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[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

Myeah.

Yeah, I know, she started it, you're only "defending your country". Right?
Right, but not by actually denying her claims, but by <drumroll please> bashing someone else's country. That, and nothing else.
(not even knowing what country, but that's another story)

Hey, I like all peoples.

I have lots of friends.

When I was growing up, I had a friend, Fedelis Dangolovich. He lived in the West End part of Boston, down the street from me. I grew up in the North End.

His parents never learned the language, never left their little apartment other than for his father to go to work. They were distrustful of Americans. I felt bad for them.

Fedelis had a tough time. All the kids made fun of him because he was German and it wasn't that long since WWII.

To me, people are people. I like everyone, unfortunately, I can't say that about others. I have experienced so many people who don't like me because of my name, nationality, religion, politics, whatever, the car that I drive. Get a life. Life is too short.

We all need to get along. Isn't it ridiculous when you think about it? Here we are all living on the same one tiny planet in this great universe and we're prejudice because this one is from here, is tall, short, fat, thin, blonde, not blonde, German, not German. Nuts.

We are all just people. We all bleed. We all cry. We all laugh and we all hurt.

My passion rears it's ugly head when people start pointing fingers. I don't like name calling and finger pointing. Oh, yeah, there are plenty of people on this board who will dig up an old quote to bash me, but they will never go back to find the quote that started my tirade in the first place. They feel gratified if they bash me, instead. Knock yourself out. Better yet, go bash my stories. Boy, that will really get me going, huh?

Whatever. I'm just here to write stories. Once in a while I make the mistake of posting something in this dark cyber space of people who are here and who are just like me, no different, posting replies to what I post.

 

[Liar]

"You're such a...Liar!"

Are we bored today and have nothing else to do but pick on poor bostonfictionwriter?

We are etxremely bored. I'm on vacation, there's noone but me here, it's too hot to mow the lawn or do anything except sit and sip wine coolers until later tonight and I've run out of good books to read.

Plus, you pretty much painted a target on yourself there.

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

We are etxremely bored. I'm on vacation, there's noone but me here, it's too hot to mow the lawn or do anything except sit and sip wine coolers until later tonight and I've run out of good books to read.

Plus, you pretty much painted a target on yourself there.

Me? Bored? Are you kidding?

I've posted 571 entries since January 2007. That's more than one for every day for a year and a half.

Nah, I'm not bored. I'm just taking a break from my story. After a while you can't see straight and I'm trying not to make mistakes because then Ace will be posting an anonymous grammar post to my story (as if I don't know it's him).

We have much going on these days. We're having the house painted and the kitchen redone. Nothing's been done to this house since 1915, which gives it it's charm and character. It's all original.

Good books like good movies are few and far between.

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

Give me a break

If you've spent any time with this thread, you'll have noticed that BFW frequently bashes others, usually right in the middle of rant about how he never bashes others. Why shouldn't he do that to other countries, too?

Still can't decide if I should be entertained by the people who assume that I'm German because I live in Germany, or horrified by the ignorant things they say to me because they assume I'm German. Germans must be heartily sick of having WWII thrown in their faces all the time. And what do you want to bet that Scouries has never been farther east than Miami, but considers himself the expert on all things Scandinavian.

Oh, and Freddy, the US Military has been more open and accepting of blacks than the rest of society ever since Eisenhower integrated it in the 1950s. We're quite proud of that.

Precisely, my point. Of course the US Military has been open and accepting of blacks than the rest of society. Where else are black men going to be accepted and given the opportunties to make a good living and have a chance at getting an education?

At what expense though? At he cost of their lives? We've welcomed blacks in the US military since the Civil War, yet, they are still treated like second class citizens in their own freaking country. Give me a break.

Life is not fair and worse, there's prejudice. You're reading the most unprejudice person on the planet. Me. I had dozens of black friends when I was the only white boy in a boxing gym. They were all my friends, that is, until we left the gym together. They walked home to the right to their black neighborhood and I walked home to the left to my white neighborhood. I never understood it. Hey, it wasn't coming from me.

US military is a joke. They abuse the "good nature" of their enlisted men and women by keeping them in combat waaaay too long.

Just like our prisons are filled with a higher percentage of blacks, so aren't our military. We need to draft some of the white boys from Harvard and Yale. Where was President Bush during the draft? Daddy got him a soft position the the air reserves that he didn't even show up for? That would be AWOL for anyone else, especially a black man.

A black guy steals a loaf of bread to feed his hungry family and he gets the death penalty. A while man steals millions of dollars and he goes to Washington to become President of the United States. (Think Bush)

Yeah, I don't have to make this shit up. It's real. I wish it was fiction, but it's not.

Every single time Bush goes to Saudi Arabia, the price of oil sky rockets. Strange, huh? Daddy Bush went there during his last year as president and gas jumped to its highest price. His son goes to Saudi Arabia a few months ago, his last year in office, and...no way. What a coincidence, the price of oil is...how much?

Most people that I come in contact with on a daily basis are good people. It is those who have the power that are evil. Chaney comes to mind, as an example. Prejudice starts from the top. Why are we fighting a losing war again?

Oh, I know, it's because there's more money in war than there is in fixing the US economy. Rather than give us all jobs, they'd rather give Chaney's company billions of dollars to rebuild Iraq. Oh, yeah.

 

[michchick98]

Well sweedie, the money I’m not getting here somehow just financed a new forty-four footer that Gabby and I just spent a delightful weekend on…

Good thing you brought her along, I'm sure you needed something to float on when your imaginary boat, bought with imaginary royalties sank in the very real ocean!

You play soccer – not football! It’s hard to imagine a Swede putting on some pads and running out onto a football field. One crushing tackle and he’d running for the nearest airport to take him home.

Hey, dumbass. Ever heard of rugby? No? I thought not. Your ignorance is showing again.

The interesting thing about America is that we drained Europe of three or four generations of their most dynamic, intelligent, brave, interesting, adventurous citizens – which of course made us what we are today and left Europe with the timid, stay at homers who were afraid to take the chance.

Well, it made MOST of us what we are today. You're still an idiot.

 

[Liar]

Good books like good movies are few and far between.

There are three books here I have yet to read. One is a phone book from 1974, one is the collected minutes from last year's city council meetings, and the third is titled "Cod, a brief history of white fish".

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

I can't wait

There are three books here I have yet to read. One is a phone book from 1974, one is the collected minutes from last year's city council meetings, and the third is titled "Cod, a brief history of white fish".

Damn, you read books like I watch movies.

I used to read more, but I don't so much now. I don't read when I write. If I start reading, it stops my ability to write. When I was going for my degree in English, all I did was read. It was difficult to write I read so much and found myself copying the writing style of others.

Now, I'd rather watch a movie. I'm a movie buff. I took a couple of courses in screenwriting and my professor, the first night of class passed out a paper with 500 movies listed. He wanted to know which movies we had seen.

The list was impressive and I was certain that I only had watched half the movies on the list. I was the only one in class to check off every movie. No one was more surprised than I was. That was when I realized that I was a movie buff.

As soon as I stop writing, I'll return to reading. I'm waiting for this writing to stop. It's weird. Every day, I have another idea for a story. I can't type fast enough. Granted, some of my stories are not the greatest, but I'm writing. Besides, what does it matter?

It's a means to an end. Writing is the process. By this time in 50 or 60 years, I'll be an average writer. I can't wait.

As far as editing, I'll leave that for the editors. I'd rather eat shit than edit my work.

 

[sr71plt]

That's nitpicker not nitwit.

It must drive you mad to have someone like me who hates editing. How do you live with yourself knowing that there's a crooked picture somewhere on someone's wall?

I'd love to see you in a standing in a bar with a bunch of Hells Angels.

"That's motorcycle and hot Hog."

"Get him!"

"Mommy!"

You must be busy all day long making a nuissance of yourself by correcting everyone's grammar. Does it make you feel Ayrian or just annoying?

"Oh, gees, here he comes again."

"Don't talk to him, just smile and nod."

"Why?"

"Because he'll correct everything you say until you want to kick him in the balls."

"Is that why he's all hunched over."

"Yeah, I kicked him in the balls yesterday. He wears a cup now, but it doesn't matter. I wear steel toed shoes."

"I was going to ask you about that. Do they make them in my size?"

Note, I purposely made some mistakes for you to correct. Knock yourself out.

No, actually I think you just looked so pathetic sucking up to Scouries like that. Certainly makes you appear to be brainless.

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

There's someone for everyone

No, actually I think you just looked so pathetic sucking up to Scouries like that. Certainly makes you appear to be brainless.

See, now, Ace, why can't you show a bit of creativity with your bashes or is all you do is to correct the mistakes of others. I was expecting as much creativity from your comment here as you give when bashing my stories.

I have some dingleberries in my ass you can pick if that will make you happy.

As far as sucking up to Scouries? I don't think that I do that.

What you should know about me is that I'm loyal. I'm a Leo the lion, July 26th. And when someone is kind to me and generous with their comments and time, then it makes me want to return the favor.

Now, why can't we be nice? We were having a nice exchange until you called me brainless, which, of course, I'm not because if I was I couldn't have written more than 500 stories. Perhaps, you are the brainless one not to know the difference between one who has a brain and one who doesn't.

Have you thought about trying an anger management class? Maybe you should try meditation. Do you just break up with your boyfriend? I'm sorry. They'll be another. There's plenty of men in the sea. Don't despair. There's someone for everyone...even you.

Take a breath, relax, and return with a better bash. I'll wait here for you to come back with one.

 

[sr71plt]

See, now, Ace, why can't you show a bit of creativity with your bashes or is all you do is to correct the mistakes of others. I was expecting as much creativity from your comment here as you give when bashing my stories.

I have some dingleberries in my ass you can pick if that will make you happy.

As far as sucking up to Scouries? I don't think that I do that.

What you should know about me is that I'm loyal. I'm a Leo the lion, July 26th. And when someone is kind to me and generous with their comments and time, then it makes me want to return the favor.

Now, why can't we be nice? We were having a nice exchange until you called me brainless, which, of course, I'm not because if I was I couldn't have written more than 500 stories. Perhaps, you are the brainless one not to know the difference between one who has a brain and one who doesn't.

Have you thought about trying an anger management class? Maybe you should try meditation. Do you just break up with your boyfriend? I'm sorry. They'll be another. There's plenty of men in the sea. Don't despair. There's someone for everyone...even you.

Take a breath, relax, and return with a better bash. I'll wait here for you to come back with one.

I'm a Leo, too. But I'm not dumb enough to think Scouries gets royalties from this site, twinkletoes.

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

See? Isn't this better?

I'm a Leo, too. But I'm not dumb enough to think Scouries gets royalties from this site, twinkletoes.

Maybe he does and maybe he doesn't. His financial business is none of my business. If he does get a kickback, good for him. I hope he does receive compensation for this thread. He does a good job with all the statistical information. He must have an in with Laurel to get so much proprietary information, unless he has an entire staff who work long and hard to support him in his endeavors.

By the way, it took you long enough to come back with a comeback. Actually, after reading what you wrote about Fred Flintstone bowling as twinkletoes, it really wasn't worth the wait, Stardust.

My girlfriend's a Leo, too. I find that I (generally and there's always an exception, lol) that I get along with other Leos, as well as Gemini and Virgo. I have a difficult time with Taurus and Pisces.

I'm glad your back on your medication, Ace. See? Now, isn't this better now that we are Pals again.

"Bartender, give him another one of whatever he's drinking."

 

[sr71plt]

Maybe he does and maybe he doesn't. His financial business is none of my business. If he does get a kickback, good for him. I hope he does receive compensation for this thread. He does a good job with all the statistical information. He must have an in with Laurel to get so much proprietary information, unless he has an entire staff who work long and hard to support him in his endeavors.

There ya go.

 

[scouries]

QUOTE LIAR There are three books here I have yet to read. One is a phone book from 1974, one is the collected minutes from last year's city council meetings, and the third is titled "Cod, a brief history of white fish".


Hey buddy why not take a break from this arguing and read this brand new story from Freddie instead of criticizing America. It’s a ROMANCE!!!!! And excellent!

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p.s. freddie don't worry about the pilot. he used to be a pretty good guy until he heard about the ROYALTIES. Then he went ape-shit. He's been pissed off at me ever since. Loved my writing one day (even joined the scouries fan club, the next Mr. Grammar couldn't find a nice thing to say about me. Sent back the life sized poster of yours truly - it looked like he'd had a tantrum, he'd used a black felt pen to cross out my face and genitals and then ripped it up. Then he joined the kitten club...

...I did send him a replacement poster though and am pretty sure it's back up on his bedroom wall...one of those weird love/hate things...

...maybe you should sent him an official BFW poster...

 

[sr71plt]

freddie[/b] don't worry about the pilot. he used to be a pretty good guy until he heard about the ROYALTIES. Then he went ape-shit. He's been pissed off at me ever since. Loved my writing one day (even joined the scouries fan club, the next Mr. Grammar couldn't find a nice thing to say about me. Sent back the life sized poster of yours truly - it looked like he'd had a tantrum, he'd used a black felt pen to cross out my face and genitals and then ripped it up. Then he joined the kitten club...

...I did send him a replacement poster though and am pretty sure it's back up on his bedroom wall...one of those weird love/hate things...

...maybe you should sent him an official BFW poster...

Yeah, I did go ape shit over your outrageous royalty claim--for obvious reasons--but in a highly amused way. (And I have no idea why the Web site doesn't just pull the plug on you for all of your lying about them.) All the rest of this crap is just the sort of buffroonery of yours that has any claim you are trying to be accepted as a writer a case of jumping the shark. The fact that BTW has decided to zoom off in your direction just because he flipped off everyone else here and is obnoxious about flooding the story list with that which is underbaked and noxious does, as I posted, make him look quite pathetic as well.

The threads you have on the forum to puff yourself up certainly have exploded on you.

I repeat my suggestion that you go back to go and try it again with a new name and a new attitude (and quite possibly quite a few lessons in writing and grammar).

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

I hope so

Yeah, I did go ape shit over your outrageous royalty claim--for obvious reasons--but in a highly amused way. (And I have no idea why the Web site doesn't just pull the plug on you for all of your lying about them.) All the rest of this crap is just the sort of buffroonery of yours that has any claim you are trying to be accepted as a writer a case of jumping the shark. The fact that BTW has decided to zoom off in your direction just because he flipped off everyone else here and is obnoxious about flooding the story list with that which is underbaked and noxious does, as I posted, make him look quite pathetic as well.

The threads you have on the forum to puff yourself up certainly have exploded on you.

I repeat my suggestion that you go back to go and try it again with a new name and a new attitude (and quite possibly quite a few lessons in writing and grammar).

Who is BTW? It sounds like a rapid mass transit line.

"You take the BTW south..."

Why is this guy so angry? Ace, what happened to you? You used to be so nice and intelligent, now you're just...miserable.

Flipped off everyone here?

More like defended myself after being attacked on this board. "Some" of the people here not only don't do well with new members that are not "in" their group, but "some" people here have servere emotional problems. It is to be expected when you consider the site. Plus the fact, as you have just demonstrated "some" people here get mad when I surpass my story submission limit, whatever that number is.

Is there a limit to the number of stories that I'm allowed to post, Ace? Are you in charge of that limit? Perhaps, if you told me my word count, then I could stay within that range and on your better side.

Nah, never mind, I'll just continuing writing my stories.

Tell me, though, do the number of my stories bother you so much that you must take this hissy fit? Why is that? Do you think that if I post a story a day or two stories a day or three that it flushes the other stories off the board too soon? Is that it?

So you are just being a good neighbor with your concern for everyone else but you. I see. That 's really nice of you to take on that role. Hmm...Literotica should pay you for doing that job. Oh, that's why your so angry. Here you are manning your post and Scouries is getting all the money. So, it's about money and has nothing to do with how many stories that I write.

So, I'm obnoxious and pathetic because I write stories here? Laurel has yet to complain about the number of my submissions. Perhaps, you should complain to her on the behalf of everyone here.

"Laurel, Freddie's writing too many stories. He's obnoxious and pathetic. Can you tell him to stop?" It helps if you stomp your feet and cry before throwing yourself on the floor kicking and screaming.

What planet are you from? Methinks when you were flying your make believe planes that your brain may have been damage from oxygen starvation.

Moreover, why does it bother you what Scouries or anyone on this site writes? It's a free site. Go start your own thread. You can call if "Cry Baby" thread. Better yet, go start your own site.

Actually, you should start a thread called, all those in favor of banning Bostonfictiowriter for writing too many stories, for flipping off those mentally disturbed individuals who attacked him, for being obnoxious, and for being pathetic, sign in here.

What do you think? I thnk it's a good idea.

Maybe you should just take an aspirin and get some rest. You don't own a firearm, do you? You're not going to harm yourself or someone else, are you? Do you want me to call someone to sit with you while you regain your lunacy?

It makes sense that a site, such as this one, would pay Scouries a commission for delivering people, such as yourself, to this site. Look at all the fun you are obviously having.

Besides, you don't even know who Scouries is. He could own the site for all you know. I could own the site for all you know. You don't know. We are just an electronic pulse. Newsflash, Ace, no one here is real, not even you. We don't exist. We are just a cyber imprint for the moment and then...poof, gone.

I write fiction about Boston. It's all make believe, made up in my head. I figure that I have a few decades left in my life. If I extrapolate, I thnk that I could write, lets see, carry the one, multiply by 30, a hundred thousand stories. Will my writing 100,000 thousand stories put you over the edge?

I hope so.

 

[sr71plt]

Why is this guy so angry? Ace, what happened to you? You used to be so nice and intelligent, now you're just...miserable.

Angry and miserable? Not a bit. But your circus with Scouries is getting more than just a tad too lame.

 

[sr71plt]

Tell me, though, do the number of my stories bother you so much that you must take this hissy fit? Why is that? Do you think that if I post a story a day or two stories a day or three that it flushes the other stories off the board too soon? Is that it?

Would you like the truth on that? Since you've asserted that I diss your stories/writing, when I've been pretty much sitting on my hands on that topic (certainly not denigrating them to the extent that you do yourself on this forum), I might as well not hold off.

I'm a professional writer and editor, so, yes, I do get irritated when someone claims they work all day on writing and what they are doing is bogging down a porn site with underbaked vignettes (all to get an annual measily $500)--not only bringing down the overall quality of the writing site and eating up far more than their share of access to timely posting of stories by hundreds of others but also totally wasting their own time and effort because they aren't developing a jot in either their storytelling or writing ability.

Does it make me hyperventilate and want to open my veins? No, not particularly. Does it make me think you are a pathetic clown. Yes, actually.

Do I snicker when you push your brown nose up Scouries's ass in worshipping his writing and marketing "ability." Yes, a little, because his stories could make a good use of a bulldozer and a pair of hedgeclippers and a whole lot greater variety and sophistication too.

Cheers.

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

Unbelievable!

Would you like the truth on that? Since you've asserted that I diss your stories/writing, when I've been pretty much sitting on my hands on that topic (certainly not denigrating them to the extent that you do yourself on this forum), I might as well not hold off.

I'm a professional writer and editor, so, yes, I do get irritated when someone claims they work all day on writing and what they are doing is bogging down a porn site with underbaked vignettes (all to get an annual measily $500)--not only bringing down the overall quality of the writing site and eating up far more than their share of access to timely posting of stories by hundreds of others but also totally wasting their own time and effort because they aren't developing a jot in either their storytelling or writing ability.

Does it make me hyperventilate and want to open my veins? No, not particularly. Does it make me think you are a pathetic clown. Yes, actually.

Do I snicker when you push your brown nose up Scouries's ass in worshipping his writing and marketing "ability." Yes, a little, because his stories could make a good use of a bulldozer and a pair of hedgeclippers and a whole lot greater variety and sophistication too.

Cheers.

Did you recently hit your head? Have you had a head injury lately or have you just lost your mind, suddenly.

This is not only a porn site but also it is a free site. You mistake this site for a literary site. It is not by any stretch of your wildest imaginings.

There are far better writers than me on this site. I am the first to admit that. Just as there are far worse writers than me on this site, as well. I am the first to admit that, too.

Why are you here if you are a professional writer and editor, other than to make yourself feel superior by correcting my grammar and bashing my stories? Does that prove to me that you know more than I do when it comes to spelling and grammar. I admit it. You do. Big fucking deal. Who cares?

Not only that, but I written many times that I can't spell for shit and I'd rather eat shit than edit my work. I bet you got an erection when I wrote that, huh?

I used to work as an "professional" accountant. Never have I been to a CPA site to read up on tax literature. Why a "professional" writer and editor would come to a porn site and expect masterpiece stories is beyond me.

Now, as far as your assertion regarding the $500. Do you think that I spend all this time and all this effort because I hope to win that first prize on the Survivor contest? I donated the $250 that I won last year, just as I donated the $5,000 that someone sent me anonymously.

Trust me, I don't need the money. I don't write for money. Unlike you, I write for me. I have no master holding a paycheck over my head. I write for the passion of it. Consequently, I write whatever I want. I bet you must write and edit lots of shit that you hate to write and edit for money, huh?

Well, I don't have to do that. I'm well off. I don't need the money. I guess that's why your so pissed off, huh? You still have to slep into work and write and edit the shit of other writers who just aren't up to your standards. Boy, your life must really suck. No wonder why your so angry.

Is it because the published writers don't pay you enough respect? Maybe, they don' brown nose your ass in the way that I think I do Scouries. Is that it? You get no respect at work and then you come here and get no respect here either? Where the Hell do you go to get any respect. Well, to get respect, you must give it. And all you've given is your shitty superior attitude to writers on this site who are having fun.

Meanwhile here I am having the time of my life churning out my shitty stories to your displeasure. Well, excuse me for living, buster. Too fucking bad. Until Laurel pulls me from this site and tells me that I can't write "no more" stories, I'm here to stay.

Not only that, maybe, I'll really be extra nice to Scouries and tell him that I think he is one of the best writers on this site, which I do anyway. He is a good writer, a better writer than me. I bet that pisses you off, too.

I've had offers to write more E-books. I turned them all down. That's not want I want to do. My future is not in an E-book. Do you think that I need the couple thousand dollars? I'd give it away anyway, just as I did with my earning from the last two E-books. They are a waste of my time. I write just for the pure fun of it. I want to write what I want to write. You dig?

Now, if you don't like my stories, don't read them. If you feel you must bash them, knock yourself out. I don't care because I don't write for the scores either.

Now, you've insulted me about my writing because my stories are not up to your professional standards whatever the fuck that is, I don't know and I don't care. But, do you realize that you've also insulted all the other writers on this board who do not write as well as I do?

Do you feel that any writer submitting a story here should pass it by you first to see if it is acceptable? Fuck you, asshole.

I have nothing to do with the over quality of this site and I use that phrase loosely. This is a porn site, you nitwit. The over quality of this site was diminished as soon as they named it Literotica.

Now, that's not my assertion, but the assertion of people who would not only never write a story for this site but also never read a story on this site. That's the assertion of the moral majority of most Americans. Why do you think so many who write here don't tell there spouses that they write and/or read here.

Everyone I know knows that I write stories here. I'm proud of it. Hey, moron, I even used my real name on my E-books. I don't give a shit.

I think it's time you found another site to vomit your superiority. Oh, wait, if you did that, then there may be others who would realize that you just a hack, as I am to you. Boy, that would suck. Is that why your not writing on a literary site? Is it because you get to bash guys like me who don't write as well as you do?

We have some literary sites around the Boston area that would certainly put you in your place.

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

Sorry, Dude.

Moreover (lol), Ace, you're just pissed because I like Scouries better than I do you.

"I love you, Jimmy. Only, what the Hell did you eat last night? Taco Bell? Hey, I'm not sticking my nose up there until you shower. Sorry, Dude."

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

Money

It's all about the stories, Ace.

The more stories that I write, the more money Literotica makes.

Do you really think Literotica will shut me down for writing stories?

"Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha!"

 

[sr71plt]

Talk about flipped out.

 

[starrkers]

BFW: You say you write for the love and passion of it. But you have no wish to improve. That is sad.
"It is all about the stories" you say. But you make no effort to make those "stories" readable or enjoyable for the reader.
You know what you write is of poor quality - you say so often enough.
Yes, it is a porn site. Most of what you write doesn't qualify for that description.
You're here to stay. Good for you. Let's start a new category just for you, you certainly "churn out" enough "shitty stories" to support it.

Bluster, bluff and befoul these threads with abuse all you want, Freddie. It merely shows your ignorance, immaturity and inability to interact with anyone.

You're a no talent nobody and all your 500+ submissions merely prove the point to anyone prepared to wade through a few of them.

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

BFW: You say you write for the love and passion of it. But you have no wish to improve. That is sad.
"It is all about the stories" you say. But you make no effort to make those "stories" readable or enjoyable for the reader.
You know what you write is of poor quality - you say so often enough.
Yes, it is a porn site. Most of what you write doesn't qualify for that description.
You're here to stay. Good for you. Let's start a new category just for you, you certainly "churn out" enough "shitty stories" to support it.

Bluster, bluff and befoul these threads with abuse all you want, Freddie. It merely shows your ignorance, immaturity and inability to interact with anyone.

You're a no talent nobody and all your 500+ submissions merely prove the point to anyone prepared to wade through a few of them.

Starrker, Honey, if I suck at writing, then where are you?

I'd put my worst story up against your best story any day of the week.

Now, why must you put your two cents in? Why must you be mean to me? You come out of left field and write this shit. How dare you? And then you go off crying that I wrote stuff about you.

If I'm a no talent nobody, then I don't know what you are.

And this is how you interact? Where are you people skills? You true character is showing and it's not pretty. Just who is the ignorant one here? Not me.

Isn't it time you wrote another one of your award winning 1,000 word fluff stories so that all your little friends can vote for it? Now, if you believe by that barometer that you are a better writer than I am, then you're coo coo.

At least I know my limitations and am the first one to admit where my skills are and my writing ability is way higher than yours honey.

Go have another drink, Sweetie.

 

[starrkers]

Starrker, Honey, if I suck at writing, then where are you?

I'd put my worst story up against your best story any day of the week.

Now, why must you put your two cents in? Why must you be mean to me? You come out of left field and write this shit. How dare you? And then you go off crying that I wrote stuff about you.

If I'm a no talent nobody, then I don't know what you are.

And this is how you interact? Where are you people skills? You true character is showing and it's not pretty. Just who is the ignorant one here? Not me.

Isn't it time you wrote another one of your award winning 1,000 word fluff stories so that all your little friends can vote for it? Now, if you believe by that barometer that you are a better writer than I am, then you're coo coo.

At least I know my limitations and am the first one to admit where my skills are and my writing ability is way higher than yours honey.

Go have another drink, Sweetie.

Oh you're a sad fuck. And coo coo doesn't begin to describe you.

Of course I'm a better writer than you. Everyone here is a better writer than you. The shit you so proudly submit here, your life's passion, is complete unadulterated crap that isn't worth the time you waste writing it.

You are deluded if you believe otherwise. But you've proven that again and again.

Freddie, the shit you write can't even get enough votes to qualify for contest inclusion, let alone gain a score worthy of contention. And don't try to tell me it's because of the the "bashers".
It's not bashing if they don't vote at all.

Yeah, you're gonna win the Survivor contest. Big deal. It's only worth winning if it's won well. And 500 nonsense entries that have neither erotic content nor coherent storylines aren't winning well. A pile of shit is still a pile of shit, regardless of how you serve it.

 

[BOSTONFICTIONWRITER]

BFW: You say you write for the love and passion of it. But you have no wish to improve. That is sad.
"It is all about the stories" you say. But you make no effort to make those "stories" readable or enjoyable for the reader.
You know what you write is of poor quality - you say so often enough.
Yes, it is a porn site. Most of what you write doesn't qualify for that description.
You're here to stay. Good for you. Let's start a new category just for you, you certainly "churn out" enough "shitty stories" to support it.

Bluster, bluff and befoul these threads with abuse all you want, Freddie. It merely shows your ignorance, immaturity and inability to interact with anyone.

You're a no talent nobody and all your 500+ submissions merely prove the point to anyone prepared to wade through a few of them.

I just realized by your word choice and your diction that you are one of my long-term bashers, aren't you Starrkers? You are one of those Anonymous bashers that appear on most of my stories. It's funny the things that stick out.

I have this one basher who appears on many of my stories with those exact words in her bash of my story.

"But you have no wish to improve. That is sad."

Now, I know you for who you are and what you are...a cunt.

Yet, that's okay, Starrkers. You can bash everyone of my stories. I don't care. I know my writing has improved since last year, last month, last week, and yesterday. Moreover, I definitely know my stories are way better than your shit you call stories.

Never have I written any anonymous bashes in the way you have to my stories. I wonder, who else is on your shit list. Who else have you bashed? Is that how you won your contest by having you and all your little friends give low scores to every story you thought was better than you lousy stoy, which in effect was every story entered in the contest (lol).

You're just insane. You are one of 'those' people who doesn't like it when the attention is taken away from you by another writer on the board. Is your life that empty?

Tell me, why are you here? What's your story? Are you lonely? Are you a man? Are you a pervert? Aren't you getting any sex in your life? And who is that a photo of? Certainly, that's not you?

Moreover, are you so ugly that you cannot show your face?

I'm here to write. You're just here to write an occasional sucky story and bash others who write better than you do, which is, everybody.

And you feel sad for me? Don't feel sad for me. I have a good life. I'm having fun.

I can't wait to write more stories to piss you off.