Teen Titans: The Next Generation OOC

well actually Lois and Alice are in an elevator (unless I missed a post) but they're on their way so I'll just go with yes already as woo five whole minutes of time won't make that much of a difference

yeah since lois is being carried by the stronger full bloodied kryptonian.
 
So, wait, what was decided when it comes to Jullian? Is he going to end up on top of the roof or are we supposed to assume he snuck into the meeting by now?
 
Yes, I shall be working on it later today... >>

But he IS there! o_o Just silent... Stoic, perhaps... Listening to and observing EVERYTHING!
 
xD

...Well, I drew them...as best as I could...since I did not know what they would look like. >>;


...And I POSTED! FINALLY! o_o

T___T Tis short, though.
 
Just take it and thank god he's not talking to himself for once.
 
Pft, if people start complaining about long posts again, I'm going to start writing like this is a Harry Potter group thread:

Mallory entered the lounge area and saw the rest of his team was already waiting inside. He walked over to the fridge and took out a soda before heading for the table to pull up a seat. Opening up the can, he took a long drink out of it before setting it on the table, smiling at those around him, "So what's going on everyone?"

Only with more spelling errors.
 
Pft, if people start complaining about long posts again, I'm going to start writing like this is a Harry Potter group thread:

Mallory entered the lounge area and saw the rest of his team was already waiting inside. He walked over to the fridge and took out a soda before heading for the table to pull up a seat. Opening up the can, he took a long drink out of it before setting it on the table, smiling at those around him, "So what's going on everyone?"

Only with more spelling errors.

noone was complaining about long posts. Its more that considering that one post was short not so much.
 
.... in chatroom... nothing

on a board where you actually have the time to put some forethought into what your character says and does...

well to be as clear as I can... it makes the character feel 2d as there is nothing you can claim to his personality there other than the fact that he apparently prefers ice cold canned soft drinks.
 
If anybody constantly responded to my posts with something that small and unhelpful in moving the plot along or developing characters, I'd take a page out of Unseen's book and stab them. Or at least drop the thread due to a lack of interest or drive for doing my part in carrying the story.

Although virtual stabbings can be fun....
 
.... in chatroom... nothing

on a board where you actually have the time to put some forethought into what your character says and does...

well to be as clear as I can... it makes the character feel 2d as there is nothing you can claim to his personality there other than the fact that he apparently prefers ice cold canned soft drinks.

What she said.

But you still suck.
 
LOL

Hopefully the RP will go somewhere.. The next post I'll write may have the other two of mine entering finally...

I was lazy with writing.
 
I don't disagree with you, but I think there are just as many issues with making 8 paragraph posts to cover a minute of time, and it doesn't really have anything to do with my dislike of reading.

I simply think it seems equally unrealistic for characters to think and develop themselves to the reader at the rates that some do here. We as readers probably know more about a lot of these characters than most people find out about characters in the entire span of many novels.
 
lol quite possibly I do admit I ramble... a lot

but at least I've never written an entire post where most of it contains details about their hair and clothes
 
For that, I am grateful. Hopefully no one misunderstands me. I think everyone here is a great writer.
 
Unrealistic? lol I think a lot myself... So and my mind wonders as much as some of my characters do! lol Though I will admit, some things are simply meant as insight, not just for myself, no...but to pretty much not let it be unknown. I would not write about it if it did not play an important key or factor...

Anyway, I am tired... My brain is crashing on me.
 
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