just porn

[todski28]

It better not be a haiku, then.

Haha why not, its about the tease of sensation or do you mean trying to whisper something like that in her ear

 

[Tsotha]

Haha why not, its about the tease of sensation or do you mean trying to whisper something like that in her ear

Well, I mean, it's a bit too short, right? So, perhaps a haiku booklet will do.

 

[butters]

It better not be a haiku, then.

Haha why not, its about the tease of sensation or do you mean trying to whisper something like that in her ear

Well, I mean, it's a bit too short, right? So, perhaps a haiku booklet will do.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAaaahahahahahahahaa

 

[butters]

just don't be counting the syllables in your head

and

everyone's a critic


hahahahahhahhahahaaaa

 

[butters]

p.s tods,a great poem, exceptional line

 

[todski28]

just don't be counting the syllables in your head

and

everyone's a critic


hahahahahhahhahahaaaa

I normally count them on my fingers lol, but I'm sure if I stopped to ask for a critique mid business she wouldn't see the funny side of it

 

[butters]

I normally count them on my fingers lol, but I'm sure if I stopped to ask for a critique mid business she wouldn't see the funny side of it

*so larfing here*

 

[Matryoshka]

Have you ever spent the time
to tease and please a woman
to truss her down
and indulge in her
the taste, to see her writhe
to test her limits with textures
on flesh

maybe trace a poem on her clit
With your tongue, something
to make her wet
then whisper it in her ear
while she begs to be finished

A spank here or there
To partake of her wholly
as each orgasm slicks her
Walls ready for the moment
of your own entrance

So she may indulge in feeling you
fill her numb her from all
that swirls in her head
allow her to lose control

for once take her mind from
her so she can be free


Hmmm not what I was expecting when I started.....

Isn't amazing when a poem just sort of writes itself?
I can almost feel it forming as you wrote it.....awesome....

 

[Trixareforkids]

Hmmm not what I was expecting when I started.....

Happens to me all the time. Twice today in fact. I submitted one of them, Riding Free. The other I'm still pondering.

 

[Trixareforkids]

Removed

 

[bogusagain]

Edited

 

[Tsotha]

You want equality?

Take off your big girl panties
shove them in his mouth
and take command
of your assets.

Tease and tantalize
start with your mouth.
"Use your words!"
Follow up with moistened lips and tongue.

Suck up his desire
blow it back out in slow drafts.
Lead him to the gates
but bar his entrance.

Bind him to the portcullis
climb his body
mount his face.
Force him to feed.

Build his appetite,
take what you want
while you give him
what he craves.

Once you're sated and he's
starved,
hand feed him
your milk and honey.

Rebuild your own appetite
then claim your share
of the banquet
that is man.

It seems you decided to go ahead and write something after that comment on Tod's poem. Damn. I approve. We should definitely create that thread.

 

[butters]

You want equality?

Take off your big girl panties
shove them in his mouth
and take command
of your assets.

Tease and tantalize
start with your mouth.
"Use your words!"
Follow up with moistened lips and tongue.

Suck up his desire
blow it back out in slow drafts.
Lead him to the gates
but bar his entrance.

Bind him to the portcullis
climb his body
mount his face.
Force him to feed.

Build his appetite,
take what you want
while you give him
what he craves.

Once you're sated and he's
starved,
hand feed him
your milk and honey.

Rebuild your own appetite
then claim your share
of the banquet
that is man.

lovely piece

 

[bogusagain]

Edited

 

[Trixareforkids]

It seems you decided to go ahead and write something after that comment on Tod's poem. Damn. I approve. We should definitely create that thread.

Well then... LOL dooo it!
I'm pretty sure Todski and HoneyAdored would have something to contribute.

 

[todski28]

Well then... LOL dooo it!
I'm pretty sure Todski and HoneyAdored would have something to contribute.

What you talkin about

 

[HoneyAdored]

......

 

[Trixareforkids]

Did someone call?

Yes! Please sir, I want some more...

I would really like to see what you'd write with the theme of equality in mind.

 

[HoneyAdored]

......

 

[Trixareforkids]

Would a Haiku do?

I have a severe distaste for Haiku poetry. But I'm sure others would enjoy it...

 

[HoneyAdored]

......

 

[Trixareforkids]

Hehehe! I was joking, I will attempt something a little meatier, just don't give me a deadline ok? lol

deadline = inspiration killer

 

[HoneyAdored]

......

 

[Trixareforkids]

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[Matryoshka]

Apples to Tarts

there you were
shoved in the bin
but not like the others
pale, sea foam skin
so lovely and thin
I can't wait
to slide under
peel back your
outer layer
sneak a taste
before
i turn you into
a proper tart

Bite of apple with juices
running down your chin
Saving the rest
for a steamy tart later