end of the line to the other. Lucy or Rita would hold their legs open, revealing their pretty pussy. The slut was to aim that purple dong at their pussy and fuck them with it, if they wanted her to. She wasn't to stop walking the gauntlet unless they wanted her to fuck them. But, they had the option to cross their legs at the last minute. Then, she was to turn around and head back through the line to the other end, where the same options applied. That was to go on, until both Rita and Lucy were satisfied or I stopped the game. And, of course, we all could take aim on her ass, when we wanted. It was a smacking good party.

Rita and Lucy sat down in chairs, about 10 feet apart. James and I stood between them. The slut started at Rita's end and did her best to get past James and me, on her way to Lucy's crotch. I watched as she passed James. He smacked her ass good several times. One time, I saw the strap catch the inside of her ass cheeks. Her body jerked after each swat, but she kept on going.

She tried not to look at me, as she passed. She just wanted to get by me without getting a swat. But, because she was slowed by the rope around her knees, I really had no problem keeping up with her. I walked behind her all the way to where Lucy was sitting, and I swat her ass about four times. She aimed that purple dildo at Lucy's pussy. She was almost there when Lucy grabbed two handfuls of hair and used the dildo to rub against her clit. In the position the slut was tied, it didn't take much to keep her at just the right angle. While Lucy held her there, I gave her a couple more swats. I could hear her protesting from behind the gag, as her ass was paying the price.

Lucy pushed her away, and crossed her legs. The slut groaned, and turned around. She saw me standing there, and tried to take a wide path to get past me. It didn't work. I aimed and the paddle made a nice smacking sound on her tender ass. I only got her once, but it was a good one. The muffled scream I heard told me that.

After she got past me, James was standing in waiting. She wiggled past him, but he still got her good with that strap. I could hear her yelp from where I was. And I loved the cute little jerks her body made when a swat landed. I was having fun.

After James got her with the strap, Rita was waiting in the chair, at that end of the line. But, Rita didn't cross her legs. In fact, Rita wanted that purple dildo inside her pussy, and she knew how to get it there.

When the slut got to her, Rita grabbed fists full of hair and pulled her head into position. Lifting her own legs up and over the slut's back, she pulled her even further down. Rita positioned her body so that dildo slid right up inside her. She let out a whimper of pleasure as it went deep inside her. The slut's whole body weight was behind it, so it got shoved in hard, but Rita held on like she was riding a bronco.

Because of the grip Rita had on the slut, her ass was in perfect position for some additional swats. I started over to get into position, but Lucy ran past me. She had that little whip in her hand and ready to swing.

When she got close enough, she landed one right at the base of the slut's ass, where her thighs start. Of course that startled the slut and made her jump from the pain. That forced the dildo deeper into Rita's pussy. Rita gasped but she kept a firm hold on her victim. I didn't think she was going to let go. Not Rita.

Lucy gave it to the slut again, and the same thing happened. Rita's teeth were clenched, and her head tilted back. She closed her eyes. She was in another place. The slut had to stay there and take it. She had no way of breaking free from Rita's grip, and her ass was just pleading for more swats.

I stood behind the slut and held up the paddle. Rita opened her eyes and saw me. She smiled, and nodded her head. I let the paddle rest on the slut's ass. She felt it there, and started wiggling around, like she was trying to ruin my aim. Not a chance. I gave her a nice beefy swat that covered both cheeks, just above her thighs.

Rita held on, as that swat made the slut jump forward, nearly pushing Rita and the chair backward. Rita yelled, like she really was riding a bronco. "Give it to her, good! I love this game. Come on, hit her, again! Beat her ass. Yee Haw!"

Well, that's all Lucy needed to hear. She butted in front of James and whipped that slut's ass two times, very fast. Rita was in heaven. I couldn't hear much from the slut, but her ass was sure getting red.

James grabbed Lucy by the arm and gave her a swat with the strap. Then, he shoved her out of his way. Lucy yelped when he swat her. He got her pretty good. She stood to the side, rubbing her ass.

I looked at Lucy and smiled. "We're taking turns, Lucy. You'll get another turn."

James pointed his finger at her. "If you don't play fair, we might have you change positions with the slut. Don't you think she would like to get a chance at your naked behind?"

A perfect pout formed on Lucy's face. But, I'm sure she understood that James meant what he said. He must have given her a real wallop, because she was still rubbing her ass.

I didn't know why she was even in line. She had a better spot, sitting in the chair. "Sit back down, Lucy. The slut will be coming your way in a second. Look at Rita. You can have some of that."

Well, I didn't have to tell her twice. Lucy made a dash for that chair. I laughed at the speed she moved. "Lucy, nobody's going to take it away from you. Just you and Rita can benefit this way. You won't see me or James fighting you for your seat."

"Well, I wanted to be ready," replied Lucy. "You know...just in case."

She had her legs open and her hands in her lap. She looked a little like a baseball catcher, the way she was sitting. And, I guess she was ready to catch something, when you think about it. Her body language was waiting for a strike.

Rita knew she couldn't hog the slut, but getting her to do that was still going to be difficult. Rita, like the rest of us, likes feeling pleasure. But, there are times when she likes it a little too much. I was wondering if she would let Lucy have some fun.

After talking with Lucy, I turned to see James aiming the strap. Rita was holding on to the slut and smiling from ear to ear. She knew what was coming. James had no trouble hitting the target. A direct hit, you might call it. Because the slut's face was buried in Rita's crotch, she couldn't tell when her ass was in danger. She was reacting before the fact in some cases, so even the slightest touch could make her jump.

But, that swat from James' strap was more than a slight touch. She was so startled, she jumped several inches into the air. That's just what Rita hoped would happen. She was groaning and moaning so much, I thought she was cumming. Maybe she was.

Oh my ... maybe she was ...

I know I can't wait for the next installment! TYsvm, DVS One!

Esclava

Wow! What a thing to read right before bed! DVS I am going to be greedy and pray you finish up the next installment soon!! Thank you sooooooooo very much for this one and the naughty dreams it is sure to inspire!

Love it DVS....... Yet another great part.... I have to show this thread to the wife. Very erotic!

Hi, all. I didn't know if I should just add this to the last post or start another installment. It's longer than the last post, so I decided to start another post, to give you all a break in-between. Although, this is really just a continuation of my last post, we'll call it a new installment. OK? Now, no drooling on the keyboards. That tends to make the keys stick together.

Rita had let go of the slut. I couldn't explain that. Because, the grip she had on her before, I thought we would be forced to get a crowbar to separate them. She must have cum. That's the only explanation for it. Whimpering softly to herself, she did look kind of relaxed. It was unusual when Rita lost control before the game was over.

The slut was just standing there, face deep in Rita's crotch. She seemed lost, waiting to be told what to do. Then, Rita pushed her away with her feet. She turned around and I was standing right in front of her. Looking up at me with her big eyes, my toy was a little confused, I guess. The slut looked so helpless, standing there, naked and tied like that. Her nose was mashed back from the leather of the gag and that purple dildo, covered with Rita's creamy sex, was sticking out from her face.

I pointed in Lucy's direction and off she went, but not before I gave her a quick swat with the paddle. James gave her a swat, too. I think his landed better than mine, because the slut jumped and whimpered after his.

"I got the crack of her ass with that one," James laughed. "And, I think she felt it."

I looked over at him. "You should save those for when the dildo is buried inside Lucy."

"After she cut in line, she's last on my list," grumbled James.

When the slut got close enough, Lucy grabbed her with her legs. It was just like Rita. Her legs went around, and she aimed her pelvis to meet that dildo. She grabbed the slut's head and pushed it down to her crotch. The tip of the dildo was very close to Lucy's pussy lips, but not quite there. Lucy was looking down, like she was admiring the size of the purple thing, when I poked my finger into the slut's asshole. That caused the slut to lunge forward and the dildo rammed hard into Lucy's waiting pussy. Lucy tensed up and twitched around, but regained her composure quickly enough to grab a good hold on the slut.

"Oh, God, yeah. Smack her ass for me. Hit that slut's ass." She was impatient, worse than Rita was. She was nearly screaming, insisting. Lucy was pointing at the slut's ass hoping somebody would hit help her. "Come on. Hit her and hit her hard."

It was surely a reflex action, but when Lucy was screaming, I gave the slut a nice hard swat with the paddle. It caused her to lurch forward, shoving the dildo into Lucy. She held on tight. It was her turn to ride the bucking bronco. Being so small, I thought she would be scooped up and impaled on the dildo. But, that couldn't happen. Because of her bondage, the slut couldn't raise up. Tied in position, she could bend down, but not rise up.

Lucy was getting emphatic about spanking the slut's ass. Of course, she had a reason to be that way, with that dildo wiggling inside her. She pointed to the whip. "Grab that and whip her ass with it."

It was a good idea, so why not do as she asked? I stood behind her and let it fly. I swung that mean little whip back and forth, making contact with the slut's ass every time. She was wiggling her ass around, trying to get away from it, but when she moved, I moved. Then, I started whipping her thighs. That's when she really started to dance. She was wiggling and jumping around and Lucy loved it. The way the slut's head looked, I'm sure that dildo was moving the same way. Lucy couldn't get enough. She had a death grip on the slut's head and her legs were wrapped tightly around her upper body.

I gave Lucy the whip and picked up the crop. In the position she was in, Lucy couldn't use the crop. But, the whip was light and springy. And, it was just long enough that she could make it bounce off the slut's ass. I had a better position for the crop. Between the two of us, that slut couldn't stand still.

James just stood there watching. I'm sure it was an interesting sight to see. Rita got up and was standing beside him. Her hand was down between her legs, rubbing her clit. They started laughing about something, but I couldn't hear what they were saying. Then I saw James walk over to his bag and Rita was walking around the room like she was looking for something.

James came over to me and held up a pretty good size butt plug. "Do you think this will go in that slut's ass?"

I had to laugh when I saw what he had. "Damn, James. That's pretty big. Do you mean will it fit?"

See, we both knew that plug would go in the slut's ass. There was no doubt we could get it in. But, would it rip her open? That was what I meant when I asked if it would fit.

Smiling, James added, "OK, that's what I mean. Will it fit?"

"You'll need an industrial amount of lube."

"Rita's looking for lube, now."

"You know though, because of that tapered end, if you do get it in, you might never get it out again."

James looked at me for a few seconds, until I cracked a grin. For a minute, I guess he thought I was serious. "Yeah, and what a shame that would be...not able to fuck that cute little ass again. But, we still have her mouth." Then we both laughed.

That's when Rita came over with the lube. James took it and squeezed a liberal amount on the tip of the plug. He motioned to the slut. She was still bent over with Lucy taking charge. She had a good grip on her with her legs. Lucy was whipping that slut's ass, forcing that dildo to go deep inside her.

"Hold off with that whip a second, little Lucy, said James. He motioned to Rita and me. "Hold her still."

Rita and I each took a side and held on to the ends of the spreader bar. James walked up and squeezed some lube at the top of the slut's ass crack. We watched, as it slowly made it's way down her ass crack. The slut moaned, when she felt the cold lube. She knew something was about to happen.

James put his arm around the slut's waist and held her there, while he inched the butt plug into the slut's ass. That ass had been used a lot, but it was still going to be difficult to get that thing in.

The further it went, the more the slut tried to wiggle out away. But, we held her still, and James continued pushing the plug on in. Then, just as it was about to pop in, the slut screamed. That scream climaxed with the largest part of the plug passing her little hole. Then the plug popped in. It was a snug fit. James twisted the plug and the slut whimpered and wiggled her ass. It was in there, and it was tight.

"Now, Lucy, " James said, "you can continue with the whip." He looked at me. "Make sure you hit that plug with the paddle."

I smiled back at him. "Oh, yeah, you can count on it."

James and I stood back to take aim. Lucy gave the whip to Rita and got a good hold on the slut. I guess she didn't think she could use the whip and keep a good hold on the slut, with James and I both working on her ass at once. With the addition of Rita, and the butt plug, she was probably right.

I stood back and looked at Lucy. She was still holding on, whimpering lightly, as the slut struggled with the butt plug. To be sure, it was a basic plug, but when you're the one it's plugging, there's nothing basic about it. And, it was a snug fit, so even the slightest touch would send interesting sensations through her ass.

I held up the paddle and took aim. My first swat was going to be memorable. Lucy tensed up, in anticipation. I'm sure the slut was feeling anxious, and the new addition to her behind wasn't helping any. But, I couldn't resist and gave her ass a swat that covered both cheeks. It was perfect and loud, and the butt plug was right in the middle.

The end of the plug stuck out, and it obviously was stretching her asshole. The slut squealed and her knees kind of gave out, when she felt the swat. She didn't expect that additional sensation. It kind of feels like you're getting spanked and butt fucked at the same time. One sensation is pain, and the other is a little difficult to describe. I would imagine the slut enjoyed it when the paddle hit the butt plug. The part she didn't like was when it hit her vulnerable ass.

James took a turn with the strap. It didn't have the same impact as the paddle, but it got the slut's attention, just the same. And, it got Lucy's attention, too. He gave the slut several good smacks. One landed right on the end of the plug.

The slut was moving her head a lot. So that moved the dildo. Once that big thing was inside Lucy, any little movement meant some kind of thrill. And, because it was attached to the slut's face, it was even more special. The idea of holding the slut's head between her legs had to be exciting. Her nose was very close to Lucy's clit and there's just something about having someone's face in your crotch, no matter what your gender.

Lucy was making the most of it. But, Rita wanted her turn. She had that whip and wanted to use it. James and I backed away, so she could cut loose with it. And that was just what she did. She put her hand on the spreader bar, to hold the slut still. Then, she started whipping her ass, over and over. And she was aiming at the slut's tender thighs.

Lucy was really loving it. Even though Rita was trying to hold the slut still, she was getting a good fuck from the dildo. Her pussy was spread wide by that thing and she couldn't stop whimpering. Rita's whip action was doing the trick.

Then, Rita got adventurous. She reached for the butt plug sticking out of the slut's ass. She grabbed hold of the end and was twisting it around in circles while still using the whip on her ass. The slut responded to that, all right. Her knees buckled, but Lucy didn't let her go. And, Rita was using that whip with the skill of a horse jockey. The thing was whistling in the air in-between the snapping sounds it made on the slut's ass.

The slut was wiggling her ass in response to the whipping, but Rita was also guiding her with the butt plug. That thing was in tighter than we thought, I guess, because Rita was actually driving the slut into Lucy with it.

Each time Rita shoved the butt plug, the slut let out a loud cry. The slut jerked her ass away, each time the whip found it's mark. All of this movement was too much for Lucy. She got the ride she wanted. Another person controlled the thrusts from the dildo, so she was truly getting fucked. It was much better than when she was riding the slut's face, before.

Lucy started moaning, and then she started screaming. She gasped for air, as the dildo went deep into her. "Oh, God! Fuck me. Whip her ass, Rita. Whip her. Whip he...Oh, shit, yeah! Do her, baby."

Rita snaked the whip between the slut's legs. She had a hard time getting it between them, but once she did, the slut's knees completely gave out. James and I went over and quickly grabbed the spreader bar to hold her up. Her legs were shaking, and she couldn't even stand. Her whole body was heaving, and we could see cum running down her legs.

Rita was pissed. "Look. The damn bitch is cumming without permission! That's not allowed." She pulled the whip back further and was about to give her some punishing blows, until I stopped her.

"Wait a minute, Rita. It was never decided that she couldn't cum. Besides, how could she ask for permission? Her mouth is gagged and the dildo attached to her face is deep in Lucy's pussy."

"Well, it's just not permitted, that's all. She's not allowed."

"You did it to her. You were giving her sensations that she couldn't resist."

"Yeah, it's your fault, Rita," added James. He smiled at her. "So, maybe we should punish you for it."

While Rita glared at James, Lucy was regaining her senses. She wanted to cum, too. "Hey, you guys. What about me? I was close to cumming and you stopped."

We got Rita to calm down, but she still wanted to give the slut a good hard whipping. "Hold the slut steady, guys, Lucy needs to cum."

I looked at James and he nodded his head. We held the spreader bar steady and Rita started in on her. She was going back and forth, front and back strokes, punishing the slut for cumming. "You came without permission, bitch! Now, you must pay for it. Your ass is gonna sting tomorrow."

The slut was whimpering, her body twitching. Her ass was marked with mean red lines where the whip had landed on her tender flesh. She cried after each stroke of the whip, though muffled by Lucy's legs. James and I were still holding her up. Her legs were still too shaky to stand on her own.

Lucy started moaning again. I'm sure the show was helping with that. It wasn't long before she was crying for Rita to "Punish the slut harder. Whip her ass, Rita. Make sure she's sorry...sorry for keeping me from cumming."

Rita was into it. "I'm doing it, Lucy girl. Cum, baby. Cum hard."

"Oh, yeah. Make her fuck me hard. Whip her hard, so the purple dildo fuck.....Oh, shit, yeah. That's it, Rita. Make her pay. Make her pay."

Rita grabbed the butt plug again and started pushing the slut forward. That was all Lucy needed. She let out a scream and her body started shaking. She groaned from deep within her throat. Rita saw Lucy was cumming and started slowing down. She finally stopped the whipping and dropped the whip on the floor.

She went back to her chair and sat down. She leaned back in the chair and seemed to be patiently waiting. She called to Lucy. "Let the slut go. Send her over to me, so I can use her. It's my turn, Lucy. Lucy pushed the slut away.

The slut had finally recovered enough to stand on her own legs, again. That was good, but it could also be bad. Rita was waiting for her.

Of course, before she would meet up with Rita, the slut had another little meeting with James and me. James went first, swinging that strap across her ass. I could see her cheeks tighten up, but there was no way to lessen the feeling. She was the perfect target. Her ass was all marked up with marks from the whip, and each one was tender to the touch, I'm sure.

James gave her another good smack, causing her to jump a little. The gag behind that dildo was keeping her quieter than she would have been, I'm sure. What whimpers we could hear told me she was feeling it all.

When James was swatting the slut, she was doing her little pain dance. She didn't like the feel of the strap, but he had no problem with it. And, neither did I. In fact, when she tried to get away from my paddle, it made it all the more fun. I also made sure it was a harder hit.

When I gave her another swat, it landed over the butt plug, too. Again she squealed as it popped against those upturned cheeks, leaving a wide red mark to form on top of those red whip lines. The slut winced a little, then wiggled on. I grabbed hold of the butt plug, and pulled on it. It was in so tight, I slowed her down. I twisted it around, and listened to her whimper. I pushed it into her, and then pulled on it. I never actually pulled it out. All of my pulling and pushing were forcing a strain on her asshole.

I smacked her with the paddle again, and it landed almost exactly where the last one had left its mark. The gag in her mouth was efficiently muffling her protests. And the plug in her ass was making her twitch and wiggle. We all enjoyed watching that.

The slut made her way to Rita. She was waiting. She had her legs open and was more than ready for that dildo to be inside her. As the slut got close enough, Rita grabbed her hair and pushed her down. She raised her ass, so the dildo would go right into her pussy. And, as it slowly slid in, Rita groaned her approval.

She clamped her legs around the slut's upper body. Her hands kept pushing the slut's head down to her crotch and kept pushing the dildo into her wet pussy. The slut was again struggling with her position. Being bound, she was controlled by whomever wanted her. Rita wanted her face to be deep into her crotch, and James and I wanted her ass.

I liked the vision I kept seeing of the slut's ass up in the air. Her ass cheeks were getting red only in the area that the paddle would hit. The crack of her ass was still mostly white, as were the sides and the extreme edges of her ass. Although the red whip lines were visible in this area and on her upper thighs where Rita had left her mark. There were also a few red welts from the crop.

Rita was still very much into the control of it all. She had that dildo inside her, and to get more of it, she had to push the slut's head down into her crotch. That pushed her ass up in the air, and made a great target for spanking. Rita had her hands full of the slut's hair, pushing and pulling on it. She was using the slut's head to fuck herself with that dildo. She had her legs wrapped around the slut's body, and I think she could have used spurs, if she had any. That's the kind of person Rita was. Whatever it takes to give Rita pleasure.

I watched as James took aim at that ass. He stood right behind her and started strapping her ass, over and over. He wasn't so much hitting the middle of her ass, but more on the sides. On the forearm stroke, he got the right side of her ass, and on the backstroke he got the left side. Those were mostly white areas that only had the whip marks. Those lines were getting harder to find. He continued for what seemed like about thirty seconds.

The slut was wiggling her ass, and bouncing on her tiptoes, as James continued to strap her ass. Rita was just humming away, enjoying the ride. The slut's head was moving around, and so was the connected dildo. All Rita had to do was hold on.

As James continued, we could hear the slut's cries getting louder and louder. Finally, he stopped. The slut's knees were shaking, and her ass was redder. Rita was breathing heavier, and was anxious to get going, again.

I decided to help her out with that. I saw how James had used the strap, but I couldn't do that with the paddle. So, I sat it down and picked up the crop. I liked that thing, because it was flexible, and I could use it as a cane. I stood where James had and gave the slut stroke after stroke on the tender parts of her ass.

The slut was quickly becoming vocal, although it was difficult to hear over Rita's moans. The cane like strokes caused the slut to move forward. Rita liked that. And, she was watching, too. "Give it to the bitch. She came without asking. I want her to know that's not allowed. Make sure she knows."

"Oh, I think you made sure she knows that, Rita. You should see the whip marks on her ass. I think you taught her a lesson she won't soon forget."

Giving Rita confirmation of her power and control was just about enough to make her cum. She held on to the slut's hair with her fists, pushing her head down to get that dildo deeper inside her. With each stoke of that crop, she pushed the slut's head down, and before long Rita was gasping for her breath, close to an explosive orgasm.

I took hold of the butt plug and wiggled it around. The slut responded with cries from the sensations. Rita saw me doing that, and that was all it took. She exploded in an orgasm that took her by surprise. She gripped the slut's head and held her still, while she came hard on the purple dildo. She gripped the slut's body with her legs so both of them shook with her orgasm. Rita screamed and groaned as that dildo punished her throbing pussy. Just what the Rita wanted.

I let go of the butt plug, and I could see the slut's asshole still twitching around it. It sure was a snug fit.

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Hi, all. I didn't know if I should just add this to the last post or start another installment. It's longer than the last post, so I decided to start another post, to give you all a break in-between. Although, this is really just a continuation of my last post, we'll call it a new installment. OK? Now, no drooling on the keyboards. That tends to make the keys stick together.

Rita had let go of the slut. I couldn't explain that. Because, the grip she had on her before, I thought we would be forced to get a crowbar to separate them. She must have cum. That's the only explanation for it. Whimpering softly to herself, she did look kind of relaxed. It was unusual when Rita lost control before the game was over.

The slut was just standing there, face deep in Rita's crotch. She seemed lost, waiting to be told what to do. Then, Rita pushed her away with her feet. She turned around and I was standing right in front of her. Looking up at me with her big eyes, my toy was a little confused, I guess. The slut looked so helpless, standing there, naked and tied like that. Her nose was mashed back from the leather of the gag and that purple dildo, covered with Rita's creamy sex, was sticking out from her face.

I pointed in Lucy's direction and off she went, but not before I gave her a quick swat with the paddle. James gave her a swat, too. I think his landed better than mine, because the slut jumped and whimpered after his.

"I got the crack of her ass with that one," James laughed. "And, I think she felt it."

I looked over at him. "You should save those for when the dildo is buried inside Lucy."

"After she cut in line, she's last on my list," grumbled James.

When the slut got close enough, Lucy grabbed her with her legs. It was just like Rita. Her legs went around, and she aimed her pelvis to meet that dildo. She grabbed the slut's head and pushed it down to her crotch. The tip of the dildo was very close to Lucy's pussy lips, but not quite there. Lucy was looking down, like she was admiring the size of the purple thing, when I poked my finger into the slut's asshole. That caused the slut to lunge forward and the dildo rammed hard into Lucy's waiting pussy. Lucy tensed up and twitched around, but regained her composure quickly enough to grab a good hold on the slut.

"Oh, God, yeah. Smack her ass for me. Hit that slut's ass." She was impatient, worse than Rita was. She was nearly screaming, insisting. Lucy was pointing at the slut's ass hoping somebody would hit help her. "Come on. Hit her and hit her hard."

It was surely a reflex action, but when Lucy was screaming, I gave the slut a nice hard swat with the paddle. It caused her to lurch forward, shoving the dildo into Lucy. She held on tight. It was her turn to ride the bucking bronco. Being so small, I thought she would be scooped up and impaled on the dildo. But, that couldn't happen. Because of her bondage, the slut couldn't raise up. Tied in position, she could bend down, but not rise up.

Lucy was getting emphatic about spanking the slut's ass. Of course, she had a reason to be that way, with that dildo wiggling inside her. She pointed to the whip. "Grab that and whip her ass with it."

It was a good idea, so why not do as she asked? I stood behind her and let it fly. I swung that mean little whip back and forth, making contact with the slut's ass every time. She was wiggling her ass around, trying to get away from it, but when she moved, I moved. Then, I started whipping her thighs. That's when she really started to dance. She was wiggling and jumping around and Lucy loved it. The way the slut's head looked, I'm sure that dildo was moving the same way. Lucy couldn't get enough. She had a death grip on the slut's head and her legs were wrapped tightly around her upper body.

I gave Lucy the whip and picked up the crop. In the position she was in, Lucy couldn't use the crop. But, the whip was light and springy. And, it was just long enough that she could make it bounce off the slut's ass. I had a better position for the crop. Between the two of us, that slut couldn't stand still.

James just stood there watching. I'm sure it was an interesting sight to see. Rita got up and was standing beside him. Her hand was down between her legs, rubbing her clit. They started laughing about something, but I couldn't hear what they were saying. Then I saw James walk over to his bag and Rita was walking around the room like she was looking for something.

James came over to me and held up a pretty good size butt plug. "Do you think this will go in that slut's ass?"

I had to laugh when I saw what he had. "Damn, James. That's pretty big. Do you mean will it fit?"

See, we both knew that plug would go in the slut's ass. There was no doubt we could get it in. But, would it rip her open? That was what I meant when I asked if it would fit.

Smiling, James added, "OK, that's what I mean. Will it fit?"

"You'll need an industrial amount of lube."

"Rita's looking for lube, now."

"You know though, because of that tapered end, if you do get it in, you might never get it out again."

James looked at me for a few seconds, until I cracked a grin. For a minute, I guess he thought I was serious. "Yeah, and what a shame that would be...not able to fuck that cute little ass again. But, we still have her mouth." Then we both laughed.

That's when Rita came over with the lube. James took it and squeezed a liberal amount on the tip of the plug. He motioned to the slut. She was still bent over with Lucy taking charge. She had a good grip on her with her legs. Lucy was whipping that slut's ass, forcing that dildo to go deep inside her.

"Hold off with that whip a second, little Lucy, said James. He motioned to Rita and me. "Hold her still."

Rita and I each took a side and held on to the ends of the spreader bar. James walked up and squeezed some lube at the top of the slut's ass crack. We watched, as it slowly made it's way down her ass crack. The slut moaned, when she felt the cold lube. She knew something was about to happen.

James put his arm around the slut's waist and held her there, while he inched the butt plug into the slut's ass. That ass had been used a lot, but it was still going to be difficult to get that thing in.

The further it went, the more the slut tried to wiggle out away. But, we held her still, and James continued pushing the plug on in. Then, just as it was about to pop in, the slut screamed. That scream climaxed with the largest part of the plug passing her little hole. Then the plug popped in. It was a snug fit. James twisted the plug and the slut whimpered and wiggled her ass. It was in there, and it was tight.

"Now, Lucy, " James said, "you can continue with the whip." He looked at me. "Make sure you hit that plug with the paddle."

I smiled back at him. "Oh, yeah, you can count on it."

James and I stood back to take aim. Lucy gave the whip to Rita and got a good hold on the slut. I guess she didn't think she could use the whip and keep a good hold on the slut, with James and I both working on her ass at once. With the addition of Rita, and the butt plug, she was probably right.

I stood back and looked at Lucy. She was still holding on, whimpering lightly, as the slut struggled with the butt plug. To be sure, it was a basic plug, but when you're the one it's plugging, there's nothing basic about it. And, it was a snug fit, so even the slightest touch would send interesting sensations through her ass.

I held up the paddle and took aim. My first swat was going to be memorable. Lucy tensed up, in anticipation. I'm sure the slut was feeling anxious, and the new addition to her behind wasn't helping any. But, I couldn't resist and gave her ass a swat that covered both cheeks. It was perfect and loud, and the butt plug was right in the middle.

The end of the plug stuck out, and it obviously was stretching her asshole. The slut squealed and her knees kind of gave out, when she felt the swat. She didn't expect that additional sensation. It kind of feels like you're getting spanked and butt fucked at the same time. One sensation is pain, and the other is a little difficult to describe. I would imagine the slut enjoyed it when the paddle hit the butt plug. The part she didn't like was when it hit her vulnerable ass.

James took a turn with the strap. It didn't have the same impact as the paddle, but it got the slut's attention, just the same. And, it got Lucy's attention, too. He gave the slut several good smacks. One landed right on the end of the plug.

The slut was moving her head a lot. So that moved the dildo. Once that big thing was inside Lucy, any little movement meant some kind of thrill. And, because it was attached to the slut's face, it was even more special. The idea of holding the slut's head between her legs had to be exciting. Her nose was very close to Lucy's clit and there's just something about having someone's face in your crotch, no matter what your gender.

Lucy was making the most of it. But, Rita wanted her turn. She had that whip and wanted to use it. James and I backed away, so she could cut loose with it. And that was just what she did. She put her hand on the spreader bar, to hold the slut still. Then, she started whipping her ass, over and over. And she was aiming at the slut's tender thighs.

Lucy was really loving it. Even though Rita was trying to hold the slut still, she was getting a good fuck from the dildo. Her pussy was spread wide by that thing and she couldn't stop whimpering. Rita's whip action was doing the trick.

Then, Rita got adventurous. She reached for the butt plug sticking out of the slut's ass. She grabbed hold of the end and was twisting it around in circles while still using the whip on her ass. The slut responded to that, all right. Her knees buckled, but Lucy didn't let her go. And, Rita was using that whip with the skill of a horse jockey. The thing was whistling in the air in-between the snapping sounds it made on the slut's ass.

The slut was wiggling her ass in response to the whipping, but Rita was also guiding her with the butt plug. That thing was in tighter than we thought, I guess, because Rita was actually driving the slut into Lucy with it.

Each time Rita shoved the butt plug, the slut let out a loud cry. The slut jerked her ass away, each time the whip found it's mark. All of this movement was too much for Lucy. She got the ride she wanted. Another person controlled the thrusts from the dildo, so she was truly getting fucked. It was much better than when she was riding the slut's face, before.

Lucy started moaning, and then she started screaming. She gasped for air, as the dildo went deep into her. "Oh, God! Fuck me. Whip her ass, Rita. Whip her. Whip he...Oh, shit, yeah! Do her, baby."

Rita snaked the whip between the slut's legs. She had a hard time getting it between them, but once she did, the slut's knees completely gave out. James and I went over and quickly grabbed the spreader bar to hold her up. Her legs were shaking, and she couldn't even stand. Her whole body was heaving, and we could see cum running down her legs.

Rita was pissed. "Look. The damn bitch is cumming without permission! That's not allowed." She pulled the whip back further and was about to give her some punishing blows, until I stopped her.

"Wait a minute, Rita. It was never decided that she couldn't cum, Rita. Besides, how could she ask for permission? Her mouth is gagged and the dildo attached to her face is deep in Lucy's pussy."

"Well, it's just not permitted, that's all. She's not allowed."

"You did it to her. You were giving her sensations that she couldn't resist."

"Yeah, it's your fault, Rita," added James. He smiled at her. "So, maybe we should punish you for it."

Lucy was regaining her senses. She wanted to cum, too. "Hey, you guys. What about me? I was close to cumming and you stopped."

Rita was calming down, but she still wanted to give the slut a good hard whipping. "Hold the slut steady, guys, Lucy needs to cum."

I looked at James and he nodded his head. We held the spreader bar steady and Rita started in on her. She was going back and forth, front and back strokes, punishing the slut for cumming. "You came without permission, bitch! Now, you must pay for it. Your ass is gonna sting tomorrow."

The slut was whimpering and twitching. Her ass was marked with thin mean red lines where the whip had landed on her tender flesh. She cried after each stroke of the whip, though muffled by Lucy's legs. James and I were still holding her up. Her legs were still too shaky to stand.

Lucy started moaning again. I'm sure the show that was helping with that. It wasn't long before she was crying for Rita to "Punish the slut harder. Whip her ass, Rita. Make sure she's sorry...sorry for keeping me from cumming."

Rita was into it. "I'm doing it, Lucy. Cum, baby. Cum hard."

"Oh, yeah. Make her fuck me hard. Whip her hard, so purple thing fuck.....Oh, shit, yeah. That's it, Rita. Make her pay. Make her pay."

Rita grabbed that butt plug again and started pushing the slut forward. That was all Lucy needed. She let out a scream and her body started shaking. She groaned from deep within her throat. Rita saw Lucy was cumming and started slowing down. She finally calmed down and dropped the whip on the floor.

She went back to her chair and sat down. She leaned back in the chair and seemed to be patiently waiting. She called to Lucy. "Let the slut go. Send her over to me, so I can use her. It's my turn, Lucy. Lucy pushed the slut away.

The slut had finally recovered, and could stand on her own legs, again. That was good, but it could also be bad. Rita was waiting for her.

Of course, before she would meet up with Rita, the slut had another little meeting with James and me. James went first, swinging that strap across her ass. I could see her cheeks tighten up, but there was no way to lessen the feeling. She was the perfect target. Her ass was all marked up with marks from the whip, and each one was tender to the touch, I'm sure.

James gave her another good smack, causing her to jump a little. The gag behind that dildo was keeping her quieter than she would have been, I'm sure. What whimpers we could hear told me she was feeling it all.

When James was swatting the slut, she was doing her little pain dance. She didn't like the feel of the strap, but he had no problem with it. And, neither did I. In fact, when she tried to get away from my paddle, it made it all the more fun. I also made sure it was a harder hit.

When I gave her another swat, it landed over the butt plug, too. Again she squealed as it popped against those upturned cheeks, leaving a wide red mark to form on top of those red whip lines. The slut winced a little, then wiggled on. I grabbed hold of the butt plug, and pulled on it. It was in so tight, I slowed her down. I twisted it around, and listened to her whimper. I pushed it into her, and then pulled on it. I never actually pulled it out. All of my pulling and pushing were forcing a strain on her asshole.

I smacked her with the paddle again, and it landed almost exactly where the last one had left its mark. The gag in her mouth was efficiently muffling her protests. And the plug in her ass was making her twitch and wiggle. We all enjoyed watching her wiggle and twitch.

The slut made her way to Rita. She was waiting. She had her legs open and was more than ready for that dildo to be inside her. As the slut got close enough, Rita grabbed her hair and pushed her down. She raised her ass, so the dildo would go right into her pussy. And, as it slowly slid in, Rita groaned her approval.

She clamped her legs around the slut's upper body. Her hands kept pushing the slut's head down to her crotch and kept pushing the dildo into her wet pussy. The slut was again struggling with her position. Being bound, she was controlled by whomever wanted her. Rita wanted her face to be deep into her crotch, and James and I wanted her ass.

I liked the vision I kept seeing of the slut's ass up in the air. Her ass cheeks were getting red only in the area that the paddle would hit. The crack of her ass was still mostly white, as were the sides and the extreme edges of her ass. Although the red whip lines were visible in this area and on her upper thighs where Rita had left her mark. There were also a few red welts from the crop.

Rita was still very much into the control of it all. She had that dildo inside her, and to get more of it, she had to push the slut's head down into her crotch. That pushed her ass up in the air, and made a great target for spanking. Rita had her hands full of the slut's hair, pushing and pulling on it. She was using the slut's head to fuck herself with that dildo. She had her legs wrapped around the slut's body, and I think she could have used spurs, if she had any. That's the kind of person Rita was. Whatever it takes to give Rita pleasure.

I watched as James took aim at that ass. He stood right behind her and started strapping her ass, over and over. He wasn't so much hitting the middle of her ass, but more on the sides. On the forearm stroke, he got the right side of her ass, and on the backstroke he got the left side. Those were mostly white areas that only had the whip marks. Those lines were getting harder to find. He continued for what seemed like about thirty seconds.

The slut was wiggling her ass, and bouncing on her tiptoes, as James continued to strap her ass. Rita was just humming away, enjoying the ride. The slut's head was moving around, and so was the connected dildo. All Rita had to do was hold on.

As James continued, we could hear the slut's cries getting louder and louder. Finally, he stopped. The slut's knees were shaking, and her ass was redder. Rita was breathing heavier, and was anxious to get going, again.

I decided to help her out with that. I saw how James had used the strap, but I couldn't do that with the paddle. So, I sat it down and picked up the crop. I liked that thing, because it was flexible, and I could use it as a cane. I stood where James had and gave the slut stroke after stroke on the tender parts of her ass.

The slut was quickly becoming vocal, although it was difficult to hear over Rita's moans. The cane like strokes caused the slut to move forward. Rita liked that. And, she was watching, too. "Give it to the bitch. She came without asking. I want her to know that's not allowed. Make sure she knows."

"Oh, I think you made sure she knows that, Rita. You should see the whip marks on her ass. I think you taught her a lesson she won't soon forget."

Giving Rita confirmation of her power and control was just about enough to make her cum. She held on to the slut's hair with her fists, pushing her head down to get that dildo deeper inside her. With each stoke of that crop, she pushed the slut's head down, and before long Rita was gasping for her breath, close to an explosive orgasm.

I took hold of the butt plug and wiggled it around. The slut responded with cries from the sensations. Rita saw me doing that, and that was all it took. She exploded in an orgasm that took her by surprise. She gripped the slut's head and held her still, while she came hard on the purple dildo. She gripped the slut's body with her legs so both of them shook with her orgasm. Rita screamed and groaned as that dildo punished her throbing pussy. Just what the Rita wanted.

I let go of the butt plug, and I could see the slut's asshole still twitching around it. It sure was a snug fit.

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What can ya say but WOW!!! Way cool.....We want more....

DVS said:

Hi, all. I didn't know if I should just add this to the last post or start another installment. It's longer than the last post, so I decided to start another post, to give you all a break in-between. Although, this is really just a continuation of my last post, we'll call it a new installment. OK? Now, no drooling on the keyboards. That tends to make the keys stick together.

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That was so hot and intense. Thank you.

DVS,

It's NOT drool that is making my keys stick together ...

Thank you!

Esclava

Well, I guess I made a good decision to scrap the first writing and pick this one up, huh? Hot that it was a bad choice, just that it wasn't doing "it" for me. I'm sure, I can maybe rewrite some of it later on...kind of recycle it, a bit.

Anyway, I'm glad those of you who have read this installment (broken into two posts) have enjoyed it.

I enjoyed it very very much DVS and am sure that if you wanted to throw a few more stories to us that most would be highly appreciative.

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I enjoyed it very very much DVS and am sure that if you wanted to throw a few more stories to us that most would be highly appreciative.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it, Caela. And, this is an ongoing story so far, so it should continue until my creative juices for it dry up.

I have been submitting these installments as chapters for the story "My New Boss" to Lit and the first ones (less than 10...6 or so?, I think) have been published here.

I have all of the rest ready to go, but there is a problem with where Laurel wants to put them.

But, they are all here as installments, as will any new ones be posted here, way before other Lit readers find them.

And, if Laurel ever answers my PMs, I might finally submit them so other Lit readers can read them, too.

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<snip>And, if Laurel ever answers my PMs, I might finally submit them so other Lit readers can read them, too.

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I say let the rest of the Lit readers join us faithful deviants and find them here!

Esclava

Esclava said:

I say let the rest of the Lit readers join us faithful deviants and find them here!

Esclava

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Not the answer I was looking for. They will always be here. I also want them posted to one of the Lit story categories. But, which one?

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Not the answer I was looking for. They will always be here. I also want them posted to one of the Lit story categories. But, which one?

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Where is your heart on it DVS?

We know you are the Anal King (I'll come back and post the link to AA's description of your "equipment" in the "Language Natzis Unite" thread for the word "too" - roflmsao). Thread Link

[Opinion]
I love the anal, but IMO, the overarching theme is the toy's submission to the whims of the other 4 participants - the BDSM aspect. For instance, the last installment had very little anal in it. but the BDSM aspect was sexy as hell. [/opinion]

Just my 2 cents worth.

Esclava

Esclava said:

Where is your heart on it DVS?

We know you are the Anal King (I'll come back and post the link to AA's description of your "equipment" in the "Language Natzis Unite" thread for the word "too" - roflmsao). Thread Link

[Opinion]
I love the anal, but IMO, the overarching theme is the toy's submission to the whims of the other 4 participants - the BDSM aspect. For instance, the last installment had very little anal in it. but the BDSM aspect was sexy as hell. [/opinion]

Just my 2 cents worth.

Esclava

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Well, for some reason, part of the story went into the non-consent category and part went into the anal category.

She said she didn't know why it got cut up like that and agreed it should be in only one category. She said she could move it to either one, but said people who read anal stories are pretty anal about them...meaning no bondage or other fetishes within their stories. So, she said my story could get bashed in the anal category.

I don't like the non-consent category for reasons I don't want to say, right now. Suffice it to say I want the story in the BDSM category, but she won't return my PMs about that. Imagine that! But she thinks the story won't fit in the BDSM category because there is bondage, which means the slut didn't consent to the treatment she is getting.

I said read the first chapter, and that will explain things. But, she still doesn't want to put it there, because of the so called non-consentual story line.

Personlly, I don't see it, myself. Sure, if they had picked the slut up off the street and tied her up and started doing these things to her, that would be different. But, that didn't happen. I think the BDSM readers are smarter than she's giving them credit for.

DVS said:

Well, for some reason, part of the story went into the non-consent category and part went into the anal category.

She said she didn't know why it got cut up like that and agreed it should be in only one category. She said she could move it to either one, but said people who read anal stories are pretty anal about them...meaning no bondage or other fetishes within their stories. So, she said my story could get bashed in the anal category.

I don't like the non-consent category for reasons I don't want to say, right now. Suffice it to say I want the story in the BDSM category, but she won't return my PMs about that. Imagine that! But she thinks the story won't fit in the BDSM category because there is bondage, which means the slut didn't consent to the treatment she is getting.

I said read the first chapter, and that will explain things. But, she still doesn't want to put it there, because of the so called non-consentual story line.

Personlly, I don't see it, myself. Sure, if they had picked the slut up off the street and tied her up and started doing these things to her, that would be different. But, that didn't happen. I think the BDSM readers are smarter than she's giving them credit for.

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I think it is BDSM. The slut did consent to it. Not in so many words mind you, but did she not say something to the effect that she wanted it, in the beginning? And she is not exactly fighting is she? She could be fighting and putting up a protest in some way, but she is not.

Just my opinion.