A story idea: voyeur, then one on one, and then a threesome?

[MayorReynolds]

This one just randomly popped into my head and then my mind starting cultivating it:

Hot young (18+) girl lives in an apartment housing neighborhood. Lately she's noticed that one of her neighbors has blinds missing from the upstairs window, and if she looks at just the right angle, she can see straight in. This apartment is being rented by a couple, married, engaged, or just living together. On some mornings the girl can see the man masturbating in the window, evidently unaware that he's being watched.

She starts enjoying her 'free shows' until one day she gets bold, slips into the house when it's unlocked, and surprises him. Sexcapades ensue. There are two possibilities for what happens after. Either the girl pops by one morning for more sex and finds the and girlfriend/wife/fiancee waiting with him and expecting the girl, or the girlfriend/wife/fiancee catches them in the act. Either way, the story closes with a happy threesome and heavy implication that this is now a regular thing.

I might just write this. Our upstairs study window has been missing blinds for a few months (I tried to raise them so our cat could have a nosy spyplace but the damn things came toppling down and broke beyond repair) and ever since, I've been terrified of jerking off in front of my computer out of fear that I will be seen. Then I thought, "what if...?"

The only problem is I'm not sure which category I'd submit it to! This is one of those moments where I wish Lit would let me choose more than one story category.

Oh well, what do you think? And where would it go?

 

[sirhugs]

Since the "key" plot driver is the voyeurism, I would lean to that category, though group sex might get more reads (though gives away the ending). It could go in Loving wives, but in addition to telegraphing the ending, it might get trolled.

I like the plot and hope to enjoy reading it if you write it. Please post a link here.

 

[MayorReynolds]

What if I were to split it into chapters and put each in a different category?

Chapter 1 - Girl has her peep show. (Exhibitionist & Voyeur)
Chapter 2 - The one-on-one-sex (Erotic Couplings)
Chapter 3 - The threesome (Group Sex or Loving Wives)

I've never posted anything in LW. All I know about it is the horror stories I've read on the forum.

 

[jonyoungau]

This one just randomly popped into my head and then my mind starting cultivating it:

Hot young (18+) girl lives in an apartment housing neighborhood. Lately she's noticed that one of her neighbors has blinds missing from the upstairs window, and if she looks at just the right angle, she can see straight in. This apartment is being rented by a couple, married, engaged, or just living together. On some mornings the girl can see the man masturbating in the window, evidently unaware that he's being watched.

She starts enjoying her 'free shows' until one day she gets bold, slips into the house when it's unlocked, and surprises him. Sexcapades ensue. There are two possibilities for what happens after. Either the girl pops by one morning for more sex and finds the and girlfriend/wife/fiancee waiting with him and expecting the girl, or the girlfriend/wife/fiancee catches them in the act. Either way, the story closes with a happy threesome and heavy implication that this is now a regular thing.

I might just write this. Our upstairs study window has been missing blinds for a few months (I tried to raise them so our cat could have a nosy spyplace but the damn things came toppling down and broke beyond repair) and ever since, I've been terrified of jerking off in front of my computer out of fear that I will be seen. Then I thought, "what if...?"

The only problem is I'm not sure which category I'd submit it to! This is one of those moments where I wish Lit would let me choose more than one story category.

Oh well, what do you think? And where would it go?

Sounds like a good story hope you write it and if someone looks in your window and sees what they see and dont want to see it then why look in the first place.

 

[Hypoxia]

What if I were to split it into chapters and put each in a different category?

Chapter 1 - Girl has her peep show. (Exhibitionist & Voyeur)
Chapter 2 - The one-on-one-sex (Erotic Couplings)
Chapter 3 - The threesome (Group Sex or Loving Wives)

Let's say the title is PEEPING TOMASINA. If you present PEEPING TOMASINA 01, 02, 03 in separate categories, many will just ignore you. For more eyeballs, write those as standalone sequential episodes and name them as:

. PEEPING TOMASINA: A TRUE VISION (Exhibitionist & Voyeur)
. PEEPING TOMASINA: BETTER THAN EVER (Erotic Couplings)
. PEEPING TOMASINA: COME TO ME (Group Sex or Loving Wives)

They'll show on your Submissions page as being a series, but won't be stigmatized with yet-another-unfinished-series syndrome.

I've never posted anything in LW. All I know about it is the horror stories I've read on the forum.

Don't sweat it. LW gives you LOTS of eyeballs and many reactions. If you want to KNOW that you've affected readers, post in LW. Relax. Nasty anon commenters there will not murder you. They can be annoying but so what? If you'd prefer fewer views, higher scores, and less feedback, post elsewhere.