susurrus
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Sorry. It wasn't intended as a criticism of your piece. I was only speaking conceptually— i.e., in defense of the original idea.
And I apologize for taking it personally.
I'm not sure how many people realize how short 300 words actually is (Betabrad's post up the line earlier comes in at just over 800, from what I was able to determine). I just sat down and started to write. I wasn't trying to make it a writing exercise. I just had a vague outline in my head of what I wanted to happen, then got up way too early this morning and began. If you've read any of my other work, you realize I could have included a lot more information than I did.
Again, I'm sorry for my reaction. Fortunately, I was able to edit myself after I had a chance to absorb just how thin-skinned and petty my original post sounded. It was pretty pissy...