Feedback if you wish: Breastfeeding Titfights

[YoBiteMe]

I've been writing for a while now, and have a forum on Hostboard just for my stuff, but decided to put at least one of my series up here to see how people like it. The first chapter is now published, with 5 more in the queue, and I would appreciate any feedback.

https://www.literotica.com/s/nora-ch-01-1

 

[YoBiteMe]

4 of my 6 chapters for this story are now posted. I know there are some issues with spelling and grammar because I rushed through these, but I would love some input on ways to vary the content. I feel like I'm okay at the settings and personalities, but the behavior itself seems redundant and I would kill to find a way around that if people think it's needed.

 

[EquinoxRising]

What's a titfight?

 

[YoBiteMe]

What's a titfight?

The variety that I write involve two women using their breasts to try and make the other one give up. Some do "hands on" titfights where grabbing and pulling are allowed. Others do a version called titboxing where women punch each other in the chest until one gives up.

 

[YoBiteMe]

Alright, all 6 parts of my first series are up now if anyone wants to critique. The anonymous comments on them are mostly worthless, so I was hoping to find some pointers here.

 

[YoBiteMe]

And another anonymous comment from someone, and again it's useless. Just some idiot without the balls to put their name on something. Why are anonymous comments even allowed?

 

[ElectricBlue]

And another anonymous comment from someone, and again it's useless. Just some idiot without the balls to put their name on something. Why are anonymous comments even allowed?

Because you can get powerful ones like these:

Gorgeous
by Anonymous user on 03/11/2016
I am a wheelchair user. You have a great sense of what it means. She is beautifully seen, strong and vulnerable. I have never thought to include my disability in my writing, but you inspire me to. I will write and post. Thank you.A

good to read disability does not interfere with love
by Anonymous user on 07/22/2016
Years ago due to cancer I had one of my breasts amputated at a young age and I then thought that this will make me very unattractive to men. So this story is a very moving one as it shows that when there is love there is always a way.

Remember, you can turn Anonymous comments off, and you can delete any comment you like. You're in control, it's completely up to you.

 

[YoBiteMe]

Because you can get powerful ones like these:





Remember, you can turn Anonymous comments off, and you can delete any comment you like. You're in control, it's completely up to you.

Where is the delete option for comments? All I've seen is the option to report them as spam.

 

[EquinoxRising]

And another anonymous comment from someone, and again it's useless. Just some idiot without the balls to put their name on something. Why are anonymous comments even allowed?

You can block anonymous feedback.

 

[ElectricBlue]

Where is the delete option for comments? All I've seen is the option to report them as spam.

If you are using the new User Page, go to Works. You will see a list of all your stories. Click on the first of the three icons to right of each story title, you will see all comments posted to that story. Use the Delete bin icon.

Somebody else will have to tell you how it works on the old Dash. I've forgotten.

 

[sr71plt]

In the old system: author's page/submissions/views/individual story listing/moderate public comments/ delete.

 

[YoBiteMe]

You can block anonymous feedback.

Thanks, I eventually did. The funny thing is it was for what I'm pretty sure was a single member here. As soon as I did, all my stories got a single new vote, and each one dropped the overall score. Since then, my newest posts have all gotten a single 1 star vote to start them. Apparently someone has an issue, and I think I know exactly who it is from a famous site dedicated to my particular topic.

No real reason to worry about it, and I think I'm going to turn those comments back on.

 

[YoBiteMe]

If you are using the new User Page, go to Works. You will see a list of all your stories. Click on the first of the three icons to right of each story title, you will see all comments posted to that story. Use the Delete bin icon.

Somebody else will have to tell you how it works on the old Dash. I've forgotten.

Wow, thank you so much. That's so simple and yet I didn't notice it. I'll just count that as a failure on my part to explore the options enough. Time to open the comments back up and hopefully get some helpful ones whether they be positive or negative.

 

[jackvegas21]

I like your stories alot. You're a fan of milfs and huge breasts like me, but this breastfeeding titfights is new to me. Just an idea, how about a mom confronting her 18 year old son's bully and having to have a titfight with the bully's equally busty mom in front of the two to get him to stop. Would be more of a comedy than anything, definitely embarassing for both the bully and the nerd but moreso the nerd.

 

[YoBiteMe]

I like your stories alot. You're a fan of milfs and huge breasts like me, but this breastfeeding titfights is new to me. Just an idea, how about a mom confronting her 18 year old son's bully and having to have a titfight with the bully's equally busty mom in front of the two to get him to stop. Would be more of a comedy than anything, definitely embarassing for both the bully and the nerd but moreso the nerd.

I've contemplated writing something similar to that, as I'm also a fan of family fights and catfighting, but haven't pulled the trigger on writing it. I may have to add it to my ideas queue and see if it pops up anytime soon. Thanks for the feedback.

 

[LIVINRFANTASIES]

Dollie

My husband and I read the first boobie fight story and loved it. I've never been in a boobie fight but I did go through times letting other babies and husbands suck my milk filled boobs.

 

[YoBiteMe]

My husband and I read the first boobie fight story and loved it. I've never been in a boobie fight but I did go through times letting other babies and husbands suck my milk filled boobs.

That makes my day. I've known a few women like that, and one of my friends has actually gotten a couple of titfights to happen, but I've never seen either.

 

[YoBiteMe]

I've got my 15 completed stories up now. Unfortunately, that will be all. One of the moderators at [][][][].com has hacked my personal information and followed me from site to site, threatening to expose that information, even though I keep using proxies and different email addresses. I won't be doing any more work as I just don't feel safe doing so.

 

[EquinoxRising]

I've got my 15 completed stories up now. Unfortunately, that will be all. One of the moderators at [.com] has hacked my personal information and followed me from site to site, threatening to expose that information, even though I keep using proxies and different email addresses. I won't be doing any more work as I just don't feel safe doing so.

That sucks. Any idea why they would do that and/or why they'd stalk you? Can you go back to the original site and complain to the owners? Did they make an account here? If so, send a PM to Laurel and explain what is going on. She may ban them...

 

[YoBiteMe]

That sucks. Any idea why they would do that and/or why they'd stalk you? Can you go back to the original site and complain to the owners? Did they make an account here? If so, send a PM to Laurel and explain what is going on. She may ban them...

She's basically the senior moderator there and posts people's personal info on a regular basis. The way that place is set up, I don't know if anything can be done about it. I've deleted all of my burner email addresses and blocked her on my regular one. I may come back at some point, but it will not be anytime soon.

 

[EquinoxRising]

Yikes. That really sucks.