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sweetly sensual, erotic, and - ultimately - a romantic write. very nicely done and beyond the reach of many i've seen getting work up at Lit.
one typo.
just went back and read the others. lovely writing, Ryan, really. But i'm glad I read the last one as it stands alone so well.
Damn man, that was hot. Not anything like my little trip to the kitchen to grab some berries and whip some cream but niiiice!![]()
A friend of mine wrote a story about him desiring this girl he worked with and finally taking her, this is my story from a female perspective. It is different from what I normally write I think so... (Think friend is going to try and post his story to lit)
I looked over at him as he drove me home. Ever since I met him a year ago at work, I knew there was something about him that appealed to me. What I couldnt really tell you. I just knew that whenever I was around him, I felt a pull towards him. I felt like the tiny flame inside of me that yearned for something more than the vanilla existence that was me jump and burn hotter whenever he was near. It seemed like tonight he radiated a nervous energy, something would happen tonight. Good, bad or ugly I didnt care. I needed this one night.
He asked about my boyfriend, I didnt want to answer. He was an asshole that I should have sent packing a long time ago, but he was safe and comfortable. So unlike the guy beside me, who was mysterious and dangerous and unrelenting. I had seen the way he had looked at me at work and chose to ignore it and pretend to not understand. But, I knew that he could sense things about me that I hadnt even figured out for myself yet. WE pulled up to my place. He asked if he could use the restroom, a part of me was saying no and yammering about the house being a mess, and a different part of me was saying something that I had never heard before.
I opened the door again apologizing for the mess. I pointed him towards the bathroom and rushed through the living room grabbing dirty dishes to hurry and wash. Sheesh, what a mess my house was in. I was standing at the sink when I heard him call out for me. I could hear his footsteps behind me, I wes too afraid to turn around and look at him. I was afraid of what my face would show, possibly the turmoil I felt with him near. His body pinned me against the sink, his hands moved my hair away from my neck. I jumped at this invasion of my space, him way to close. I could feel his cock pressed against my ass, " get the fuck away from me" I told him. His height and strength, intimidating, he could do whatever he wanted to me and I couldnt fight him off. He pressed against me harder. He placed kisses against my neck. "No, no" I shook my head against him. A growing part of me wanted this. I could feel that long dormant flame inside of me burning even hotter. I thought of my boyfriend, even if we were having problems, this wasnt right.
He grabbed a handful of hair, pulling me back slightly. It didnt hurt, it only excited me further. But, this was wrong! What was I doing, what was I thinking? I couldnt be doing this. I shouldnt be allowing this. "No! What the fuck are you doing?" I could feel the protest die on my lips as he continued to kiss my neck and move his hand over my breasts, feeling the hardened nipple. How could I deny that this was turning me on? I moved slightly against him. I could feel his thick cock pressed against me, felt him stop and let out a little gasp. I pushed against him again and whimpered. He pressed against me even harder. I felt him release my hair, my head fell back against him. His hands ran under my shirt to grab my tits hard from behind. I slumped against him, letting his hands plunder my body, offering no more protests or resistance. I wasnt sure what would happen and at this point I know longer cared. I juts knew that his body spoke to mine in ways I didnt fully understand and tonight I wanted this understanding.
I could hear him whispering that I wanted this and that I craved this and the scary part of it, was that he knew this before I did. How did he know me better than I knew myself? I could feel his hands unbuttoning my shirt,letting it fall from my body. The cool hair chilling my skin causing goosebumps. His lips kissed along my shoulders from one side to the other, felt his hands rubbing my breasts through the thin lacy red material. Felt him undo the clasp, letting the bra slide off of my shoulders to drop to the floor. Felt his hands on my bare tits. His mouth never stopping its torment on my soft skin. My nipples were so hard for him. I could feel my pussy growing so damp from his touches. His hands slipped lower, unzipping my jeans, slowly shimmying them down my legs. I quickly stepped out of them. His hands darted into the band of my matching red thong panties. Feeling my bare pussy lips. His fingers slowly stroking, teasing, tormenting.
He turned me around and moved my hands down to the button on his jeans, while he took his short off. I fumbled with the button and zipper, he just smirked at me. Finally, I was able to pull his pants down. I made a move to strip his boxers, but he wouldnt let me. I could see that he was as turned on by this as I was, he looked so thick inside of his boxers. I wanted it, right now. But, it wasnt what he had in mind for now. Leaning back against the sink I watched him as he lowered himself to my pussy. I tried to push my pussy out for him to taste me. He gave me a disapproving look and I settled down. I could feel my pussy was dripping could feel dampness on my inner thighs. I could smell my own intoxicating scent. Still he just stared at me as he breathed in deeply. I wanted to beg him to please give me what I needed, but I knew that wouldnt please him.
His tongue danced across my inner thigh in slow, strong licks. His tongue warm licking up all of my juices. Another whimper escaped me. If that felt this good what would it feel like when his tongue was on my pussy? Tormenting me and driving my desire to levels I wasnt sure were possible he slowly moved closer to my pussy lips. At long last, his tongue licked long and hard on my bare lips. I gasped at the exquisite pleasure, my hips bucked against him. I reached to rub my clit, he brushed my hand away and gave me another look. I moved one hand to his hair to push him into me, I need to touch him to feel him to know that he was real. My other hand played with my nipples rolling and pinching them between my small fingers. He met my eyes, the intensity scared me, I realized then that I was his and I never had a choice. I would always be his.
I moved my legs farther apart, I felt his tongue dart lower towards my asshole. I felt his tongue licking around and around, oh dear god. I couldnt breathe from the sheer madness of it all. Felt his tongue slide into my asshole, felt his fingers slide into my tight pussy. My body arching involuntarily, I felt so out of control. THe flames inside of me burning hotter and hotter, felt so fevered by this guy I worked with. By the things he was doing to me, my body, my self control. His mouth left my ass and latched onto my hard clit. He sucked on it without mercy, he added a third finger to my wet pussy. I could feel my orgasm building, knew it was near, I clamped down on his fingers. I was so close.
Abruptly, he pulled away. I whimpered loudly in protest, I tried to pull him back to me. He gave me a look that instantly told me what my place was in this. I was here to meet his needs and I better not forget that I was here to slake his desire. He leaned towards me, kissing my lips, the first time I had felt his lips against mine. It was wild and savage. I could taste myself on him, smell my juices on his skin, feel him attacking my mouth. I could feel how much he wanted me, how long he had waited to have me in that kiss. I think we had both waited just as long, I kissed him back with a fierceness I wasnt aware existed in me. He pulled away and again looked deep into my eyes, reading the desires that ahd long been buried inside of me. He placed his hands on my shoulders and pushed me down. I didnt have to ask and he didnt have to say a word. WE both knew where this was going.
I dropped quickly to my knees, I could feel the juices dripping out of my wet pussy, could still feel the yearning of my pussy wanting to feel his thick cock buried deep inside of me. I grabbed the boxers and pulled them down, grabbed his thick cock in my hands and started to slowly lick up his shaft. I tasted his precum at the tip and enjoyed the taste of him. One hand started to cup his balls, the other hand pointed his cock towards his stomach. I licked from his balls all the way to the top before I took him in my mouth. He was so thick I could swallow him whole. I could only go about half way down, I used my hand to stroke the bottom part of his shaft. He allowed me this for a few minutes before I felt his hands in my hair. Slowly he started to push my head even deeper onto his cock. But, soon his animal lust broke free. He fucked my mouth hard. There was no relenting, even as I choked and gagged against his assault, he didnt stop. He just kept telling me what a "naughty slut I was. take it all you fucking naughty slut".
I didnt try to make him stop or slow down. He was right I was his naughty slut and I always would be. He had read this in my eyes earlier. He knew I wanted to be fucked hard and rough, that I didnt want the sweet vanilla sex that my boyfriend preferred. I wanted to be treated like the slut I truly was. Over and over he pounded my face, his balls slapping against my chin. Him moaning louder and louder, he was getting close to. Suddenly he jerked my mouth off of his cock and let out a huge animal like growl. Before I had a chance to react, he was shooting his cum in my face, hair and mouth. I could feel some of his hot cum running down my breasts as it dripped from my chin. I used my fingers to scoop some of the cum off my lips and tasted him fully. He pushed me back on to his cock as I soaked his juices off of him and felt him harden again. He pulled my back up and turned me around so I was facing the sink again. I looked into the window and could see my reflection, mascara was smeared on my face from choking on his cock, my hair was tangled and wild from his hands in it, around my face my hair was matted with his cum, I still had his cum on my face, and some was still on my breasts. I smiled as I relished the line that I had crossed tonight and the flames inside me seared my soul.
wow! Very good! well written. I don't usually read these things cuz they are written poorly but this was very very good.
No clue why that wasn't approved. It was fukkin great.
I almost expected her to see her boyfriend behind them in the reflection in the mirror.
Well done.
Stilts, I think that story is totally hot. Excuse me while I go take care of some...*ahem*...business of a personal nature...
Thanks I appreciate the feedback..Like I said i know there are a few mistakes so I will clean them up and then make a decision
Thank you *blushes*...Is it tax time?
NO kidding. There where some that where supposedly in English, but the sentence structure and grammar where something between Polynesian and Alpha Centaurian.It is a very hot tale, and well constructed. I have come across a LOT worse on the story board![]()
Excellent Tale Plylvr---
I really liked the build up and release of the story!!!
great job keep it up---I have no idea why that would be rejected--I have never submitted any of mine yet but dont have a clue as to why that story was not posted--it is vastly better than many that I have read.
RB
The story was Stilt30's.
I was just genuflecting at the altar of Stilt's kinkiness
Anyways I appreciate anyone who took the time to read my diatribe..LOL
Not changing too too much. Just some verbage and structure..Thank you for your commentsDon't "clean" it up too much.....
It is a very hot tale, and well constructed. I have come across a LOT worse on the story board![]()
As you know we are our own worst critics. Thanks for taking the time to read it and the comments are much appreciated.Excellent Tale Stilts---
I really liked the build up and release of the story!!!
great job keep it up---I have no idea why that would be rejected--I have never submitted any of mine yet but dont have a clue as to why that story was not posted--it is vastly better than many that I have read.
RB
you just keep writing... fuck that was hot! Someone who gets what us women really want.
there's some stuff that could be polished but I'd certainly resubmit - don't change too much though!!!
We've been drinking most of the evening, and while I’m not sloshed I am pretty buzzed. And feeling frisky. And Danny, my older brother, is pretty well gone too. Enough, anyway, that we feel totally comfortable with the way we’ve been flirting with each other. Not much new there, really, we’ve always flirted with each other. But tonight it’s different. Tonight we both have that “I want you” look in our eyes. It turns me on to know that he wants me, and I so want to do something sweet for him, something loving and giving.
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