Completely Unsanctioned Quarterly Writing Contest - "Crush Your Enemy Like a Grape"

[THROBBS]

howz this?

 

[Anna_Malia75]

howz this?

Looks appropriate to me, you throbbing pillar of manhood you, but let me to some test-marketing with my fellow contestants. Thanks sooooo much.

 

[THROBBS]

I have another concept but I need to gather a prop.

 

[SweetWitch]

howz this?

OMG. Mark gets to wear that?

 

[THROBBS]

OMG. Mark gets to wear that?

Is that good?

 

[Mark_Ilaan]

Is that good?

Who cares what she thinks. I like it. Thanks, man.

 

[Anna_Malia75]

Who cares what she thinks. I like it. Thanks, man.

Ooh, who says men don't look good in yellow?

I suppose it's already too busy too refer to the contest, huh, THROBBy? Wouldn't want Mark's many girlfriends here on Lit to think he was flippin' 'em off.

 

[THROBBS]

Ooh, who says men don't look good in yellow?

I suppose it's already too busy too refer to the contest, huh, THROBBy? Wouldn't want Mark's many girlfriends here on Lit to think he was flippin' 'em off.

nevertoo late...got a couple other concepts also.

 

[THROBBS]

Ooh, who says men don't look good in yellow?

I suppose it's already too busy too refer to the contest, huh, THROBBy? Wouldn't want Mark's many girlfriends here on Lit to think he was flippin' 'em off.

Better?

hmmm..it's yellow! I can't believe it's not better!

 

[jomar]

Better?

hmmm..it's yellow! I can't believe it's not better!

Better. I'll enjoy sporting it!

 

[Anna_Malia75]

I think it's better, THROBBaby, and I know that's the one I'll wear when my story gets posted. But until then, we'll just let the leader take his or her() choice from among all the AVs. Thanks soooo much for your help.

Jomar! Story finished yet?

 

[jomar]

I think it's better, THROBBaby, and I know that's the one I'll wear when my story gets posted. But until then, we'll just let the leader take his or her() choice from among all the AVs. Thanks soooo much for your help.

Jomar! Story finished yet?

I must quit tinkering with it and will submit it sometime today. The avatar shall soon be mine!

 

[Anna_Malia75]

I must quit tinkering with it and will submit it sometime today. The avatar shall soon be mine!

Keep dreaming, honey. It's always good to have a healthy fantasy life.

 

[jomar]

Keep dreaming, honey. It's always good to have a healthy fantasy life.

It's in, baby! I'm gonna be rocking that yellow AV Lit style in a week to 10 days.

Enjoy it while you can Mark!

 

[Mark_Ilaan]

It's in, baby! I'm gonna be rocking that yellow AV Lit style in a week to 10 days.

Enjoy it while you can Mark!

I will. I'll get as much mileage as I can before yours hits the new postings. It won't take long for you to trump my score.

 

[jomar]

I will. I'll get as much mileage as I can before yours hits the new postings. It won't take long for you to trump my score.

is right. The series this chapter is in appeals to a very narrow market and probably even narrower than usual since it's submitted in the BDSM category.

 

[Anna_Malia75]

is right. The series this chapter is in appeals to a very narrow market and probably even narrower than usual since it's submitted in the BDSM category.

Bah! Doesn't matter how many votes you get here, as long as they're high enough. Buck up, man.

 

[jomar]

Bah! Doesn't matter how many votes you get here, as long as they're high enough. Buck up, man.

Excellent point! Spirit is buoyed, hope is renewed!

 

[Mark_Ilaan]

Bumping in to get some mileage out of this avatar before the next story is posted.

 

[jomar]

My 'bridge' chapter just posted so only one or two more days until the reveal!

 

[SweetWitch]

My 'bridge' chapter just posted so only one or two more days until the reveal!

Let us know when it's posted. Can't wait to watch you trump Mark.

 

[jomar]

Okay, but...

Let us know when it's posted. Can't wait to watch you trump Mark.

please allow me to present some background to put it in proper perspective.

I submitted the first chapter under an alt as a troll bait hoping to draw troll comments and low scores. But I didn't didn't know what I was doing because readers mostly liked it. So I changed the cuckold ending and put it with my other stuff. Then, I wrote chapter two as pure stroke from beginning to end. I submitted chapter 3 as a bridge to chapter 4, which is my entry here.

There's not much story going on at all, but I tried to keep the style the same in all of them. Really, the whole series is terribly vulgar, crude, nasty and tasteless. And more fun to write than it should be so I should be far more ashamed than I am. If you read it I hope you see through to the humor. At least consider yourself forewarned and please accept my apology for the mess.

White Trash Ch. 4 – Payback's A Bitch

ETA: It's currently a 4.38 on my submissions page, but a 4.17 on the BDSM story list page. ???

 

[Mark_Ilaan]

Let us know when it's posted. Can't wait to watch you trump Mark.

Mols, I love you anyway.

 

[Anna_Malia75]

Woo-hoo!

Now we have us a contest. Jomar's posted his score, Mark; I'll let you tell us whether it's enough to get him the coveted yellow avatar. You boys enjoy it while you can; my story is in the very last draft at this point!

 

[Mark_Ilaan]

Woo-hoo!

Now we have us a contest. Jomar's posted his score, Mark; I'll let you tell us whether it's enough to get him the coveted yellow avatar. You boys enjoy it while you can; my story is in the very last draft at this point!

I've just had my grapes crushed. 4.09.

I must relinquish my hold on the yellow av.