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The English Language
A young man packs a trunk and travels
3000 miles. His whole life
is in that trunk. I mean that figuratively:
in the trunk are shoes and letters and
photographs of his life. One shows a boy
holding a stick thrust overhead, his eyes
on the high tip, his face triumphant. It is not
the man’s face, but it resembles his.
The photograph accompanies a letter
that reads “See? A part of you remains
even when you are far away.” This, too,
is figurative: all of him is now
at his destination. He opens the trunk
and fingers the worn edge
of the photograph. Then he removes
everything from trunk. Literally:
the shoes and letters and photographs
are placed on the lid and on the floor.
He takes a job. He builds a house.
An old man repacks the trunk
and travels 3000 miles. He finds
a young man with a face
like his own. He studies the lines
formed by the jaw and ear. I mean that
literally: his eyes and fingers trace
the sharp curves. When they speak
the old man talks of what it means
to leave, the young man talks of
what it means to not leave. They talk
about the stick. They talk until
the distance between them is small.
I mean that both literally and figuratively.
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A young man packs a trunk and travels
3000 miles. His whole life
is in that trunk. I mean that figuratively:
in the trunk are shoes and letters and
photographs of his life. One shows a boy
holding a stick thrust overhead, his eyes
on the high tip, his face triumphant. It is not
the man’s face, but it resembles his.
The photograph accompanies a letter
that reads “See? A part of you remains
even when you are far away.” This, too,
is figurative: all of him is now
at his destination. He opens the trunk
and fingers the worn edge
of the photograph. Then he removes
everything from trunk. Literally:
the shoes and letters and photographs
are placed on the lid and on the floor.
He takes a job. He builds a house.
An old man repacks the trunk
and travels 3000 miles. He finds
a young man with a face
like his own. He studies the lines
formed by the jaw and ear. I mean that
literally: his eyes and fingers trace
the sharp curves. When they speak
the old man talks of what it means
to leave, the young man talks of
what it means to not leave. They talk
about the stick. They talk until
the distance between them is small.
I mean that both literally and figuratively.
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